OS AsYa: RESCUE! (part 2)

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hello, hi, Assalam Alaikum guys! 😳😳 i'm a newbie here...😳 i started watching qubool hai 7 days ago and have become a big fan 😃 i couldn't control myself writing this OS afer watching today's episode...it's my First ever OS about AsYa... hope you like like 😳 (i knwo it's not as good but still 😉)


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Akraam: I'm here to complete the "incomplete" work on that day.

Zoya stood up from her chair hearing those words.

Zoya: Sorry aAkraam, I didn't get u

Akraam: huh! Tumhe kyun samajh mein ayegi? What did u think Ms

Zoya faruki? You would say sorry and I'll forgive you? so easily? After

what you have done to me? my family? I can't meet people's eyes

because of your IMMATURE deeds on our nikah.

Zoya: but I'm telling you I wasn't ready for nikah AT ALL! I mean'ok

forget that Akraam'.even I felt uncomfortable at the behaviour of some

of your family members'.they seemed goons to me and they were rude

to me too


Akraam: Lekin Aaj to hamara nikah hokar hi rahegi Ms Zoya Faruki !

Saying that Akraam gestured 2 guys who were seating behind zoya. They

came near zoya and stood either side of her making Zoya nothing but

shock and speechless. she knew she had been trapped.


Akraam: either you come or we MAKE you come with us. You chose

zoya


Zoya never felt so helpless and frightened before. She didn't bring her

paper spray along with her and on top pf that it is a matter of rescuing

herself from 3 GOONS who looked not less than creepy! This was the


first time she thought of having someone who could stand beside her,

who could rescue her


Akraam with a evil smirk: let's go zoya.


Zoya: n'.no! WHAT NONSENSE IS THIS?!


Akraam: Zoya we gave you 2 choices. Either come with us or we will

MAKE you come'.and I'm sure nobody wants force to be implied on

them''you know what I'm talking about.


Zoya widened her eyes in shock. She diodn't know what to do where to

go. But suddenly she saw the other 2 guys who were behind her were

smiling evilly at each other much to her to make an escape. She made

her escape and ran as fast as she could. She ran across the street and

continued wherever her eyes fell.


Akraa: Pakro us ladki ko!


Zoya realized that she has come to a very calm area where no people to

be seen. She suddenly stumbled on a rock and was hurt badly. Her feet

started bleeding.


Zoya: Aahhh! Allah mia!


She was about to get us when a somebody held her hand. she looked

behind to see Akraam and the other two goons with him


Akraa: kaha bhag rahi ho meri jaan?! Nikah ke bina?


He took her hair in his fist and started dragging her all the way to a hut.


Zoya: OUCH! Ahh! let go!


Tears were running down her cheeks. And her head felt like it's

spinning. She almost felt dizzy at Akraam's grip in her hair.


She somehow managed to push him and run again but her feet wouldn't

let her as it was bleeding. Suddenly she a sharp pin pierced her feet make

her stop. It continued bleeding.

The guys ran to her and Akraam was about to slap her when a strong

hand held it. Zoya Closed her eyes in fear when she say Akraam raise his

hand. but it's been long but nothing has happened. She slowly opened

her eyes to see Asad holding Akraams's hand and his face has gone red

as if he would burst right away.


Holding Akraam with his left hand he punched his nose 3 times in one go making it bleed continuously. He punched the one guy and kicked the

other one making them fly down to a tree. Akraam was about to punch

Asad back but her sensed it and held his fist not even seeing it. he turned

and gave him 5-6 punched in the stomach and nose and finally kicked him making him hiss in pain.


All of them were now in the ground. Zoya looked at Asad in tearful eyes.

Not wasting any time , she ran and clammed herself in his chest hugging

him tightly. She hugged him the way as if her life depended on him, as if

he is the only one in the world who could save her from EVERYTHING,

EVERY DAMNED THING!


Asad was shocked at first at her move but erased all of these thoughts.

He cursed himself for letting zoya go alone like that. He cursed himself

for not listening to her not even for once.


He engulfed her in his arms forgetting what they were doing.


Zoya sobbing: Allah mia what's wrong with you?! Aap jante hai hum

kitna daar gaye the? That akraam wanted to complete the nikah. He

threatened me. I felt'.i felt as if'.


Asad stroking her hair: shh. I'm sorry zoya! I never realized that

Akaraam could have done something like that. I'm really sorry.

Zoya hugged him tighter.


After 5 minutes they realized what they were doing and quickly pulled back. There was a awkward silence of 15-25 seconds.


Asad: let's go.


LOL yes i badly want a Asya hug 🤗 hayeee! i hope asad kills that akraam (no didn't mean to KILL him , tab to wo jail chala jaye ga 😆, want him do as much worse condition as he can make of that akraam 😡)

Anyhow, how was it ? please pls pls hit the liek button and comment if u liked it and want me to continue, pls 😃

thank you! 😳


PART 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3355370/os-asya-rescue-part-2


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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loveee this! I was dying for someone to write one on this topic.. when asad would come to her rescue!! Pls pm me and pls update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnjaliSharma

I loveee this! I was dying for someone to write one on this topic.. when asad would come to her rescue!! Pls pm me and pls update soon!




ahahahah! awww! thank you!

im glad you liked it 😳😳😳

and yap i'll continue soon 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS.
I loved it a lot.
I also want ASYA hug...
Plz continue this ff ahead.
You write really well.
Take care!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsum dear
i hope we will get to see their hug
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

Awesome OS.
I loved it a lot.
I also want ASYA hug...
Plz continue this ff ahead.
You write really well.
Take care!




yayyy! thanx a lot buddy! 🤗

yap i'll tryna continue 😃 InshAllah!
Mushfika thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: hifzaa

awsum dear
i hope we will get to see their hug



ikr?! hope that too

and thnx 😳
Mushfika thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lol k 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pls pm me and pls update soon!
nice os yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
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do continue it dear..ix amazing:)

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