OS:: Ashes and Stars :: ArHi - Page 8

I want more, more ,more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was remarkably well written!

*waves* OS # 2 Comment #2 Time 23:59.

I have already commented on this? :O oh no! I actually don't like my previous comment so I am going to write another one, why you may ask? because the first comment does not to this splendid pice of work the justic it should! yes thats right m'lady justice.

What strong words you have used in this, marvelous, actually beautiful. The description of KHushis defiance was so aptly amazing if only they showed a Khushi like this *stuffs food into kmouth* but this did make up for all the times she forgave and forgot! I look forward to the rest of the OS's I shall go through :D

-Aashifa.

👏 You really have a way with words, keep it up dear!!!