Arhi ff: JAMK *CONTINUED Pg 36 *UPDATED|23/03|* - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Hi
Read the first two chapters and already fell in love with it. Keep up the good work friend. I apologise for a late review but lemme finish the rest and digest and i promise to get back with a detailed one.
Thanks for pm ing me
All the very best! you are one heck of a talented writer
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
~Chapter 4- Khushi: "Don't Angry Me!"~

Hello Hi my readers; after such a long time!!!

First of all I am veryyy sorry!!! (I know I am always sorry! ) I know, this time was the limit of being late!!! Sorry Sorry Sorry!!!!


Please forgive me!!!!!!

I have got of about 5-10 PMs telling me if I don't update soon I'll be bathed with rotten eggs, tomatoes, and chappals!

Forgive me! And just chill! I'll try to update as fast as I can!

Before, I start getting chappals, let me start thanking you all for liking and commenting on my work!!!!

Ohhh Emmm Geee!!!!!!! 22 likes and 6 pages of comments!!!!


*Faints* *Jumps* *Does Barun's Bhangra Dance* *Thanks Devi Maiyya* *Starts dreaming *

A big thank you to all of you:

Deepa311, jazz.kaur, my-love, mnprtkaur, neevankrish, PyaariGia, Eccentrica, fan123GUNJ, Vibzar0, b3ggirl, ASRandKKGSRFan, bluelove97, my1stlovearnav, -Siaa-, Devilish.Angel, _disha_, priyanki, Jaan_Arshi, GAURI29, arshy4ever, fffan123, Priya025,

Please Keep liking and commenting!!!!

@Eccentrica: Chaitalee di, Finally, update kiya na!! Loved your Fan fiction!!! Ab tu bhi jaldi se update kar le!!! Kal ka update nahi chalega! Itni short update thi!!! Nahi! Mujhe big update chahiye *Puppy Face* And the hyperlink worked!!!! Thank you!!!!!!
Tumhein to pata hai na ki maine update kyun nahi kiya!!! ( Keep it as a secret!!! And to Those who want the link of her new ff:

It's meant to be...eventually

(P.S Please press the like button and comment too! We feel encouraged by your response! Please support us! )

{ On my ff too, press the like button huh! }

Well, I am sure you must be thinking, First this Rhea gives a late update and on top of this she starts with her never-ending blah blah!!!!!!

In fact don't bash me up left right centre after this update!! It is the crappiest of craps!!! And I know it!!! So have a nice reading!! And just chill! Don't bash me up after reading it!!! Enjoy your reading!!!!!

Here it goes:

"Ok Lavy! Stop now! I admit he's nice, handsome cute and everything!!! But I don't think it's the right time for all these things now! And anyway! I've got the bestest friend in the universe here! What should I need more??"

"Khushi! You know really well how to slip away from awkward situations! Well, I am flattered here!!!! Well, well, well, let's go to our class now!"

"You mean let's rush to our class now! Ok then!"

"Khushi!!!!"

"Uhhmm! Okay! Let's go!"

"Excuse me?" a girl shouted as both Lavanya and Khushi were making their way to their class.

"Yes, did you call us?" both Lavanya and Khushi answered in unity.

"Excuse me? May I know what you were doing a few minutes before, BEHIND MY BACK?" the girl fumed.

"Sorry, I didn't get you?" Khushi looked at her with dazzled eyes.

"Don't act innocent! I am asking you something calmly, just simply reply me BACK! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU WERE DOING? DO YOU EVEN KNOW YOUR STATUS?"

"Uhhhmmm'. Looks she's looking for trouble! Well, what can I do Devi Maiyya! She's entering the lion's den herself! Challo Khushi, we'll deal with her in the Khushi Kumari Gupta way!" Khushi was thinking with a mischievous smile on her face as she winked towards Lavanya.

Lavanya seemed to have understood her gesture and asked with questioning eyes: "Yeah BHPK what were we just doing now?"

"Euuurrrhhhmmm'.. We were walking on the grass; any problem? Oh! Ooops! Sorry! I am so sorry! I didn't know that we were forbidden to walk on the grass! You know, we are new here; so you see? Sorry huh! We're moving away from here now itself! And by the way, I am Khushi and she is Lavanya! Nice to meet you! Come on Lavy! Let's go!"

"EXCUSE ME? Look, your innocence is NOT going to work with me! Do you think by trying to SEDUCE MY BOYFRIEND WITH YOUR SO CALLED NAIVENESS AND ANTICS, YOU'LL BE ABLE TO SNATCH HIM AWAY FROM ME? NEVER!!!! NO ONE DARES TO MESS WITH SHEETAL!! DO YOU GET THAT?" a fuming Sheetal said while glaring at Khushi.

