Arshi's Bedtime Story - Hiatus

Originally posted by: ranjha_arnav

Are you sure you are writing for the first time...?😲

Its just awesome, dear. I really liked your concept. Something totally different from others.

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Arnav being a doctor😳, and Khushi NGO... WOW...! They are a perfect family now.

Many questions, of course, about Sala in particular. If they are happily married for three years, how come a 3-year-old daughter...? But, I will wait for my doubts. It may be cleared as the story progresses...

About the character sketch, need not to worry. Each story differs in its content and the content is the only component that demand a character sketch. So, just follow the flow, and everything will fall into pieces...

Do continue soon...

Originally posted by: karmachameleon

Thanks for the PM.

I read it...

It's interesting...

Like how Arnav is a doctor and Khushi is independent...

Two lovely kids...

If I am not mistaken - you had mentioned in the beginning that this story will have flashbacks??

Flashbacks are my personal favorite!!

I like your writing...it's simple, it's practical, it's clear...

Keep up the good work...

-KC

Originally posted by: jjsof

thanku KC...

yeah its full of FB.. like khushi narrating the story :)

Originally posted by: harshdb

hey.. how are you? the story is good. pls do check spellings and grammar before posting it. other than that the part is nice. its a good start. lol.. u named the boy as Harshit?? my daughter name is Harshita..😉 i love the sentence harshit is in mothers care. its fun to read that kind. continue soon.