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JAB TAK HAI JAAN

Character sketch:

Geet: 16 yrs old. A topper of her school(st.xavier sr secondary) head of her school house.she is a fun loving and a happy go lucky type girl. She likes to play basketball.


Maan:18 yrs old.Captain of school(st.xavier sr secondary). Well disciplined and loves his family and frends alot. For frendship he can do anythng.


Sameera: Maan's best frend


Aditya: Junior of maan and respect him alot.


Jay: Bad boy of school. he hates maan. he is maan's classmate.

pinky, rashmi, meera and


anjali: geet's bestest frends.

Anvesha:Maan's small sister. Geet's classmate. She is very close to both maan and geet.

Dev: Maan's brother. loves meera alot. But he dont hv courage to tell her about this.

Dadi: she is the bestest dadi in the world according to khurana siblings.

Mohinder and Rano Handa: Geet's parents.

Vikram Handa:Aggresive bt loving. elder brother of geet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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JAB TAK HAI JAAN

PART 1

INTRODUCTION OF GEET

good morning babaji , iknow i know today I woke up late but wat to do today is such a special day babaji ( bechare baba ji is thinking today what happen,still thinking) aree you forgot today I came in ur sweet world ohk I forgive you as it happens sometime but be ready for next time as I will not forgive you , ohkkk!!! (babaji sighed and wondered why always me), hey babaji hawww see now becoz of u I got late its 8 'o clock now and maa will now shout on me that I m careless,lazy and blah blah just becoz of u and now I will not talk to u I m going . huh!! (babaji happy bach gaya and doing bhangra)

geet got freshen up and came downstair she took blessings from maa and bauji went to her big bro for her gift.

Geet: Bhaiyaa batao na mera gift kaha rakha hai

Vikram: tujhe khud doondhna parega

Geet: haw bhaiya aap mujh jaisi pyari aur masoom bachchi se itnaa kaam karweyenge wo bhi uske bday ke din will not talk to u

Vikram : chal zyada nautanki mat kar ye le tera gift

Geet : apple I pad thank you bhai I so much wanted it I lv u bhai

Vikram: me too ab jaa nashta kar aur school jaa aur school se yaad aaya aaj to tera match hai naa

Geet : oh shit bhai I forgot aaj to wo char chudelein meri jaan le lengi I m goin bye and thanks bhai

Vikram: bye and all the best. Pagal.

Rano : are geet ye kya dheere dheere kha beta

Geet : nahi maa I m getting late aaj mera match hai maa

Rano: to itna late kyu kiya jaldi uthna than a aura b breakfast to theek se kar le beta.

Geet : maa baaki batein baad mein riht now im late bye maa and pls wish me gd luck

Rano : as always u will only win baby

Geet : thanku maa

Mohinder : aree itni jaldi mein hamari toofan mail kahaan jaa rahi

Geet: bauji aaj mera match hai bauji

Mohinder: aree wah to phir se ek aur trophy ke liye jagah banana padega

Geet : wish me luck bauji and pray for ur toofan mail

Mohinder :u will only win beta

Geet : bye and thank u bauji

So here is the introduction of geet next part will be on maan

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Edited by taptiarhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for all likes and comments

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lovely update

please continue soon

n pm me


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JAB TAK HAI JAAN

PART 2


A young lad wearing vest and track pant is practicising his tai chi moves.he looks like a greek god with sweat glistened body (aree guess karo ki yeh kaun hai) ,he has completed his morning session and now moves towards his room but bang (uff ye kaun hai) sam sambhalo yaar ye mera ghar tumhara race track nahii joy aha practice kar rahi ho aur waise tum ye practice kar kyoun rahi ho aaj to tumhara racing competition bhi nahi hai.

Sameera(smacked him hardly on arm): very funny dev tell me where is maan I hope I m not late

Dev (rubbing his arm): sorry to say moti u r late bro has already left

Sameera( making o face): haww tu mota hai jaa ke dekh apne aap ko sheeshe mein u elephant

Dev :main elephant toh tu hippo hai

Dev ye kaisa shor hai kaun aaya hai , dadi said coming into living room

Dev: glaring sam kuch nahi dadi ye short oh hoga na baby hippo has came in the house.

