OS- ANSH AND ANSHIKA

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's my first os and hope you all will like it.
It's almost 6 years now anandi and shiv got married. Their were many things changed bw ansh in these 6 years. Anandi confessed her love to shiv and became one in all means as a wife and husband. They also worked hard for the development of jaistar and was succesful in getting them. Now their were big schools and colleges were established also. Anandi and shiv are very happy in their life and their happiness knew no bounds they go to know that anandi was pregnant. The two families were happy about this and anandi could not belived that all these are happening her life. Time passed by and anandi gave birth to twins it's a boy and a girl. Shiv was very excited seeing them that they are his prince and princess. After few days anandi got discharged and namakaran was done. They named them as "ANSH" and "ANSHIKA". Slowly the time passed by the two kids were now 4 .Shiv pampered the kids a lot and anshika is his doll and ansh is mama's boy. Anandi always had tough time with anshika because she is papa's baby. She is so naughty and ansh is also naughty by listens his mama's words. Shiv always took anshika's side in any case and anandi on ansh side but they love their two kids.
If you all like this plz comment all positive and negative comments are accepted.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its good first attempt dear😊, but seems u love briefing everything... It feels as if u r running to catch a train and u r hurrying to tel d story. (Sorry, I felt like dat; no offence)

But d story is good😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg... Fabulouse, yar... I just love it, I don't know u believe me or not but dear I swear, me too imagine that Ansh should hv the twince nd their name should be Ansh nd Anshika. Nd also that Shiv will take his daughter side like every lovely father, nd Ansh just mama's boy, so in that case ur story touch my Heart, its my inner desire nd u givem words to them so dear thank u for this, nd Its my request dear pls update very soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice first attempt...but it was more like a summary...looking forward to more in depth stories from you! 😊

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