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Teju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti
Nahiii, ruko, almost Done

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deepali1022

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

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deepali1022

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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anyaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

(credit for this superbb banner goes to Sobia di 🤗)

Guyzzz I have updated the CS, do check out our very own dear MANEET's pic . ⭐️

Koi ne nee btaya baby Maneet kaishe lage?? Maneet+Choti saddy saddy 😭

SO HERE'S OUR "MANEET"

PART-5

Maan though would have frowned again listening to his new name, but was lost in the little angel infront of his eyes, and just accepted the RED ROSE from Geet's hand... While the moment Maan accepted the Rose, Geet dashed out of the room screaming for everyone to gift them their Roses. Maan kept looking at the red rose and then asked Rano to keep it safely at which she took out one of the thick books and asked Maan to keep the rose securely in it and Maan closed the book, keeping it safely in his drawer... Their first Meet, and First Rose...!!!!!! 😳

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After one hour (Khurana Mansion. Hall)-

The quiet and calm hall of Khurana mansion was converted into a zoo as everyone kept running here and there, someone dashing into one another while the others running in full speed, missing the chairs and small decorative items present in th lavish hall... No one can say looking at the place that it's The hall of THE KHURANA MANSION which is well known across Delhi for it's magnificient interior and royal discipline. All the servants rushing here and there including Rano, while Daadi smartly kept giving them directions for the main culprit who was responsible for this chaos and hide and seek game. Rano was huffing and cursing the person while running here and there... All were running behind Geet, who have yet again escaped as Rano tried to make her ready for steam.

"Uff babaji! yeh ladki ne toh naak me dum kar rakha hai, itnee shakti ati kaha sey hai iss piddhi mei" "Rano! babaji sey shikayat karne se behtarr app humari nanhi shaaitan ko pakadiye" "Maaji, app bhi thodi madat kar dijiye na iss shaitan ko pakadne mei" Rano said with raged breathing, due to their 'running session' "Rano! app kyaa chahti hai k hum, ek buzurg(aged) mahila, waha aake bhaag daud kare? Bechari iss budiya ki toh koi kadr hi nahi" daadi said dramatically while making a lachaar sa face which confused Rano too, who was standing there behind the dining table, but before she could react someone zoomed in front of her eyes, making her gasp and next second she shouted out loud "Geettt" but Geet was long disappeared below the height of the dining table, crawling her way inside there... once completely away from every hand's reach she sat there like a small puppy.
All of them took a sigh of relief thinking that now they can regain their lost breath, but as everyone relaxed a bit, they were yet again proved wrong as Geet again made a dash out of her hide out since Rano tried trapping her, but the next second nobody knew where that squirrel ran and yet again the search started...
Daadi let out a sigh sitting on the nearby chair, cupping her face between her palms, she decided to enjoy the chase silently.

Little maan too was one of the spectators and he sat upon the sofa on his knees, his chest glued to the rest post while his legs resting on the mattress. It was all in one a great fun for him to see such scene in thier mansion, his face moving from one side to the other along with Geet's movements, momentarily observing other's location too, here as Geet was hid beneath the dining table, he peeped a little more ahead for better view, and was trying hard to locate the Toofan inside there unaware that she had already escaped from there towards her next target.

Here Geet after fooling all the servants and her maa, crawled carefully along the foot of sofa, making sure her position was exactly opposite to all others, so that no one could spot her from behind, left or right. Her itching nose was irriating her like hell, her cold was increased much by now, and she was having tough time controling her sneezes so that no one could spot her hearing her sneeze, she was too clever as she kept sneezing soundlessly, and no one could hear it.

While keeping a watch on everyone, her eyes caught the view of one of the 'curious viewer' of her chase and her already irritated mind got further agitated thinking "meli yaha jaan nikali huyi hai, shab shey bachte bachte mei thak gaya hu, aul yeh yaha baithe baithe maze kal laha hai... Ish nangu ki toh meiii" and then she thought for a moment about how to take her badlaa, and after stressing her small brain, finally her bulb went on and she left out a joyfull squeel. After preparing for her mission, she slowly crawled ahead carefully taking care about everyone's position, she reached at the back of sofa, exactly beneath the position of Maan's head and diverted his attention towards her "Oyyee" she whispered just as to it was audible to Maan, and as Maan bent his face down towards the noise, a feather was thrusted in his nose making him sneeze strongly, while devil Geet immediately ran from there before all could catch her but the next second she was held high in air by none other than her Maa, Rano.

