How I missed the Fri-29 Sept episode?

realitybites thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 18 years ago
#1
How I missed the Fri-29 Sept episode-a work of fiction inspired from reality.

It was a cool sept night in New Delhi and the traffic was still pretty high owing to festive season. Two men on a mission speeding on motorbike turned towards a desolate area. Aware of the fact that the police patrolling is limited to main roads hence this was a safe bet. They parked aside to look around. It was residential area with many blocks of houses. It was an interjection to two areas. Since the weather had changed not many people were out in the roads. Some people were either watching TV in the comfort of homes or playing dandiya or gorging on delicacies in restaurant. One man got down and quietly looked around to check for passerby. He signaled to the other and both knew they can go ahead. The bike driver carried on his vigil and the rider took out something from his jacket. There are lot of trees, plants & shrubbery all over as Delhi is amongst the green capitals of the world. They selected a big tree and the rider climbed up with panache as if he justifying the evolution from primates. From a firm branch with his legs dangling on each side he delicately balanced himself and put his hand through the thick vegetation & grasped hold of it. In a swift manner he pressed the plyer to cut it apart and let loose the two ends whooshing to & fro just like a girl on the swing. In that pivotal moment everything came to a standstill the delightful and blissful time of entertainment to star cable operator customers was disrupted. The mission successful both men happily drove off. The buzzing world of Saat Phere woven with nobility of Saloni, devoted Nahar, Kaveri's sarees and conniving Urvashi was sorely missed. But it did set off the telephone ringing incessantly at the cable wala's office. It was all due to animosity & ravenousness on part of the cable operators. Somewhere trying to remind us that the game is still on. So come Monday the Game starts at prime time.

The story has been build by me but the inspiration is true. The cable wire was cut around 0910pm and the connection restored Saturday noon. Please give me your views about the story. Also not sure whether coming week the cable connection will be on since its at the mercy of the rivalry again.

Do post your thoughts 😳

Edited by realitybites - 18 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

14

Views

1.1k

Users

7

Frequent Posters

Dhruvie thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#2
whoaaa!!! 👏
your a great writer I must say...
i'm still in a awe...I wish you could write my essays for me...lol 😛
realitybites thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 18 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: Dhruvie

whoaaa!!! 👏
your a great writer I must say...
i'm still in a awe...I wish you could write my essays for me...lol 😛



Thanks for the compliment Dhruvie 😳 . In school even I dreaded the essays 😆. Actually the topics are insipid and pale😉.
CarulinaTina thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 18 years ago
#4
Wonderful story writing 👏 , I must say. What description and details! For a minute there i thought i was in delhi. Great job! 👏 👏
Dhruvie thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: realitybites



Thanks for the compliment Dhruvie 😳 . In school even I dreaded the essays 😆. Actually the topics are insipid and pale😉.

Your Welcome 😛..hehhe...

I know huh these essays are such a pain...they are so boring and long...Yes i agree the topics are really torturing and dull...😆

you know you write like a famous author "Rohinton Mistry"...He makes you a part of the book..you actually think your a character from the book...

if your fond of reading then i suggest you read his books...try: "A Fine Balance"...

its just so realistic...

lol anyway back to topic....greattttt job....😊

Edited by Dhruvie - 18 years ago
wednesday thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#6
hey that was a really creative piece!
ramas thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 18 years ago
#7
Hi Lavanaya for a moment I thought you are starting a fan fic or something. You have a way with words. Very creative. I thought I am reading some story. Till I reach cable wala wars. WOW!! that's all would say dear
.
realitybites thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 18 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: mamis

Wonderful story writing 👏 , I must say. What description and details! For a minute there i thought i was in delhi. Great job! 👏 👏


Wow thats a Great compliment 😳 Thanks Mamis. Do you belong to Delhi?
realitybites thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 18 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: Dhruvie



Your Welcome 😛..hehhe...


I know huh these essays are such a pain...they are so boring and long...Yes i agree the topics are really torturing and dull...😆


you know youwrite likea famous author "Rohinton Mistry"...He makes you a part of the book..you actually think your a character from the book...


if your fond of reading then i suggest you read his books...try: "A Fine Balance"...


its just so realistic...


lol anyway back to topic....greattttt job....😊



Dhruvie thats the best compliment I got! 😳 😳 Thanks a lot. I have not read Rohinton Mistry but now wld surely try to get his book A Fine Balance. It sounds interesting.I wld read it and share my views. 😛 Thanks again Dear.
Edited by realitybites - 18 years ago
realitybites thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 18 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: wednesday

hey that was a really creative piece!


Thank you so much Dear. 😳

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".