Sam: dekha dadii ye kaise mujhe chiddaa ta hai jabki main isse bari hoon

Dev :toh bari hone se dimaag toh nahi bada hua na tumhara

Dadi who was enjoying it now made a stern face and said bas kijiye aap dono kya 4-5 yrs ke bachche ki tarah ladh rahe hai

Dev jaaiye school ke liye taiyaar hokar aaiye neeche hum aapka breakfast par wait kar rahe hain

Dev with long face jii dadii

Sam aaiye beta chaliye bf table pe kuch kha lijiye aap bhi

Sam: jii dadii

At breakfast table

Dadi :aree ye aaj maan nahi dikhe subah se

Nakul : maan sir toh subah hi nikal gaye school ke liye

Dadii: kya toh unhe aapne breakfast karwaya tha ki nahii

Nakul : unhone nashta toh nahi kiya par tiffin le gaye hain

Dadii: pata nahi kuch khayenge ya nahii

Sam: dadii take a chilpill I will take care that he have his tiffin

Dadii :thanku beta for being there for maan

Sam: its allright dadii aur waise bhi who mera best frend hai main khaayal nai rakhungi toh aur kaun rakhega

Dadii smiled

Dev who listened their convo came and said moti tu meri dadii ko kun rula rahi hai sam replied jab tujh jaisa pota toh dadii royenge nahii toh aur kya karenge

Dadii who listened their convo smiled and said aaplogon ko der nahi ho rahi hai kya school nahi jaane ka program hai

Dev and sam literally jumped listening to dadii and ran with their bags saying bye to dadi

Next will be entry of...(socho)

Edited by taptiarhi - 12 years ago
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lovely update

sam dev fight is childish

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thanks for all urs comments and like
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Edited by taptiarhi - 12 years ago
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JABTAK HAI JAAN


PART 3

A 18 yr old boy was running from one end to other, doing one thing or other loking like he was too busy( are yaar ho bhi kyun naa after all he is...)then suddenly he heard like some one fall down behind,without turning back he smirked as he knows she was one of the girls who wants to gain his attention and like always failed miserably . suddenly he heard some one calling him and just as he turned he collided with a pair of innocent hazel brown eyes he don't know how long he stood there looking in those eyes as if drowning in them until and unless he was pushed by that girl who was muttering profanities on him .

Geet cribbed duffer , ullu , gadha , dekh ke nahi chal sakte ho kya he ried to speak something she again stopped him and started jaanti hoon school captain ho aur busy bhi hoge par iska ye matlab nahii ki kisi se bhi ladte bhidte chalo babaji ne do aankhein di hain uska istemaal karo yaar , then suddenly her eyes went on the clock in the school and she screamed (he literally closed his ears) you idiot aaj mera match aur tumhari wajah se mein late ho gayii thora kam baat nahii kar sakte the kya, huh!

He spoke sorry for interrupting ur sweet talks but it was u who was talking not me, and sorry for colliding with u , by the way all the best for ur match.

He left and she again cribbed to her babaji u saw how he talked to me as if it was my fault. And later she moved to green room to get ready for match.

Here as he moved he saw his best frend and his brother coming towards him as usual fighting wih each other .

Sam : dev see maan is standing there

Dev: (comin 2wards maan) morning bro so all set for the sports day function

Maan: yaa dev so sam how come you 2 came together

Sam : it is so becoz I went at ur place to come with u but as u came early so I hv to com with him, by the way today is interschool basketball match and our school is also participating so we should also go there to cheer them

Maan : sam you 2 go I hv lots of works to do

Sam: what's this u never attend these kind of matches yaar but yaar this is our last yr in school so just for the sake of last r come na plsss

Maan : itni nautanki mat kar chal chalta hoon match dekhne ab khush

Sam: bahoot aur haan dadii net ere liye breakfast bheja hai kha le

Maan: thanx yaar bohat bhuk lagi thi

Dev: bro lets go it is getting late

Sam and Maan: chal

next: match and maan again lost☺️



a very happy christmas to all of u and may jesus blesses u with all ur wishes fulfilled

Edited by taptiarhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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geet cribbing was soo sweet

please update longer parts

thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice parts.
Geet's non stop complaint & blabbering r so cute.
Pm for future updates pls...

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