"Uhmmm Sheetal, What boyfriend? Which boyfriend? From where's boyfriend? Look Miss Sheetal, we don't know any boyfriend of yours; in fact we don't even know anyone in this university! We are new here! So, I think you are mistaking us for somebody else! We have to rush now! We are getting late! Please excuse us!" Lavanya shot out!

"WAIT! So you PRETEND not to know anything huh? Let me tell you when your so called friend here; Miss Whatever'."

"It's Khushi! I love when people call me by my name and not by adjectives; I know I am very wonderful, that you have to use adjectives to describe me but, I love staying humble, so please, you can call me Khushi; don't even add Miss to it!! You know!!" Khushi said with a broad smile on her face.

"THAT'S IT KHUSHI! FIRST OF ALL YOU WERE BUSY FLIRTING WITH MY BOYFRIEND IN HIS ARMS AND I THINK IF YOUR FRIEND WOULDN'T HAVE CALLED YOU, YOU WOULD HAVE ENDED BY KISSING HIM! THANK YOU LAVA I DON'T KNOW WHAT FOR BEING JEALOUS ON SEEING THEM TOGETHER AND TO END UP STOPPING THEM FROM DOING ANYTHING MORE!!!!!!!!! I KNOW YOU TOO MUST HAVE BEEN DYING TO BE IN HIS ARMS!"

"Oh! You are talking about that!! First of all, sorry Sheetal! I can understand what you must be going through on seeing your boyfriend with someone else, but I tripped and was about to fall when your'uhmm' he saved me from falling! That's it! Nothing more! I told him thank you and he went away! Just chill Sheetal! Keep calm! Are you okay?"

"Oh! So you have already thought of an excuse! I must say, you are a fabulous actor apart from being a boyfriend-stealer! So, you are new here? I see! What the heck have you dressed up in? Blue top! Yucks! Blue sucks! Do you even have an idea of how horrible you are looking in this! Ewww! Go for a change! And you were thinking MY Arnav would fall for you??? You must be dreaming dear!! And your friend here? Wearing mini dress huh? I must say, you were fully prepared to hit on Arnav; with your legs and cleavage exposed?? I must congratulate both of you! But actually'.. Why the hell are you smiling Lavanya???"

"You know! It's so sad! You claim that Arnav is YOUR boyfriend and you share such horrible taste! It's a pity!! For your kind information, Arnav has praised Khushi in her blue top! If you were observing us so much to know that she was SUPPOSEDLY seducing him et cetera, you must have noticed how he loved her blue top? Didn't you see? Ohh!! So sorry again!" Lavanya said while smirking.

"You; I'll deal with you later. First of all let me see this'."

"What did he tell you Khushi? Oh yes! I remember!! He told you that you were looking SEXY in blue right? How sweet!" Lavanya interrupted her!

That was enough to bring Sheetal's anger at the point of exploding!!!

"Cut that off you bloody b****!"

SNAP SNAP

She didn't realize when she found two hands falling on her cheeks. It felt like 100 needled pierced on her cheeks! The pain that the person felt was visible by the slaps'

"Who are you to slap me? And how dare you slap me?"

"My hands are with me and I can do whatever I want!" Khushi retorted back with anger flaring up in her eyes.

"But these are my cheeks you b****"

"ENOUGH! NO ONE DARES TO TELL ANYTHING TO MY BEST FRIEND! NO ONE I SAY! NO ONE APART FROM ME! AND YOU CAN NEVER BE ME MISS SHIT-AL! DO YOU GET THAT? AND WHAT RIGHTS DO YOU HAVE TO ACCUSE US OF SOMETHING AS FILTHY AS THAT? SINCE THE START, YOU HAVE BEEN TELLING MY BOYFRIEND! MY BOYFRIEND! YES YOUR BOYFRIEND! BUT WHAT YOUR BOYFRIEND?? IF YOU CAN'T LET HIM TO BE AWAY FROM YOU FOR EVEN I MINUTE, TIE HIM TO A LEASH AND KEEPING TAKING HIM EVERYWHERE YOU WANT AS YOUR DOG; HE'LL KEEP BARKING, AND NOT TO MENTION HE'LL BE FAITHFUL TO YOU; HAVEN'T YOU HEARD THAT DOGS ARE THE MOST FAITHFUL CREATURES ON EARTH? SO MISS SHI-TAL, KEEP THAT IN MIND; I HAVE ALREADY TOLD YOU AND I AM TELLING YOU ONCE AGAIN, ARNAV OR SHOULD I SAY YOUR BOYFRIEND SAVED ME FROM FALLING AND I TOLD HIM THANK YOU AND BYE! NOTHING MORE! DO YOU GET THAT NOW? AND IF NOT PLEASE GET YOURSELF TREATED BY A PSYCHIATRIST, YOU REALLY NEED HELP. CAN YOU PLEASE EXCUSE US NOW? WE HAVE A LECTURE TO ATTEND APART FROM ANSWERING TO YOUR STUPID "MY BOYFRIEND QUESTIONS" THANK YOU AND BYE!" Khushi pounced on her with anger boiling within her each time she said a word and instantly dragging Lavanya with her.

