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Posted: 12 years ago
Is first love last love?Part 3
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Maan:Why?
Dev:I can't lie to dadima that I don't love Geet.Because i consider her as y own Dadima.
Maan's lips shivered:That means...
D:I love Geet.
Maan was shocked.
Dev smiled:But don't worry Maan.I won't come as a villain and destroy your love story.I will call Dadima now and tell her that you will pass my message ie my reply to her.And you can tell her that I am not interested in Geet.
Maan was numb.
Dev rang up Indira.
Indira was excited:Dev?Did Maan meet you?
D:Yes.He told me everything.
I:And your reply?
D:Maan will tell you that.I cannot say that over the phone.Bye.
Dev disconnected the call.
Indira became dull.
Dev smiled at Maan:Happy?Now there won't be any problem.
Maan did not know how to react.
M:But...you...
D:Forget it Maan.Geet is my first love.I don't know whether someone else will be able to replace her in my mind or not.
M:Then why did'nt you confess your love to her?
D:Because i realized that she does'nt see me the way i see her.For her I am just her best friend.I don't want to hurt her by confessing my feelings.And I am happy that finally she found her soul mate in you.I am happy for both of you.
M:How can you be happy to see Geet with me?
D:Because she is happy with you.And I want her to be always happy.
Dev's words made Maan feel inferior to him.

Maan went to Geet's house.
Indira:Maan...what did Dev say?
Maan hesitated to lie.
Geet smiled:Dev must have said that he is not interested in me.Right?
Maan's lips shivered:Yes.Geet was right.
Geet was happy:I knew it.
I:When Dev showed discomfort in giving a reply to me on the phone itself I felt that his reply would be negative.
M:Ok...I am going.
I:Ok.
Maan went out.Geet followed him.
G:Maan...why are you going so soon?
M:I have to take rest as it's weekend.
She smiled:Oh!Tell me how did Dev react when you told him about the proposal?
Maan was too weak to reply.
G:He must have laughed.Right?
Maan lied:Yes.
Geet giggled:I knew it.

Dev's stage show...
Dev was singing.
'Koi Naa Jaane Kitho Aaye Hai Tu
Sab De Dilon Vich Ho Gayi Kukdakoo
Koi Naa Jaane Kittho Aaye Hai Tu
Sab De Dilon Vich Ho Gayi Kukdakoo

Enna Sona, Enna Cool, Munda Enna Wonderful
Ennu Vekhe Je Kudiya Toh Kehndi
O My God
O My God
O My God


Haan Munda Sab Mein Sab Ton Best
Munda Better Than The Rest
Ennu Vekhe Ke Munde Toh Kehnde
O My God...'(The student of the year).

The viewers were jumping with joy.Accidently two beautiful shining crystal eyes captured Dev's eyes.Due to the crowd and his changing position while performing he lost the view of those lovely eyes.
After the performance,many people stood around him for autograph.He was giving them autograph.Suddenly he saw those crystal eyes again.Then he saw her pink lips.Then her beautiful smile.Then her lovely marble coloured face.
D:Your name?
She was excited:Jeevika.
He wrote:Dear Jeevika...
With love
Your Dev!
Suddenly he thought:Oh!Why did I write 'Your Dev'?Now if i strike it it will look bad.
He gave her the book where he wrote so.
She read his words.Her eyes glowed more seeing 'Your Dev'.
She smiled happily.Her smile was entering his heart and making a permanent mark there.
The crowd increased and she got disappeared.He felt sad.

After few days...
Dev went to the temple.He prayed closing his eyes.He opened his eyes.He was surprised to see Jeevika next to him.She opened her eyes.She was surprised.
J:Devji!What a pleasant surprise.
D:Jeevika.
She was again surprised:How come you remember my name inspite of meeting many people every day?
Dev said in his mind:My eyes see many people.But my heart has seen only you.
D:Your sparkling eyes are so attractive that i could not forget you easily.
She blushed.
D:You stay near by?
J:Yes.
D:Who all are there?
Her face became dull.
She became upset:I have only my nani.I lost my family when I was 6 years old.

He felt sad.
D:Sorry.
J:It's ok.
D:Ok...I have to go now.
J:Bye.Happy to meet you again.
He smiled waving his hands at her.She waved her hands back.




Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
SECOND TIME IN A ROW I AM COMMENTING FIRST

THANK GOD DEV CLEARED THE CONFUSION BUT MAAN FEELING GUILTY BY LIEING TO INDIRA N GEET

NOW THE OTHER LOVE STORY START OF DEV AND JEEVIKA


THANKS FOR PM

Edited by angelic_cute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice udpate
lekin ab kya hoga
maan ko pata hai dev bhi geet se pehle pyaar karta tha
geet bhi dev se pehle pyaar karti thi
nd ab dev jeevika se pyaar karta hai
toh maan kuch galat na kar baithe
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update
pls cont soon
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Continue soon
Eagarly waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmmm...so Maan knows that both Geeta nd Dev loved each other but never confessed and not is burdened byt he truth...
Dev is moving ona nd Geet has moved on with Maan...but I wonder if Maan will be able to accept this after knwoing the truth
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Posted: 12 years ago
new love story!
i really hope maan does not start feeling guilty for the way he behaved when he saw geet wid dev now that he knows that dev also luvs geet n is ready to sacrifice his love coz geet luvs maan..
i hope maan does not start assembling the puzzle like:
geet is dev's first luv
dev is geet's first luv
so wer do i come from?
maan is better wid geet n dev wid jeevika!

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey happy also nad sad also because knowing dev love geet use kitna bura lgega k maan ne juth bola bt isme maanki kya glti he in dono k dil k chakar me wo Q chot khaye unyhe phele he confess kar dena chiye thana
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry yar like button isn't working
Awesome update
Thankgod dev said Maan to say no for geet hope he wont create any mu in future
Jeevika is for dev kya?
Waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago



Maan is feeling inferior...

why ?...because he thinks that Dev is sacrificing his love for him...

stupid...where does he come in between...Dev said that Geet never saw him this way ...he was just good friend of hers and she loves Maan and he is ok with it because there is no mutual love between them...so why Maan feeling inferior...

now to show his superiority is he planning to hand over Geet to Dev...🤣

nice update...

thanx for pm...


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