MADHUBALA!! My version from todays episode. Prt 1

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Hello everyone. Have been watching Madhubala for a while now and love the chemistry between the RK and Madhu. Reminds me of those Harlequin romance stories. So I decided to write my own version of the continuation of Madhubala starting from the end of today's episode. I don't know how to add parts to it so will just post a new topic. So here we go...

RK asks Madhu to leave everything and go away with him and Madhu hesitates and looks into RK's eyes. She looks at RK's hand that is waiting to take her hand. She remembers her promise to Radhaji and Trishna's words about being the cause of their family rift. She then remembers RK telling her about how he lost the people he loved. She looks into RK's eyes and sees failure and regret as he is pulling his hand away. She looks at his hand again and pulls it and puts her hand into his. He looks at her shocked and tears gather in his eyes. He remembers what Deepali said and what he had replied.
He then smiles and madhu asks him why he is smiling. He says, "just like that. I am learning from you, because you smile for no reason." She then looks at him seriously and says, "How much do you love me?" He looks confused and replied, "A lot". She says, "what can you do for me?" He says, "anything." She looks at him and asks, "anything?" He nods. She says, "ok, then before we leave, I want you to do two things for me. First we go say good bye to my parents and apologize for everything we did and second, we go to RK mansion and you apologize and make up with your mom. Can you do that for me?" He looks at her upset.
He doesn't reply and walks away and stands by his dad's arm chair. She comes to him and touches his shoulder. He shrugs it off and moves away by the window. She waits and gives him time and he turns to her and says, "fine, if that's what you want." She smiles and runs to him but steps on the glass and screams. He runs to her and catches her and places her by the fire and looks at her foot. He is still upset with her for asking him to apologize to his mom. He lashes out at her saying, "you can't look and walk. You walk with your eyes looking up and not down so you cant see what you are stepping into. Did i not warn you there was glass?" She just smiles. He gets upset and asks her why she is smiling when he is so upset. She says just like that. He then looks at her dupatta and snatches it and rips a piece. She looks shocked and surprised. He ties her foot and helps her stand up.
He then says, "let's go get this drama on the road. Scene one at your Malik's house and scene two at my house." They get in the car and he is still upset and not talking because he realized that he never expected her to issue the question of how much he loves her. He thought it would just be him. He then realized that Madhu is just like him and she fights with him for everything and is very unpredictable which is why he loves her so ofcourse she would fight him here too. He then smiles and looks at Madhu. They reach the chawl and he tells her to go and say good bye and she asks him is he coming. He replies that he will come in a little bit.
She goes into the house and Trishna sees her and says, "wow!! Mrs. Madhubala Rishabh Kundra graces us with her presence, twice in one day. I wonder what she wants from us now." Padmini comes out and tells Trishna to shut up. Malik comes out when he hears Madhu outside. Trishna does not shut up and continues, "so why are you here Madhubala Rishabh Kundra? To break more relationships since you have already broken my mom and dad's relationship. Yours and my relationship and my relationship with both my mom and dad. So what else is left?" Madhu goes to her sister and says, "i am not here to break anyone's relationship, but am here to forgive Malik for what he did. That way mom will forgive him and get back and you all will be happy."
RK is standing outside listening. Madhu goes to Malik and says, "this wife now forgives you for what you did. She understands why you did that and wants you all to be together." Malik hugs her and Trishna comes and pushes Madhu and says, "wow!! so you come in here like a queen and dictate that you have forgiven everyone and it should all be ok. Is it a switch that you turn on and off? What about all these days of hell that they have been going thru because of you?" RK is outside very upset at hearing this and his hand forms into a fist. Padmini and Malik tell her to shut up and Trishna tells Madhu to get out. Madhu cries and says she is going and most probably forever and just wants to hug her for one last time. Her mom and dad look at her and ask her what is she saying and she says nothing. Trishna turns to her and says get out and pushes her towards the door and at that point RK comes to save his wife and catches her. He looks at her and sees the distress in her eyes. He then says to her, "biwi what is this? Seems like everyone wants to kick you out of the house. First Deepali and now your sister. "
He looks at Malik and says, "namaste Sasurji and namaste Sasumaa. I will now take my wife and leave since she is not wanted here." He looks at Trishna angrily and wants to say something but Madhu holds on to his hand and squeezes it signalling him not to say anything. They walk out and Madhu is crying and RK looks at her and his heart is breaking seeing her so sad and distressed. He opens the door for her and she sits and he does her seatbelt. He drives home. When they reach RK mansion he looks at her and calls her name but she does not reply. He comes around and pulls her out of the car and she looks at him and he says, "Madhu we are not going anywhere. Don't cry please. We will stay here and sort all this out." She looks confused and he says, "I did not really mean that we would go away. I was just practicing my scene for my movie and wanted to see what you would do." Madhu's sad and distressed face turns into anger. RK thinks to himself, "that is what I wanted to see. The angry face. I love your angry face and I dont care if you are mad at me because I cannot see you so helpless and sad and crying. My heart breaks seeing you like that." Madhu says, "This is all a joke to you, isnt it? I cannot believe you did that". RK says to himself, "that I rather have her like a lioness then the broken and lonely mouse." She shrugs off his hands and walks away upstairs. RK tries to talk to Madhu but she gives him the silent treatment all the way up. When they enter the house and RK tells Madhu, "can you please look at me and I will explain why I did that." Madhu says she does not want to hear anything and walks up to their room. Deepali comes out and sees this drama and is wondering what happened.




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Posted: 12 years ago
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it would be much better if it happend this way. thanks.will you continue it?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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haha LOVE! would have made us feel way better if this happened! 👏
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Originally posted by: afghangirl

it would be much better if it happend this way. thanks.will you continue it?

yeah will continue it until i see RK and Madhu back . Atleast this way I will have them together in fantasy.. LOL

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