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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello PKD'ians,
I am back with another poem! Hahaha yeah its been a while well I just wanted to write something so I went for this poem! It is linked to the seperation, I am not enjoying the negative and sad scenes but they are needed for the storyline to progress as they say "Kabh Khushi Kabhi Gham" Hope you enjoy this one!
There are no bars to our embrace,
No presence more than in the heart.
We live our lives with love and grace,
Together still, though still apart.

No presence more than in the heart,
No touch more salient than a dream.
Together still, though still apart,
We are more lucky than we seem.

No touch more salient than a dream,
Though dreams alone must sometimes be.
We are more lucky than we seem
If I trust you, and you trust me.

In daylight you're a haunting melody,
More lovely than the world before my eyes.
In darkness you
become my symphony,
So much of me, I know no other ties.
So are you nestled with me night and day,
Your missing self transmuted into song,
Or walking close beside me on my way,
Unleashing all the love for which I long
.

Though dreams alone must sometimes be,
We live our lives with love and grace.
If I trust you, and you trust me,
There are no bars to our embrace

Note:Thanks for reading guys! I am going to create a thread where you will have access to all of my writing and poems so it keeps the forum tidy! Sorry Dev havent been able to create it due to college and exam prep but will do it when I am free for sure!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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AwWw..WoW.. Sonia Dear, By ur Poems, u Make me 2 Crazy, ❤️ I Read it Thrice,again i m gng 2 read..😳 Its Really Awesum, Fantobulous,.. I love ur way of wr8ng.. I Loved it 2 d core..❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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( Aww I am totally flying awaaay ) that would be Sharna's condition 😉 ..
Seriously ... I have no words to praise this ... More n more than just awesome ... hats Off to you Sonia ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great1 Sonai...U have blessed with a creative poetic mind 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sonia ,
Thats really Awsome & Fantabulous..!
Again, every word described great Irony & Match with Condition of PaYa..!

P.S- I'm amazed that you kept my promise. Best of Luck for ur Exams. And its Ok. Take ur time.
Regards Dev.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Silsha

AwWw..WoW.. Sonia Dear, By ur Poems, u Make me 2 Crazy, ❤️ I Read it Thrice,again i m gng 2 read..😳 Its Really Awesum, Fantobulous,.. I love ur way of wr8ng.. I Loved it 2 d core..❤️ In Future, I will ask ur help 4 Lovely Poems 4 my GF.😆 U Want 2 Help me.. K..? Currently i hve no GF..😃

LOLZ🤣 at BOLD. Hehehe well what happend to ur GF? Hun!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow !!!!!!!!!!! very nice one Sonia 👏 u r so creative my girl ...continue the gud work ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing poem Sonia. You seem to have a flair for writing poems with good diction and perfect rhyme. The poem really pictures PaYa chemistry well, and so nice of you to write a marvellous poem on them.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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LOVE it Sonia...🤗

You are an amazing talent! I am always in Awe!!!
Give me the link when you collate them...
I will do some plagiarizing in future from your writing...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMGGG😲...Soniaaa my lovee!!! Come here... 🤗
This is sooo intense 😳, each and every word has such a deep meaning 😃!!!
Mann u r damn talented! 😃 It's soo good yaar I mean you can write a couple of them and get your own volume of poems published!!😉 Seriously You are brilliant😳😃...!!
Keep it up my girl you rock! 👏👏...

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