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Entry - 1

Scene-1:

Freddy entering CID Bureau with a thought while Daya,ACP and Nikhil are looking into a case:

Freddy (in mind) -Yeh kya ho raha hain? Daya Sir keh Birthday keh din bhi yaha kaam chal raha hain 😲 Kya Yaar CID bhi kanjoos ho rahi hain lagtha hain Jo surprise party organise hua uska kya hoga?!!!

Freddy : Good Morning Sir . Kya koi naya case aaya hain Sir?

Daya : Yeh Kya Freddy? Itni Derr seh aa rhey ho? Aur humein tumsey sawaal karna chaahiye. Aur tum humsey sawaal kar rahey ho.

ACP : Haan Daya... Freddy ko toh aajkal apni biwi keh kaam karne seh fursath miley tabh na,...

Freddy : Sir !!!! Yeh kya ke rahe hain aap!!!!
(Leaves out of bureau angrilly)

Scene-2

A fun conversation in Forensic lab describing what had happend in the morning:

ACP : Arey Saalunke... Chalo Daya ki surprise Birthday Party keliyeh tayaar karthey hain yaar...
Abhijeet ( Smiling 😛)
Saalunke : Kya hua mahashay? aapko badi hasi aa rahi hain 😉???
Abhijeet: Arey kuch nahi Sir... Bichare Freddy ko yun hih daant padi na wahi soch raha tha Sir
Saalunke: Hein? Yeh kis dant ki baath ho rahi hain?!!
ACP explains everything to Saalunke...
Saalunke : Ofoh yaar khamaka bichare ko ghussa diladia

Abhijeet: Arey Sir Nikhil ko bheja hain uska mood theekh karne keliyeh .. Sir mujhey ek idea aaya hain... Kyun na is baar ek shocking surprise khadi karey Daya keliyeh...
ACP: Woh kaise? 😕

Abhijeet tells the plan secretly to them...

Scene-3

ACP,Abhijeet and Saalunke are already in bureau ,Just then Daya enters bureau. So Abhijeet signals Saalnke and ACP :
ACP : Yeh batao Saalunke, kya tum koi baath jaldi nahi bata sakthey... Saari baatein yeseh installments mein kehna jaroori hain kya?
Saalunke: Arey yaar kitni baar kaha hain ki yaha ghodey pe sawaar hokar aaya math karo...
Daya signalling to abhijeet that wahts happening.
Abhijeet signals to be quiet.
Saalunke (Angrily) : Yeh kathakali kyun kar rahey ho Daya?? Tum bhi shuru karo meri burayi 😡
Daya : Sir meiney kyaa kiya ?!!! 😲
ACP : Daya tum baahar jao... Mujey kuch baath karni hain private yaha peh...
Daya : Haan Sir... Hum dono bahar jaathey hain..
Saalunke : Nahi sirf tum bahar jao... 😡

Scene-4

Daya is anxiously witing outside bureau in confusion :

Suddenly Sachin entries:
Sachin : Sir aap yaha kyun khadey hain?
Daya : Pata nahi Sachin... Saalunke Sir aur ACP Sir hussey mein theh aur mujhey bahar rehney ko kaha
Sachin : Achcha Sir mein aapko company deta hoon..

Sound from inside
ACP : Daya Andar aa jao..
Before Daya entering bureau Sachin covers Daya's eyes from behind...
Daya ( Angrily 😡) : Yeh kyaa kar rahey ho Sachin ? Chodo mujhey...

Before letting Daya come in again the fans are on'ed and some silver shining particled come down on bursting of baloons... Everyone clap with a Happy Birthday Song

Daya : Sir aapsab ne mujhey uloo banaaya??
ACP : Kyun? Jab tum aur abhijeet milkey sabki taang kheech sakthey ho... toh kya mein nahi kar saktha ?
Daya : Nahi Sir hum bohot pehley aisey majaak karthey theh... abhi kaha 😛
Saalunke : Kyun? Abhi tum boodey ho gayh ho kya?!!!! 😆
ACP : Waise Daya tumhaari umar kya hua abhi ?
Saalunke : Arey buss karo yaar ... Kamsay kam aaj toh bakho ussey 😆
Abhijeet: Haan Sir aaj toh chod deejiyeh na ...
Sachin : Sir aap hih ney toh plan banaaya tha yeh 😛

Daya : Kya? Abhijeet? Tum? ( Runs behind Abhijeet) Thehro tumari toh mein...

Saalunke :Is B'day mein bichaara Freddy khamaka Bali ka bakra ban gaya .Shaam ka B'day party ka bill jo ussey chukaana hain .

Edited by Nandiniraizaada - 13 years ago

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Nandini

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Entry 2

Daya is trying to listen to a conversation happening inside.

Sachin: Kya baat ho rahi hai sir?

