Swaron FF: Love is the happiest feeling - Page 61

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Hello People thank you very much for the warm response on the last update. I had actually made up my mind to discontinue everything from India Forums as I am too much busy these days with my personal work, but some friends here are so much sweet to me that they are not allowing me to leave so I am staying here and updating the work. Though I am not at all a good writer but somehow I don't know people make me write. I hope all those who come to read this one have an entertaining time while reading this update. I apologise to all those who were disappointed with my work and left reading it, I want to thank people who have supported me up to this stage and gave me confidence to write. So from now on I am making a little change in my PM list as I don't want to force anybody to read idiotic stuff that I write so I will sent PM's to only those people who have liked the previous update. I hope nobody feels offended with this but I had to do this now as I feel that I am sending too many PM's and people really don't want to read the work so this step is for reconciliation of that. And I guess bahot blab la ho gayi hai ab so will get back to the update now...

Part - 10 (Confused Feelings)

Sharon and Swayam both were hell scared as somebody was shouting on the door and was worried for Sharon. But both of them stood there numb and really did not have any idea what so ever about what next to do to avoid this collusive situation.

Sharon was getting restless and started running around the room and was looking for a place where she can order Swayam to hide into. But everyplace in the room was so evident that anyone would find out that there is somebody in the room. Sharon was getting anxious now as kaka were stroking the door hard and she knew he will not wait for long now for her to open the door.

On the other hand kaka outside were getting horrified as Sharon was neither replying to him nor was opening the door. Kaka was stroking the door as hard as he can. He was shouting with it also. But reply was not coming to anything which was scaring him.

Kaka to himself: Ramu agar baby ab darwaza nahi kholti to darwaza todna padega... Muje lagta baby zarur koi bahot badi musibat mein hai Jo koi jawab nahi de rahi... Haan ab zyada der tak rukna munasib nahi hai... Aur agar Gautam Saheb KO pata chal Gaya to VO meri naukri chin lenge...

Inside the room Sharon was getting restless and Swayam was just standing seeing her and smiling. Sharon saw Swayam instead of hiding somewhere in this situation was looking at her and smiling.

Sharon: Swayam tum muje ghur rahe ho? Maybe tumhe is waqt kuch aur chiz karni chaiye Na... (She spoke in very sweet voice)

Swayam: Acha muje karna chaiye... Ok chalo karta hun abhi jake door kholta hun bechare kaka kitne worried honge...

Sharon just fumed with anger hearing this one... As how can he be so cool in this situation? And instead of finding a place to hide he is teasing her to open door. This was really testing the patience of Sharon and as you all know Sharon mein patience hain hi nahi. So Swayam has already invited a big trouble for himself.

Sharon just ran towards Swayam and held Swayam's collar tightly and pushed him near the window...

Sharon ( Screaming in Low voice as voice doesn't get out to kaka but still was showing anger in her speech) : Are you crazy or what? Main yaha pe kabse tense ho rahi hun ke kahan hide karu tumhe taki kaka ko pata na chale tum room the and tum yaha pe koi place dundho hide hone ke liye, ulta muje ghur ke has rahe ho. Main koi circus mein jadu ka koi show kar rahi hun kya jo tumhe ek stick ghumake invisible kar degi? Kuch karo hide some where you idiot dumb kind of boyfriend. You like it Na to anger to me every now and then...

Just then they here that kaka were pushing the door with his shoulder as they could hear the sound of somebody hitting the door hard very hard.

Sharon got very scared as what will happen now and held that collar of swayam more tightly.

Swayam really liked this side of Sharon. She was trying to protect him and in the same time first time Sharon was looking scared of something. So it was really enjoyable moment for Swayam. Sharon was lost in the deep brown chocolaty eyes of swayam.

Just than a hard knock almost broke the door and brought both Swayam and Sharon back to senses and Sharon started get anxious again.

Swayam held Sharon and just calmed her down...

Swayam: Relax Sharon kuch nahi hoga, kaka KO kuch pata nahi chalega alright. Tum calm down ho jao jake door kholo and kaka ko bolna tum so gir gayi thi washroom me apna face clean kar rahi thi so pain ki vajah se answer nahi kar payi but ab thik ho and isiliye tumhe door kholne mein der ho gayi. Ok be relaxed and confidently bolna ye Sab.

Sharon: Ok Fine but tum kahan jaoge itne time mein kaise hide karoge?

Swayam: You don't worry about me. Main aise hide ho jaunga ki tumhe bhi nahi milunga ok...

Sharon: Oh really let's see...

Sharon went to the door and opened it and kaka who was trying push the door with maximum amount of pressure he can get just went in the room and fell on the floor.

Sharon: are kaka kya hua aap aise kaise gir Gaye?

Kaka: Kuch nahi baby VO main darwaze KO Dhaka laga raha tha aur apne khol diya so gir Gaya. But baby aapko kya hua tha, aap aise kyun chikhe?

