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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb OS!!!
Loved it!!
Awesome writing!!!
Can't wait to read more of ur work!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Elena..!

Firstly thanks for writing the OS..i love reading all and any of your works!! <3

secondly i second you on the copyright issue's, i know how that feels..!!

coming to the OS.. it was as always amazingly written.. although i did want to see something more between them.. nd a veryyy tiny part of ur magic was missing here, but i still enjoyed it completely... so please don't be apprehensive about it..!! <3 it was truly amazing nd i enjoyed it to bitsss <3 !!

-Luv Pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Little Red Riding Hood & Her Big Bad Wolf! Such an awesome metaphor for the Virat & Manvi in ur story. The song & the story synced too well and baby, ur words are always a treat to read. I felt like I was travelling along the song with the characters! Lovely, Lovely & Lovely!❤️!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it. Had read about Red riding Hood in my classes during childhood, But it was a treat to read how u have used it here with the actions of the characters.Wow, written so well, so beautifully. Loved both of them here. . Loved the whole OS.Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...this was so suggestive and titillating...unbelieavable...loved the reference to the wolf being virat and maanvi being the innocent lovely red riding hood...and despite this loved wen you changed the game and showed that perhaps maanvi was not so sweetly innocent after all...brilliant...this is why i love reading...words hav such power...and wen its someone as awesome as you writing they only lead to be an awesome read...so brilliant stuff...maanvi has always had this image of being pure and innocent while virat exudes this bad boy image despite him being a guy with strong family values...and this came out from your os so well...loved the quotes in the red...
this was a great read...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was good.. I like it thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SUperb Os..! Loved description of Maanvi's appearance n virat's POV on her reaction, smile...simply amazing...thnks for the pm!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Red riding hood!!! Wow that was just too good!!
Loved the way you described virat and maanvi! And the way he got attracted towards maanvi! Awww i want to read it once again!!
Just loved it!! Do write more!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Captain_Pari

Elena..!


Firstly thanks for writing the OS..i love reading all and any of your works!! <3

secondly i second you on the copyright issue's, i know how that feels..!!

coming to the OS.. it was as always amazingly written.. although i did want to see something more between them.. nd a veryyy tiny part of ur magic was missing here, but i still enjoyed it completely... so please don't be apprehensive about it..!! <3 it was truly amazing nd i enjoyed it to bitsss <3 !!

-Luv Pari

Thank you Pari! Of course, please do offer constructive criticism(: yes, I did realize that- not too happy with it- should not be getting up to write at 10am after coming back at 5am: shattered and delusional- Bad plan! 🤢😆
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