"How dare you Khushi? No one has ever talked to Sheetal like this!! You treated me like a piece of shit! You will pay for this Khushi, Oh you will! I promise you that; you will pay for the slap and for this humiliating encounter too. I had told you NO ONE MESSES WITH SHEETAL! You'll get that on your FACE now! Too bad'" Sheetal said to herself with an evil smile on her face.

Precap:

"Nk here! What happened to her?"

"Oh! Nothing! Nothing at all! She's just like this!"

"Khushi?? Hello??"

"JUST GO AND KEEP BARKING BEHIND THAT SHEETAL ARNAV! JUST GO!"

"Whoaaa Khushi? Hello?"

***************

So, how was the update? Good or bad? I know, there was no ArHi in it!!! And in the next 3-4 chapters too, there will not be too much of ArHi!!!


Please, I know many of you feel like

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I know!!!! Please spare me!!!

You might even hate Arnav in the next updates!!

But I promise! After that, you'll have 10-15 chapters dedicated to ArHi and Rabba ves!!!!!!

Till then, Don't forget to press the like button and leave your feedback about the update (How it was? Did you like it? Or am I starting to give bad updates now??)and If you are comfortable with this track!

P.S: Please Buddy me for PMs, It is easier!!

P.P.S: I have been thinking of changing the name of this Fan Fic to "Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Arnav"... Should I change it or it's okay? Please leave your views!

P.P.P.S: If you don't like my "blah blah's" before the update, please tell me! I'll avoid it!

Love,

Rhea


Edited by _RheeluvsBarun_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
The slap given to sheetal was awesome and how Khushi showed her place was just very good
I wonder what sheetal is upto and till the next update I will keep thinking about her plan and why people will hate Arnav . I guess sheetal will complain about Khushi to Arnav or maybe something else.
Continue soon
:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: fan123GUNJ

The slap given to sheetal was awesome and how Khushi showed her place was just very good
I wonder what sheetal is upto and till the next update I will keep thinking about her plan and why people will hate Arnav . I guess sheetal will complain about Khushi to Arnav or maybe something else.
Continue soon
:-)


Thank you!! Btw, sheetal deserved it!! She spoke ill of Lavanya! And all those who humiliate Lavanya will have to face Khushi!!! After all she's her best friend!!! 😆😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
oops tat was indeed a very spicy update!!!!kushi s behavin like a angry kitten!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Lovely update...
Love Khushi and lavanya friendship..loved the SLAP..sheetal deserved it..
But with precap you always leave us on cliff hanger 😭
Update soon plzz 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: b3ggirl

Lovely update...
Love Khushi and lavanya friendship..loved the SLAP..sheetal deserved it..
But with precap you always leave us on cliff hanger 😭
Update soon plzz 😳



From now I'll not promise anything about updates!!! I always say maybe I'll update tomorrow, etc... but I end up without updating!!!😳 I'll try my best to update soon as from now on!!!😃 But, I don't know exactly when!!😆
For the precap, you'll discover it soon!!! Be patient!😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: neevankrish

oops tat was indeed a very spicy update!!!!kushi s behavin like a angry kitten!!!!!!!


Thanks! Yeah Khushi!!!!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Thanks a lot!!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok...first things first.
Rhea ..you are a doll 😃 It feels so good when you post the link for my FF...thanks a lot🤗
Secondly...you're hyperlink is working...party!!!🥳
Also, I like this Khushi...aisi friend har kisi ko mile😊

I agree...Sheetal's a b***h, but if she's going to play cupid for Arshi...then I'm sure we can all bear her.
As far as the lack of Arshi scenes, I hope those updates are posted quickly so that I can get back to drooling on Rabba ves.😳

About my FF, it hurts that I'm getting less likes and comments😭 but I'm staying strong and hoping that things will eventually get better🤔

My update will come tomorrow (Don't throw chappal on me) Actually, I'm going to be busy towards the end of December, hence I'm creating a bank of episodes and updating every alternate day.
As for my last update...I had warned you😳 it won't be very interesting.

But if you don't salivate over my next update, main apna naam badal doongi (Secretly wishing that you like my next update)😆
Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago

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