Sharon saw around and she didn't find Swayam anywhere in her room. So she relaxed and became confident and replied kaka : vo kaka actually main dance practise kar rahi thi vo end ki fir face clean karne washroom mein gayi waha pe floor pe pani tha so pair sleep ho gaya aur main gir gayi so mujse scream ho gaya. But Main thik hun main jaha pe Dard ho raha tha vaha pe spray kar diya so Dard nahi ho raha ab. Aur fir muje realise hua ke koi door KO knock kar raha hai so Maine door khol diya.

Kaka: Oh Baby aap thik to ho Na (kept his hand on her head) aur aapko apne aap se ye spray karne ki kya zarurat thi aap mujko bula sakte the Na. Chaliye ab let jaiye bed par aur kisi bhi chiz ki zarurat ho to muje awaz dijiye khud mat uthaiye kuch bhi haan.

Sharon: Oh kaka aap bhi kya Zara si chot thi so Maine khud se spray kar liya. Aap muje itna pamper mat kiya karo kaka Varna main koi kam apne aap se nahin kar paungi.

Kaka: Thik hai baby par ab aap Aram karo aur kuch chaiye ho to muje bula le.

Saying this kaka left the room and shut the door.

Sharon went behind and as soon as kaka shut the door, she locked the door.

Sharon to herself: Oh god aaj to Bach Gaye kaise bhi karke. Swayam ka idea acha tha work kar Gaya. Par Swayam hai kaha? Swayam Chupa kahan pe hai... Kaka KO is room ke kone-kone ka pata lag jata hai agar koi bhi change hua ho to.

Sharon was puzzled to as to where have swayam hidden actually... she searched the whole room but swayam was nowhere...

Then she gave up and screamed in low voice as to "Swayam kahan pe ho tum?"

There was no answer but she could hear the knock-knock sound from somewhere but she was not able find out the exact location from where the sound was coming.

Then she again concentrated on the sound and was finally able to make out that sound was coming from the Window section. So she went near the window but curtains were closed and window was also closed so she was puzzled how this can happen as she had left the windows open and curtains bhi half khuli thi...

She opened on shutter of the window and what she saw really scared her...

She saw that swayam was holding on to the window wall which was merely short and one could only hold that with two fingers.

Sharon really got scared and barked at swayam.

Sharon: Tum pagal ho Gaye ho kya? Aisi jagah chupta hai koi kya... Ye kitna risky hai do you have any idea of that you psycho...

Swayam smiled looking at her cute and angry worried expressions...

Swayam: are but tumhare room KO to kaka achese jante hai to room mein hide nahin kar sakta Na vo issue tha so yaha pe latak gaya chup ne ke liye...

Sharon: Are par kuch ho jata to? Tumhe kuch samaj nahi aata... Idiot duffer...

Swayam: Are-are baba ab gussa aur galiyan bad mein de Dena abhi hold my hand mai slip ho raha hu and gir jaunga ab...

Sharon: haan ye lo pakdo mera hand and upar aao... Tumhare chakkar mein mera dimag bhi crack ho Gaya hai...

Sharon held Swayam's hand and tried to pull him in but Swayam helped himself and climbed the window holding Sharon's hand.

Now they both were sitting on the bed of Sharon...

Sharon: What the Hell... tum itni rat KO mere ghar pe kya karne aaye the? And how dare you come like this?

Swayam: Are main to tumhe ye cell phone vapis dene aaya tha jo tum meri car mein hi bhool gayi thi... and bahar aakar socha ke khamkha kaka ko disturb karu use acha hai na main window se direct tumhare room mein aake tumhe phone de du...

Sharon: Acha to itne der tak kya kar rahe the tum? Diya kyun nahin muje phone tumne...

Swayam: Are main window climb karke upar chada tab tak to phone dena tha vo yad tha par fir dekha ke tum dance kar rahi ho vo bhi classical...to bas usme kho gaya pura mai... you know I was carving to watch you dance in the classical form...and kya lag rahi thi tum dance karte hue...

Sharon just listening to this was enacting like nothing was affecting her but from inside she was getting happy that swayam got impressed with her and wanted to see her dance in the classical form...

Sharon: Acha itni beautiful lag rahi thi main? Ya tum apne fault KO cover karne ke liye ye sab bahane bana rahe ho...

Swayam: OH I can swear to god that my heart beats had literally stopped when I saw you dancing and smiling. You were just looking like an angel trust me really.

Sharon just felt very happy to hear that statement made by swayam she really enjoyed the attention she got from swayam.

Sharon: Oh really... (Acting smart)

Swayam: I can swear to god really... I mean I fell in love with you all over again seeing you like that...

After hearing that Sharon instead of getting happy got too much confused and didn't know how to react to this now...

Swayam saw her confusion and spoke up: Sharon what happened? Is there anything that is bothering you?

Sharon: Ya actually I don't know what I want from our relationship.

Swayam: hey you are not sounding good tell me what exactly you are thinking about our relationship.

Sharon: swayam I am really complicated person and I don't know why but I feel you are too much sweet guy and a guy like you deserves a girl better than me.

Swayam: Are you mad or what I only love you and I have only loved you in my whole life. No one or nothing can change that.

Sharon: No you really deserve a better girl who can understand you well.