"Oyye shaitaan, badi masti soojh rahi hai na, haa?" "Ahhh, maa..a *sneeze* chodo hume, bachaoo bachaoo!!!!... *sneeze*" Geet screamed admist he sneezes throwing her legs in air but who the hell was gonna again invite trouble by helping her as this was the time finally to rejoice after the main culprit was caught. "Geet, ekdum chup abb" Rano said sternly shutting Geet.

But here poor Maan was'nt in good condition after the devil's deed... he was sneezing repeatedly as the feather Geet used had dirt in it, and he was allergic to dirt. The poor baby could'nt understand why alwayzz he? what mistake he did? But kon bataye bechare ko, ke Geet Handa cheez kya hai!

Daadi came there near Maan getting worried for him, while Rano who by now was all ready to go prepare for giving steam to Geet too came there and put geet down on the soofa near Maan.

The little squirrel again tried her last attempt to escape quickly, but Rano was quick enough to hold her. With one last serious glare Rano diverted her attention towards Maan, who seemed serious scared this time from Geet and tried shifting little away from her. But Geet kept pouting and cribbing slowly looking at Rano's hold onto her delicate hands. And then getting defeated she made a grumpy face and sat there, and her attention went towards maan who was being questioned by Rano and Daadi, but he was'nt able to answer them due to those sneezes. "Maan beta, kyaa huya? appki tabyat toh theek hai?" Daadi asked Maan and before he could spill Geet's name out, she acted quick and said to Rano "Maa dekho, inko bhi shardi ho gayi, kitnaa cheek rahe hai, jaldi shey inko bhi jalaa do, nee toh aul tabyatt khalab ho jaegi inki" Geet said with fake concen and a scared Rano and Daadi too agreed with her "Haa Rano, lagtaa hai Geet thik keh rahi hai, dekhiye kitnii kharaab ho gayi Maan ki halat"
Maan panicked listening their talks and tried hard to tell them about Geet's act, and that he was'nt sick but no one gave him chance to speak, and each time Geet would see him trying to speak, she would interrupt in between, further manipulating Rano and daadi's brain...

"Maaji, app yahi rukiye, hum abhi garam paani late hai" Rano said to Daadi, and daadi nodded at Rano, "Haa maa, jaldi chaliye hum galam paani leke atey hai" Geet too said trying to jump off sofa but Rano held her "Oyye, app kahi nahi ja rahi, chup chap sey yahi bethiye steam apko bhi dena baaki hai, aur abb koi nakhre nahi chalenge apke, SAMJHEE?" saying this Rano left towards kitchen leaving both Maan and Geet sneezing behind with Daadi. Here both Maneet would sneeze alternatively, and Geet would now and then glare at maan thinking he was copying her. But before the shaitan could again blast on poor baby, Rano came to the hall carefully bringing large bowl filled with hot steaming water.

She placed the bowl on the table ahead. Geet and Maan kept gaping at the largeee steamy hot water bowl in front of them, getting horrified with the thought of what was gonna happen.
Geet said in trance of shock "Maaa... app hume itnee shaali pani shey jalaoge? Wo bhi aishaa galam galam? Hum chote chote bacche hai maa" she said dramatically trying to convince her by blaickmailing emotionally and Maan's eyes too pleaded to led him go. But daadi interrupted saying "Geet hume pata hai app dono kitnee chote chote bacce hai, aur issiliye hum yeh kar rahe hai, nahi toh humare dono chote chote bache cheenk cheenk (sneeze) kar pareshaan ho jayenge... Issiliye abb koi nakhre nahi, chup chap dono yaha baithiye" she said making them sit in front of the bowl on the sofa but poor maan tried one last chance to convience them "Daadi, mei theek hu, mujhe nahi lena steam, mei beemar nahi hu" he said on the verge of crying,... Rano for once was convinced with what he said and once again thought about his sneezing, but daadi's voice broke her thoughts "Maan bacche, app toh humare bahadur bete hai na, toh zaraa si steam se darr gaye app? Ab koi kuch nahi bolega dono me se... Rano app jaakar towel aur eucalyptus oil le ayiye, Nakul bata dega apko" and withind next minute, evrything was ready, just both the sick babies were required to start their home remedy.