Daya: Arre pehle main sun loon phir tumhe bataonga.

Sachin: Lekin sir kuch toh sun raha hoga.

Daya: Agar tum chup rahoge toh hi main sun paonga.

Sachin: Lekin sir...

Daya: Chup!

Inside, ACP, Abhijeet, and Dr. Salunkhe are planning a party for Daya.

ACP: Kuch toh karna parega.

Abhijeet: Sir sambal kar. Daya zaroor bhar sunene ki koshish kar raha hoga.

Dr. Salunkhe: Mere paas plan hai. Kyun naa usse kisi case ke liye bhar bhej den aur phir bureau ko saja den.

ACP: Acha huya isne bureau kaha aur forensic lab nahi.

Dr. Salunkhe: Maine toh socha tha ke lab kahon lekin phir...

ACP: Lekin kya?

Abhijeet hides a smile at this.

ACP: Tumhe kyun muskara rahe ho?

Abhijeet: Main jaanta hoon ke Salunkhe sir kya kehna chahte the.

Dr. Salunkhe: Acha hai. Kum se kum tumhe samjhna nahi parega.

ACP: Mujhe bhi pata hai tum kya kehne wale the.

Dr. Salunkhe: Acha? Kya kehne wala tha?

ACP: Yehi keh phir mera chehra dekh kar chup ho gaye.

Abhijeet: Wah!

A little later...

ACP: Daya tum, Nikhil, aur Freddy iss jagah jayo aur dekho ke kuch milta hai ke nahi.

Nikhil: Sir aaj?

ACP: Haan Nikhil aaj. Kyun? Do saal baad jana hai?

Daya: Thik hai hum jayenge.

Freddy: Sir yahan pe kya dhoondna hai?

Daya: Freddy wohi toh wahan jaa kar dekhna hai. Agar yeh crime scene hai toh saboot dhoondne honge.

ACP: Sahi hai. Jao.

Daya, Freddy, Nikhil leave. Abhijeet and Dr. Salunkhe come out.

ACP (to the rest of the team): Chalo. Jaldi se birthday ki tyari karne lago.

Abhijeet: Cake main liya hoon.

Dr. Salunkhe: Aur main yeh decorations le kar aaya hoon.

ACP: Chalo yeh cake yahan rakh do.

Abhijeet: Purvi aur Shreya tum log yeh streamers wahan laga do.

Dr. Salunkhe: Main yeh banner yahan laga deta hoon.

ACP: Main kya karoon?

Dr. Salunkhe: Tum wahani khade raho.

ACP: Kya?
Dr. Salunkhe: Haan beta ACP. Tum wahani khade raho.

ACP: Tumhara dimak toh thik hai naa? Beta?

Purvi (whispers to Abhijeet and Shreya): Dono sirs aise kyun lad rahe hain?

Shreya (whispers back): Sir kahin party ki khushi main dono...?

Abhijeet (replies): Mujhe bhi kuch aisa hi lagta hai. Chalo hum decorations karte rehte hain.

At this point, Freddy and Nikhil come running back in.

Freddy: Sir Daya sir wapas aa rahe hain!

ACP: Kya?!!

Freddy: Haan. Woh aapni gun bhool gaye the aur woh wapas aa rahe hain!

Daya enters at this point and sees the decorations.

Daya: Acha meri party ki tadiyi ho rahi hai.

Abhijeet: Daya!!!

Daya: Haan Abhijeet. Main.

Abhijeet who had streamers around his neck, drops them.

Dr. Salunkhe (to ACP): Yeh sab tumhari galti hai!

The fight continues. Abhijeet and Daya watch.

ACP: Dekh Salunkhe yeh meri galti nahi hai.

Dr. Salunkhe: Tumhari hi galti hai. Maine kaha tha ke Daya ko lab bhej do Tarika ke paas. Tumne kaha nahi. Usse bhar bhej dete hain. Ab usse sab kuch pata chal gaya naa!

ACP: Mujhe pata tha kya ke woh wapas aayega?

Dr. Salunkhe: Agar usse bhar bheja nahi hota toh aisa nahi hota!

ACP: Arre woh lab se bhi toh wapas aa sakta tha.

At this point Abhijeet intervenes.

Abhijeet: Sir ab Daya ko pata chal hi gaya hai toh chalo party karte hain.

Daya: Haan kar lo. Meri birthday party hai aakhir.

Abhijeet: Haan teri party hai.

The whole team: HAPPY BIRTHDAY DAYA!!!

Daya cuts the cake as everyone claps for him.

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Entry 3

Daya Abhijeet ACP enters in to forensic lab'. Only Dr. Salunke was there''. ACP by eyes says some thing to Salunke and he understands''.

ACP pointing his figure to Salunke: dekha Salunke maine kaha thana ki meri ungaliya tumhare balo se jada famous hai''..

