I feel the effect of this story line on my mind is something like this... because whatever I tried to make out of this show I failed helplessly to find a better answer... this is when I see all the serials do the same... i wrote this poem about life a little while ago... and think it will suit here... if not mods are welcome to delete it
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Life is a mechanism
Which is supposed to output on command
Life is a mechanism
On command – to smile
On command – not to smile
On command – to react
On command – not to react
On command – make the equation wrong
By giving non-equivalent reactions to actions
On command – to feel
On command – to act as unfeeling
On command – to work
On command – to stop
On command – to move
But for all the same none set the input
Stabilizer
It is sometime high
It is sometime very low
It was never neutral
But no command to stop output
It is always giving output
I tried to make it feel
I tried to give a little life in vain
I tried to make it talk but failed
I tried to change it into live finally
But gone dead on half way
Life is this mechanism
Can't be live anymore
Can't feel anymore
Can't sense anymore
Can't react anymore
Can't balance the equation anymore
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I am not a writer, this is just a thought...
Rose
Debate Mansion
Book Talk
Cricket
