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Ok my story about how Jeevika find out about Karan intention and how he is not swamini bua son. Jeevika feel gulity about not trusting Maanvi six sense again but, has got self into more touble.. As Karan become more monster now he will go any extend to have Jeevika to himself..Will Viren able to save his wife Jeevika honor ...

It was 12am Viren had late confrence meeting in Mumbai so he was out town..Virat and Maanvi also away for the boot camp for sing compition in Dehil...Indra Chachu had taken Kandberi chachi and Solok to goa for small break...Dadji, bua and Vanishika ma had gone visit temple in hardawal...So it was just Jeevika and Karan in the house as staff had hoilday...Jeevika was in the room thinking about what Maanvi told few days ago.

Flash back:

"Didi you know Karan did not pay for rishikesh house, it was subesh jawal". Jeevika get annoyed at Maanvi suspecion and say "so what Maanu it could be Karan business partner " . Then Maanvi say "fair enough it counld be Karan business but why would Jawal send someone else as him think about there something not right about the whole thing".

Flash back end.

"Maanu talk about sense something not right about. And jaswal the name ring bell where heard name before." Jeevika loss in own world thinking about whole thing when Karan. When Karan come in the room notice Jeevika lost in own world so he take advantage close door and lock it. Jeevika snap out thought and say "Karan you here if u need something call me no need come in my room." Then Karan put his hand on Jeevika say "Jeevika dont worry I come for you." Karan make Jeevika feel uncomfortable but Karan hold Jeevika hand tightly and come close her, Jeevika try free herslef from Karan annd say "what are you doing." Then Karan put finger on Jeevika lips and say " shhh Jeevika i know you like me to, this lrefect time for us come close to each other " Then Jeevika said "How dare touch me i am only viren ji" Jeevika manage free herself from Karan but Karan manage take Jeevika sari of now half naked but Jeevika manage unlock the door and run. Jeevika running and crying, she run into Virat and Maanvi who are shock at Jeevika state as Jeevika blouse is riped and her sari come of ...Virat and Maanvi upset Jeevika such state, then Maanvi says "Didi who got you in this state." Then jeevika say cryingly "Karan" Virat get mad say "Bhabhi how dare he touch you" Just then Viren come in who heard everything. Jeevika him and hug him, Viren "Now im here I wont spare how dare lay hand on you"

Maanvi put shawal round Jeevika while Viren and Virat confront Karan who shirtless coming toward hall way. When Viren hold Karan neck and say "How dare you put dirty hand on my Jeevika. Now your dead." Viren punches Karan smoach and then Virat hold Karn by neck and "Karan you dirty bxxxst how dare touch my pure babhi who my god" Then both Viren and virat beating Karan badly as if they gone kill him. When Dadji, bua and ma walk in they are shock why all three bother fighting and Jeevika in such state. Then Maanvi example them that karan tryed rape Jeevika but she escape all of them are shock especially bua who walk up karan and slap then "get out house how dare u touch ghar ki laxim if you dont respect women there no right for stay here./" Karan say "I will get for all this just wait and watch Vedhares."

To be continue...

Enjoy reading and leave ur comments thanks.

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Love the concept plz continue soon 😊
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awsome update😊
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awesome concept
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yuhooo... awesome update...!! please do continue soon...!
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oh my god how brilliant is this story you have to conyinue and soon please pm me when you do thanks

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