Next ArHi FF: Make The Choice...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Everyone

I love writing but as for now, I'm not able to continue my current FF due to my busy schedule
(interns till end of Feb+ exam) BUT
I couldn't stop my mind
*Cough*
I have 3 ideas which can turn in 3 FanFiction.😳
However, I don't know what to start first when I'll come back as a writer.
So asking, your help ji.
Below, I'm going to post the teaser of each idea/FF
and you have to pick up your fav. one ji
PS: Once back, I'll give priority to my current FF on Arhi "A Dark Love Story"
Take care
Parm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2

Title: Wish Upon A Star

Teaser

"Arnav Arnav" cried the girl, her face covered with tears, while waving to the boy.
"Khushi! I beg you, Khushi, do not leave me! Do not leave me here! "

He shouted, chasing the man who was taking her best friend. He began to run along the corridors, but suddenly a door opened and was grabbed by the arm.
"Stop crying, kid. Now go back inside and don't care about that witch." Said his father, if he could call him that.
" Do not you dare talk about her like that! Not even pronounce hername in my presence! " He cried back, and then get rid of close and rush down the stairs, taking the steps two at a time. In the distance there was still the cries of the girl. They could not, could not take heraway! Just arrived in the lobby, he saw that they were loading her, almost by force, in a car and she, her Khushi, kept crying and squirming.

Perhaps if he moved fast, he was still time to get her out of there, but while he ran to the gate, he tripped over a brick broken and fell to the ground, hitting his head and losing consciousness for a few moments. When he was able to refocus, the car was gone, but he could not give up, he would not give up. His legs moved, but, unfortunately, when he arrived in the street, he found it deserted.
It was too late.
With difficulty, he dragged himself back inside and then to the top floor of this huge and ugly barracks, where both lived. When he arrived at the corridor, he saw that the door of the house of the girl was still there, the TV on, with the volume up, and her parents had not even noticed that social workers took her away.
He came up to '"apartment" after her, and opened the door with a kick. As he walked to his room, he heard screams coming from a room, probably the animal was again beating his mother, but that day he had not the strength to stop him, not today. Once in his room, he closed the door and went to take refuge in their corner, the one where he and Khushi, huddled hugged to try to escape the realities around them. They were able to open a gap in the wall, that was plasterboard, and to link their rooms, so in order to be always together. But that night, he could not find peace even there.

He raised his eyes to heaven: it was overshadowed by lamplight and you could not even see the moon. Suddenly, a shooting star across the sky and he could not resist the urge to make a wish.

He asked that he want back his heart, want back his Khushi. He slumped exhausted against the wall and began to cry silently.
He was twelve years old and he had no desire to live.
Edited by DUGGUlicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3

Title: In Your Eyes, I am

Teaser:
Arnav POV
"Get out of here or I swear I'll scream." She turns to the other side and I can only please her, perhaps at this moment is what she needs.
"As you wish. "
I caresses her hair and I walk away, arrived at the door hoping that she turn me to stop me, or at least that she look at me, instead I see her back going up and down, shaken by sobs silent, and that vision grips my heart.
When I shut the bedroom door behind me, I understand that the veil has fallen upon us and has become a thick blanket of darkness.
***
Khushi POV
"As you wish"

That sentence made me cry even harder, because the Arnav I married would never abandon the battle so soon, he'd break down the veil that has fallen upon us just to hold me in his arms and let me talk to him.

But now I was alone, completely alone.
Edited by DUGGUlicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4

Title: With Love...Heer

Teaser:
I grabbed a lined notebook from my bag and tore some sheets by half. I ran outdoors and resumed my previous position, myheart pounding madman in the chest.I chewed the pen. What to write? Something great to start? My address? A story?
Mmm ... no. It w
ould not make sense to write anything that was not the truth. Because how many chances were seriously that somebody read the letter. It's more likely the letter is destroyed, wedged between rocks or networks of a few fishermen and thrown in the trash. Virtually nobody will read it ... I could be honest. I could be myself, perhaps for the first time really.
I put my pen to paper and started.
"Dear Ranjha..."
Edited by DUGGUlicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow 😳 so sweet of you dearšŸ¤—.

Yep fine😊 how about u ?
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You know what u made a Big Mistake šŸ˜† I really love the way you write the story Now posting 3 new story Teaser & asking me to pick one its very difficult
I wish You must get enough time so That i can read All the 3 ffšŸ˜‰
1 very Nice😳
3rd very Interesting & different😳
Edited by siva2901 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Siva, edit all the spot...How is you?šŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
cant decide...but i liked the first one more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start I can't wait to read how the story will unravel ! And I seriously miss a dark love story so much can't wait till February :/
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woww... i want all of them as ff... take your time but i want them... loved ur writing...šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
YOU ARE CRAZY DI SERIOUSLY :D.. you have exams and write 3 more teasers.. i just loove how you have the passion for writing :))..

soo all the three teasers are amaazin.. but i cant choose btw the first and the last one.. both are idk.. damn amaazin concept, what i really like..

I WILL CHOOSE TEASER 1.. but its damn hard.. cant you start both :DD.. the first and the last one.. cause the last one is soo unique.. but GOSH.. i cant choose..

NO I CHOOSE BOTH PAKKA.. i have no idea what i want..

They were able to open a gap in the wall, that was plasterboard, and to link their rooms, so in order to be always together.


this reminded me of PF :))).. because arohi and arjuns doors where also linked up :)).. gosh i miss it soo much



so i am for the teasers 1&3 :)


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