Salunke: nahi mere balo ke liye toh cake bhi banaya gaya tha who jada famous hai'..

Daya thinking yeh ACP sir or Dr. Salunke ko ho kya gaya hai'.. kaisi bate kar rahai hai'' he look at Abhijeet and asked by expression that what's going on

Abhijeet say he has no idea by expression only'''

Abhijeet: Dr sahab nahi ACP sir sahi keh rahai hai' pata hai Shahrukh khan ne bhi unnki ungaliyo ko copy kiya tha'' unnki ungaliya jada famous hai'.

Daya look frustrated and move out from Lab without a word

Abhijeet give victory smile to ACP and Dr. Salunke

Abhijeet: dekha sir maine kaise use bhaga diya

ACP and Dr. Salunke give disbelieving look to Abhijeet'''. Dr. Salunke about to start a fight with Abhijeet but ACP start with the main point and then they made a very good plan

Daya move out from lab and stand near to door as he feels some unusual thing in ACP sir and Dr. Salunke's behavior'.. he also surprised that Abhijeet joins them''.

He listening all plans discussed by three inside the lab

When Sachin comes and ask

Sachin: Daya sir aap yaha kya kar rahai ho

Daya shocked to see him so to handle the situation he says: Dekh raha tha lab ka darwaja kaisa hai'. Kabhi todne ki jarurat pade toh pareshani nahi honi chahiye'..

Sachin looks confused but Daya sleeps from there

Here Daya made a plan against ACP Salunke and Abhijeet's plan with Nikhil''''

Then they meet at ACP's cabin'''. Abhijeet is working on his plan out side'.. ACP trying to divert Daya from ABhijeet so he is discussion some thing with him in his cabin'''

In discussion he asked Nikhil about Daya's plan (as Sachin told him that Daya was waiting out side and ACP noticed Daya with Nikhil earlier) and Nikhil speaks out all Daya's plan'.. Daya disbelievingly look at him and all burst in to laugh'..

Here Abhijeet, Salunke and ACP's plan of celebrating Daya's birthday got successful'''''''. 👏

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Entry 4

Cap 1

Duo went to Acp and tell that Salunkhay shared a weird news with them, ACP comes in anger after hearing the news😡, Abhijith was in extra angry state after that news😡😡, Dayaa also supports him, Acp went with them again to lab and clearify about the news.

Acp: Salunkhay, tumhein malum hay na Tum kya keh rahy ho?😡

Salunkhay: jee Acp sahib😊, main jo keh raha hun, poori zimmadari kay sath keh raha hun…😊

Acp: aur agar ye baat ghalat nikli tou?😡

Salunkhay: jo saza aap mujhy dein, mujhy qubol hogi…😊

Cap 2

Here after seeing Abhijith angry shade😡, Acp ordered Dayaa to investigate about the source of the news, Dayaa ordered to Nikhal and Freddy for this and now they shared the news, Dayaa in shocking asked.😲

Dayaa: kya bol rhy ho tum Nikhal?😲

Nikhal: Sir ye Phone records hain (signaling Acp sir who had some papers) ap khud dekh lein.😊

Freddy: sir nikhal saheh keh rah hy, hum nay Phone records tele bhi kr liyey hain.😕

Acp heard all but does not comment, all in trouble state.

Cap 3

Here Acp in alone tell Dayaa that he will check the issue by himself, he went there with Sachan, Sachan asked in confusion to Dayaa.

Sachan: Dayaa sir hum yaha kyun aye hain?😕

Dayaa: bus dekhty raho.😊

both waiting a lot there but coming back with empty hands.

Cap 4

Abhijith back to lab and confirned the news with Happiness.😊😃😳

Abhijith: Sir Salunkhay sahib bilkul theek hain.😃

Acp: kya?😲

Salunkhay: dekha Acp sahib main tou pehly he keh rah tha.👍🏼

Abhijith: jee Sir😃, Tarika Ji ny Shadi kr li.😳

Acp (shock): aur tum itnay khush ho?😲

Abhijith: Ji sir (shy😳) wo main tou dance krnay ka bhi soch raha tha, pr unhun nay kaha kay jub reception dungi na tou karna😆, aur sir main tou khob dance karun ga, kyunkay wo Teen reception dein gi.😉

Acp (thinking🤔): aye bhagwan😡, kahein is ki yaddasht phr tou nahi chali gayi🤣, aur ye Taika ko Purvi ya Sherya tou nahi samjh raha.😉😆

Abhijith still share some other things about tarika ji wedding😆 while Salunkhy heard all in casual whereas Acp in confusion.😕

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Entry 5

Abhijeet: Sir, Ek dhamakedar khabar mili hai.

ACP: Kya hai Abhijeet?