Rano made both the babies bend forward at a safer distance towards the steam bowl. Maan once again pleaded Rano with his eyes but this Geet always succeded in diverting her mind. Geet was still adamant not to move her head near the bowl, and Rano had extremely hard time making her do so after lots of warnings, and once both were done with their positions, Rano covered both of them with a towel.

Inside the towel, as the steam touched their faces,they both could feel a slight burning sensation over their faces. The temperature inside the towel was warmer now, but still not harmful. It felt good for sometime, soothing. But as the pungent odour of the eucalyptus filled in Maan's nostrils it tickled in there uncomfortably, causing tears to roll down due to the intensity...

The ever so clever Geet ma'am closed her nose with her finger and was breathing though mouth thus refusing to take the steam. Maan was gaping at her unbelievinngly inside the towel, thinking what a piece she is... Rano removed the towel for few seconds, allowing them to breath in normal air, and as she did, Geet was caught by her and Rano now forcably held her both hands behind before again covering the both. While Maan filled in as much as air he could.

Thus this time Geet could'nt do anthing so she too had to inhale the steam but since her nose was already blocked due to cold, the odour of oil did'nt affect her. Whereas Maan's haalat was becoming worst, his tears did'nt stop and eyes too started burning due to it. As the torture became unbearable for him, he shoved off the towel and started coughing. Daadi and Rano were shocked looking at Maan's condition, he was coughing badly, while his face filled with tears. Rano immediately wiped his tears while daadi shouted for Nakul to bring some water for maan. Maan, hugged Rano tight while she patted his back and consoled him.

Geet was stunned looking at him as she never thought that her prank could become unbearable for Maan, a sudden guilt started empowering Geet's childish mind as her eyes started moistening slowly.

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PRECAP-

1) Woh hai zaraa, khafa khafa... 😳 and Little Geet manaofy Maanu, in her own way 😎

2) Geet accepts her mistake in front of Rano and Daadi

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phew* finally updated part 5... tried making it as good and readable as possible. Pweasee tell me kaisaa hai. bacche ko niraash na karnaa dosto 😭

But Thanx to all those lovely readers who commented and liked, Ummaahhh love u all. 😃 Abhi sabb batao kaisaa tha update 😃

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Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago

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deepali1022

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

to me...i m first...!!!

yipppeee...!!!!

chotiii...!!!

Koi ne nee btaya baby Maneet kaishe lage?? Maneet+Choti saddy saddy 😭

liar...didn't i told u...dat dey are so cute...n adorabl...!!!

babaaajiii...

yaar ye toofaan mail to badi toofani nikali...

ufff...so much naughtiness...

she is indeed a single piece...!!!

d whole mansion is ast vyast...

our little devil is really dangerous...

"Rano! app kyaa chahti hai k hum, ek buzurg(aged) mahila, waha aake bhaag daud kare? Bechari iss budiya ki toh koi kadr hi nahi"

our evergreen overdramatic dadimaa...

maan is a mute spectator of whole drama...!!!

but but but...dis devil didn't left him too...

awww...poor guy now have to suffer...

really awesum n amazing update...!!!

i really luv'd it...!!!

one request hai...yaar atleast write sum dialogues for maan too...

me really missing his voice...

Edited by deepali1022 - 12 years ago

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deepali1022

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

me bhaging

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Teju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

OMG!! Geet toh bahot badi shaitan hain.. Bechare Maan ko bhi phasa dia apane sath sath.. Dadi bhi jahnse mein aa gayee shaitan ke..😆 Pata nahi aur kitane atyachar karegi nagu pe..🤣 Nice update choti..
woh kya hain na meri exam hain.. sunday ko NET exam toh kal mein IF pe nahi aaungi isliye abhi padh liya.. Now bye & Gn.

Edited by CutieTeju - 12 years ago