bicchdan...part3 pg 4 18/12/ - Page 4

sweet n touching
priya's letters will always bring tears in my eyes...
last part was just superb😛

Very well written, actually am short of words to describe ur writing, Priya's sacrifice and her pain, I can feel her pain, beautifully described, Ram is actually miserable without Priya, they have to and will reunite...continue 👏, this one for u

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Kash ke aisa hota ke ham bhi suraj ke saath doob jate ghane sagar ke pet mein kho jaate na kal ki yaad na kal ki baat bas ek nayi shuruvaat ..koi gam nahi koi shikva nahi nahi koi shikayat..

Apne haaton se likh pate kuch panno ki kismat ..

Kya galti hui mujhse job hi kiya sab dil ke ishare pe unse pyaar unse nafrat , unse dooriyan aur unse najdikiyaan dil ki maani sab bateen..

Out of the world yaar ..I loved the above lines ..Just simply superb

Love you and a big 🤗 for this ..You potrayed very neatly their turmoil ..super cool update ..Loved the ending ...

Thank you so much for the short story ...

this is very good