Swayam: that means you want to say that you don't understand me enough?

Sharon: No nothing like that I do, but I am too much involved in myself that I many times end up misunderstanding you and hurting you...

Sharon started to cry and swayam just was numb to hear that...

Swayam: it is not like that Sharon...

Sharon: It is like that swayam, it is just like that. I am too much selfish kind of bitch. I screwed up your team in the Footloose than instead of understanding you pain I started to accuse you for things that you actually have not done... You were not wrong swayam at any time.

Swayam: But everything is good now Sharon. Everybody has moved on from that it was just an incident nothing more. It cannot change our lives.

Sharon: It has done swayam it has changed our lives...

Swayam: No, Sharon please don't say like this...

Sharon: I have to swayam because I am observing everything you are doing for me. You are just outdoing yourself for me. That is really hurting me as I am thinking like who am I to change anybody.

Swayam: But I promised you I will change for us Sharon...

Sharon: There is no us swayam, I was never concerned about I was just thinking about myself, my happiness my insecurities everything was me. You never there in anything, and still you are doing all this for me.

Swayam: It is not like that Sharon, we are us.

Sharon: No swayam we are not. Just that you are trying your best to make you and me to us but it is not working out swayam.

I know aaj ka pura din tumne sab kuch sirf muje ye dikhane ke liye kiya ki tum change ho rahe ho. Pure din mein tumne ek bar bhi intensity nahin dikhaya and cool bane rahe sirf isiliye ke mai scare na ho jau.

And Jiana se flirt karna was just a part of that thing to show you cool. But Maine notice kiya swayam jab bhi Jiana tumhare karib AA rahi thi tum insecure ho rahe the, and dance ke pehle tumne jaan buj kar Jiana ko giraya taki tumhe uske dance na karna pade.

Do you think main blind ho Jo ye sab nahin de sakti swayam? I know tum muje comfortable feel karvana ke liye ye sab kar rahe ho.

You are a nice guy swayam. You are really sweet and most caring person I have met. But somehow I know we are not meant to be because main change nahi ho sakti and tum apni limit se zyada change ho rahe ho swayam ye mujse bare nahin ho raha hai really.

I think humien is trial relationship KO yahin pe rok Dena chaiye. Because tum aur main hum nahin ban sakte swayam because humare bich me mera bahot hi bada king size ego hai Jo tumhe aur muje hum banne nahi dega...

Swayam: but we had promised that we will give fair chance to this relationship.

Sharon: Yes aur humne diya bhi hai but see it's not working out. Tum bahot kuch kar rahe ho iss relationship KO bachane ke liye but main ek aisi link hun Jo iss relationship KO always week kar deti hai.

Swayam was taken a back and was having tears in his eyes because his world had come to an end hearing this.

Sharon came forward and holds his hand...

Sharon: Look swayam you are a very nice guy and I really get affected by everything that is related to you but something's are not meant to be and our relationship is one of them. You will always hold a special place in my life but I really cannot continue in this trial relationship now...

Swayam: NO I won't break this relation... mai tumhe aise Jane nahin dunga apni life se...

Sharon: Humne decide kiya tha swayam ke jab bhi main chahu main is relationship KO end kar sakti hun and that to without giving any reason but main tumhe pura reason bata kar ye end kar rahi hun so please don't force me now to do anything that we both will regret in future...

Swayam remember the time when he had promised her those words and broke into tears but he stood up than hold up to his tears and cleaned his face.

Swayam: Ya Promise right... Maine to tumhe promise kiya hua hai na... Fine I am keeping my promise Sharon. This is your phone and I promise I will not come in your way now... You are free Sharon... I sent you free from this relationship...

Saying this swayam just got out of the window and left crying Sharon in her room...

Swayam Drive off to his house...

So people how do you all like this update? I know sad ending hai but ye to hona hi tha Na. Ek na ek din to iss trial relationship ko end hona hi tha. Agar aapko update boring laga ho to I am really very sorry next time I will try my best to provide you with a better. Remember from now onwards PM's will only be sent to people who have liked the updates or commented on the update... Do hit the like tab and leave your precious comments on this one to help me know what you think about the situation and update...

Thank you very much for your time and patience for reading this update...

Regards

Pratik

Very emotional update bhai...
It was awesome...
Starting part was a happy one...
But ending part was a sad one...
Sharon is so confused about her feelings...
So she ended the trial relationship..
I hope she clears her confusion...
Hope they get back together as soon as possible...
Loved it...😃


Bhai aap ko IF chodne ki koi jarurat nahi hai...and main chodne bhi nahi dungi...
And ya ur updates are never boring...
And aap ko kitne baar bolna padega ki aap bahut jyada acche writer ho...
Love all ur updates to the core...

Awesome update
Starting part was quite amusing n cute.
Ending was really sad but its needed to break this 'trial relationship' so that they both understand what they really meant for each other
Waiting for next part eagerly
Update it ASAP

emotional update!!!
hope u dont break them apart!
thanks for the pm and do continue to do soo!!
update sooon!!

Bhai yaar, i havent read okk but will read and comment soon

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