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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angelwords

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One more advise...You should add the teaser links in the index...otherwise they will be lost in the pages na...??
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O achca...🤣I've said that b4...???LOL...okk...i will give big big comments.
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35 min more... 😃
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Part-3 ( True or False)



all took their seat and sat on the bus, meanwhile geet made a baby face

one of group member asked her "what happened geet?? are you angry with us?", while nodded her head negatively , he again asked " fir, why are angry than??" , geet cutely rub her eyes and said " you know rajeev bhaiya , one man came to ask me who much we take for one dance performance, i told him and was giving him detail when rahul came and talked to me in loud voice". she was making baby pout "he is very bad, he said me to go away, i will never talk to him, katii.." and showed her angry face.

rajveer saw rahul coming and he was indeed in anger, he slowly came near to him and said " rahul what you have done!! you have made our princess angry, why didn't allow him to give the detail". rahul understood what was going on and said angrily " he was asking what charge she take for a night" said in pure disgust , all the member was shocked, there anger rose , geet didn't understand this all and said " he was asking about one dance performance so i told him, why are you so angry". everyone didn't know what to say to her and rajveer whispered to rahul " listen yaar, go and magnify our princess , she is very angry, no mistake of her yaar she is very innocent, don't know the real world, you know its our duty to protect her, may be we are failing , now go before babaji give you sharap.." rahul smiled and went near geet who was complaining to her baba ji..rahul cutely said " plz forgive me geet, i promise i will never ever do it.." geet again made a pout and said " but you have to give me something"

rahul smiled and thought " i have given you my heat, what else is left" . rahul smiled and said " yes tell". geet said " i want to eat gol- gappa, uncle didn't allow me all this because according to him its waste of money so will you give a treat" . rahul smiled and thought" even her wishes are as innocent as she is". while geet who was waiting for answer was not getting any was annoyed. and said " bolo na? tell me".

rahul smiled and said " off course princess..". geet jumped in excitement. and said " vashali dii have you seen , tomorrow i will eat gol gappa, they are so yummy " and hugged her di.

the bus stopped near geet house and the head gave her the daily wage and she went inside waving everyone bye.

she took one step inside when she saw her aunt . and she smiled . her aunt said " beta you came, take seat i will warm your food" . geet went near her and said " aunt this is the money take it". aunt said fakingly " no no beta, this is your" . geet said innocently " you are my aunt so this is your". aunt quickly grab it and went inside .and gave her food. she ate it and went to her room, more likley to be said her store room cum bed room.

the aunt went inside her room happily and waved the bundle of note in her hand to her husband. uncle said " you have taken her money why?? i said nah its her money" . while the aunt saw his husband and both have a loud laugh. aunt said " she is indeed a sone ki chiriya." and uncle said " that to innocent one". aunt said " it all because of you dear". uncle said" it wasn't easy to gain trust of rano, but after all its me.." and aunt said " yes, you have to be best after all you are my husband.." and both slept.

next day

geet went to her dancing agency and aunt was doing her work

when some one knock on the door, uncle said he will look to it and went to open the door.

a man came inside tall and dark and uncle asked

" ji who are you?"

"is it geet's home!!"

"yes" said uncle

"good, i have to talk something important" said the man

and both sat on sofa, aunt also came

"i want to buy her..what cost you want??"

"sir, she is like my child..and not for..."

"but not your child, right??"

"yes, sir"

" you will get as much amount as you want.."

"sir but.."

"7 cores, 10 cores or more"

HIS eyes beamed in hunger, hunger for money...

he saw towards anut and she also nodded

"ji we are ok with it.."

the man said " call her home now.."

the man gave him money, uncle was so so happy

the aunt called geet

" geet beta come home please.."

"what happened aunt.." said geet

" bas come fast .." said aunt

"ji.." said geet and put phone down, she packed her things, rahul saw her and saked

"where are you going geet"

"voh aunt has called me.." said geet

" but why??" said rahul

"i don't know, ok bye.." said geet

and she went away

on other side uncle, aunt and man was waiting for geet

uncle said " can you give me your number, in case of emergency, and your name"

man said " the nember is xxx and name is ram.."

ram smiled and waited for geet, the uncle properly saw the face as if registering it, it wasn't look like normal face, but he thought who care he got money

geet came and aunt dragged her

" geet beta, you have to go with that man!! your rano maa has said "

geet nodded the word " rano maa" was enough to make her belive..

he left with man, asking no question, no argument , no saying

the man said her to sit in the car and they both moved away.

geet was very scared because of all thing, but she believed in her babaji

the man said " stay here, another person will come.."

geet was now getting more scared, fear was making her cry, tears came out of her eyes..

the man(ram) went out and took out his mask, which was made up of wax and put kerosene and burned it.. and laughed

and cat in the car and went away, geet was hell scared with his all...

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next- what will happen now??

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so hurry up and after seeing replies i will update next part

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Edited by angelwords - 12 years ago

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