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My new poem for 14th dec episode ...

Aditya ki duvidha
(Aditya's POV)



Kyun na Samje meri baat pankhuri ,
Kyun muje deti hai itni Chinta woh,
Kyun na Jane meri pareshani,

Ek taraf na Milne ka wada,
Baat Bhi nahi kar sakta uski vyatha,
Kitna Hun pareshan main uske liye,
Par kyun na Samje woh mere liye???

Uska Faisla kar raha hai vyatit muje,
Uski Chinta main gamgin muje,
Aise kaise chodun akela usko main,
Sare samaj ke samne kaise hone dun bebas,

Main Sath dunga tumhara pankhuri ,
Aapne wade ka maan bhi rakhunga,
Phir Bhi khamoshi se banunga,
Tumhara saccha hamsafar..

Tumhara Adi...




Pic credit : f.s.m.
Thank u 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: debaparna77

Good poem Bhavita 😃



Thanks sweety 😳 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waah waah...👍🏼
Udhar bhi likho na..😒
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: busybee..



Thanks sweety 😳 😛


KTLK forum pe jao n poem likhho 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rabzonedge


</div>waah waah...👍🏼<div>Udhar bhi likho na..😒




Thanks diva 😳
🤗

N ktlk dekhna chod diya hai:(((
Toh abhi agar kuch non serial related likhungi toh vahan share karungi:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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UPDATED: BB...🤗 Todays Epic was realy get Fit in ur Poem. Again, ur words Described how Adi was Restless for Pankhu. PaYa are realy having a fresh chemistry! With new twists n turns! Dis serial is Rocking! Regards.
Edited by DevvivekAshNI - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: debaparna77



KTLK forum pe jao n poem likhho😡



😭 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Welcome Divya di & Deba di to our PKDH Family! U r in PaYa land..!(Pankhuri-AditYa)
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Originally posted by: DevvivekAshNI

UPDATED: BB...🤗 Todays Epic was realy get Fit in ur Poem. Again, ur words Described how Adi was Restless for Pankhu. PaYa are realy having a fresh chemistry! With new twists n turns! Dis serial is Rocking! Regards.



Thank u so much dev 😃
Glad u liked it 😊
N Complitely agree with u about paya chemistry 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: busybee..



Thank u so much dev 😃
Glad u liked it 😊
N Complitely agree with u about paya chemistry 👍🏼

my pleasure BB . Yup! U have to agree becoz here most of the time we critisize Pankhuri for her improving Acting Skills

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