Abhijeet: Sir ek CID officer doosre CID officer ko kidnap karne wala hai.

ACP : kya keh rahe ho Abhijeet...hum me se koi kisi doosre ko kidnap kyon karega?

Salunkhe: Kyon nahi ho sakta boss...there's always a first time...hai na Abhijeet?

Abhijeet: Bilkul sahi hai sir...

ACP: Chalo sab logon ko bureau bulao. Urgent meeing hai.

ACP: Abhijeet ko khabar mili hai ki hum me se koi, hum me se kisi ko kidnap karne wala hai.

Nikhil: Sirr...main samjha nahi. 😕

ACP: 😡 Ek kaam karo...2005 ke cases ke files dhoondo...aur 'Code name Banjara' case ka file dooondar use detail mein study karo.

Nikhil:

Freddie: Mujhe woh case yaad hai...main tumhe baad mein samjha doonga.

ACP: Baaki sab log suno...tab humare team ka size chota tha isliye ek doosre ke gharon ki talaashi lena bhi aasan tha. Ab detailed plan chahiye. Yeh chart dekho...

and shows a complicated diagram

Daya: Yeh kya hai sir?

ACP: Is diagram se humein pata chalega ki kaun kiske ghar ki talaashi lega.

Sachin: 😕😕 sir, isko samajhne se pehle kidnapper apna kaam poora kar dega.

ACP: Kya keh rahe ho Sachin...apne aap ko detective kehte ho!!!! Daya, tum toh samajh sakte ho na???

Daya: Wohh...hhh,..haaan sir...main dekhta hoon...sir, Abhijeet ko do ghar diye gaye hai.

ACP: Achcha??? Shaayad mujhse galti ho gayi...

and takes a sketch pen, strikes off one line and points it to Rajat.

Daya pores over the diagram, which looks like a 'how-does-the-rabbit-reach-the-carrot-type' maze for an hour and then...

Daya: Sir...yeh dekhiye...ab do log Rajat ke ghar ki talaashi lene wale hain...isko bhi theek kijiye sir.

ACP:🤔 yeh diagram diagram bohot complicated hai...ise aise hi rehne do.ab do log kisi ke ghar ki talaashi lenge toh achcha hi hoga. Chalo...sab log shuru ho jaao.

Sachin: Sir...aap talaashi lene nahi jaa rahe hain?

Daya: Us diagram mein mujhe kisi ka ghar nahi diya gaya hai.

Sachin: Woh kaise sir???

Daya: Woh ACP sir jaaane...tum chaho toh diagram phir se study karo.

Sachin; Nahi sir...Indian Railways ka map study karna zyada aasaan hai.

Main chalta hoon. Mujhe Rajat sir ke ghar ki talaashi leni hai.

ACP: Salunkhe, humari saari mehnat bekaar ho gayi. Nikhil kidnap ho gaya.

Salunkhe: Toh yahan mere lab mein kya kar rahe ho? Jaakar dhoondo use.

Abhijeet: Salunkhe saab, aapke madad ke bina hum kidnapper ko kaise dhoond sakte hain?

Salunkhe: Yahan koi laash ya saboot nahi hai... main kya kar sakta hoon?

ACP: Us diagram ko dekho aur mujhe bataao ki Nikhil kiske ghar ki talaashi lene gaya tha.

Salunkhe: Boss, diagram tumne banaya toh mujhse kyon pooch rahe ho?

ACP: Salunkhe...😡 Daya, tum hi samjhao use...

Daya: Darasal ACP sir ko khud samajh mein nahi aa raha hai ki kaun kiske ghar gaya tha. Aap apne laser machine se pata kijiye na...

Salunkhe: Dekha...Salunkhe ki madad ke bina koi case solve nahi ho sakta...samjhe??? 😉

Salunkhe uses his laser machine for about 2 hours and finally arrives at the answer.

Salunkhe: Pata chal gaya!!!! Pradyuman, Nikhil tumhare ghar gaya tha!!

ACP: Mere ghar?? 😲 Lekin maine kisi ko apne ghar ki talaashi lene nahi bheja tha.

Salunkhe: Achcha? Hum sab par shaq karte ho lekin khud apne ghar ki talaashi nahi karvate ho?

Dekha Abhijeet...mujhe toh inhi par shaq hai. Chalo ACP ke ghar.

ACP: Nahi Abhijeet, Daya...mujhe pata hai Nikhil kahan hai.

Abhijeet, Daya; Kahan sir?

ACP: Kal raat ko mere ghar ke andar koi aaya tha. Maine socha koi chor hai...andhere mein usa chehra dekh nahi paaya. Maine use baandhkar bathroom mein bandh kar diya. Subah tum logo ne Nikhil ke gaayab hone ki khabar di toh use wahin chodkar bureau aa gaya.

Abhijeet and Daya: 😲