JAANAM AB NA CHHODENGE NEW part 3 on pg13, 28 dec.

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Hello mohabbtains 😊may be few of know me n few of dont she lemme introduce myself
M ish the one of biggest fan of kmh series n ofcource arjuhi/karanika. Read most of all the FF SS nd OS everybody is amazing writers so i wanna be too here i come with my story:

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"Mohabbat bhare lamho ki he hasinkahaniyan,

pyar k liye hi hamko mili zindaganiyan,


pyar hi zindagi, pyar hi he khuda..."


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"Arohi... Arohi...


Plz stop this song now, and come here,"


Arohi- "coming"


Amrit- "pata neh ye ladki kab badi hogi, tera breakfast ready he, kar lena"


Arohi Sharma, 20 yrs old girl, daughter of Sudhir and Amrit sharma. She is beautiful, fair, nd totally Shaitaanbandariya. She has attractive look, straight hair n perfect hight.


They r five members in family-amrit, sudhir, her brother(sanchit), bua(lovedeep), they live in gujarat from last 14 yrs.


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"Arohi, hamare yha kal mehman aa rha he, or dhyan rahe tuje uske sath respect se pesh ana hoga"


"ofcourse mom"


Amrit angrily "ofcourse to bol diya lekin bhagvan jane isne meri bat suni bhi he ya nhi, pura din itni masti karti rehti he, kabhi to apni life ko seriously liya kar, sb frnds se ladti rehti he, kisike sath banti he teri? Pata neh kon le jaega tuje"


Arohi chuckles "btw mom who is cming?"


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Sudhir "his name is Arjun Punj, son of DK Punj, Do u remember "DK Punj". My childhood friend in shimla... His son Arjun is cming here to cmplt his final year"


arohi "Bt why, i mean so many best clges r there, then why here? And just for final year!!huh!"


Amrit intrrupts "he bhagwan, tuje kya panchat, Dk Punj ka nam bahot bada he, or jitna bada nam utne jyada dushman..


Usme se kisi ek dushman ne use kaha he k uska beta arjun unlogo ko jaha kahi bhi dekhne milega wo log use mar dalenge, sirf itna hi neh ek bar use shoot karne k koshish bhi ki thi"


"Arjun Punj"(imagine bckground music of kmh) she smiles "be ready Mr. Arjun, im more dengerous thn ths certified gundas"



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Arjun Punj... Tall, Handsome, good luking nd totally besharam banda... He looks attractive bcz of his brown chocolaty eyes and killer dimples on his cheeks... And ofcourse sexy black mole on his left eyebrow


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"Good morning everyone" he said cming downstairs...


Dk "good morning my dear son"


NATASHA (his SISTER) with smile "hey bhai, gm.. U luking very hawt today.. Kya bat he!! Oh how can i frgt that ur going to gujarat tomorrow, vha ki ladkiyon ko ghayal karne ki planning ho rhi he"


Arjun gritting his teeth "shut up ok"


His flight is 2morrow and still he has not started his packing.


Savita serving paratha "Arjun, hope teri packing agale saal tq ho jaegi"


arjun "mom plz, im not going anywhr ok"


savita pampering him "oh mera bacha! muje mom neh maa bulaya kar samja! or koi ma apne bache se dur neh rehna chahti, par jab uski zindagi ka sawal hota he to..." she got tears in her eyes


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DK "sorry arjun we cant take any risk, and this is just for one year, and then ur cming back, u have to handle our business"


"but dad"


"and one more thing Arjun, everything has been arranged there for yr facility, and we r giving u car, i have already talked with sudhir... U will stay there, and now start yr packing"


Arjun suddenly "Arohi...,"


everyone saw him with shocking expression "i mean i remember arohi, sanchit, lovedeep bua n amrit aunty right, btw gauri aa rhi he, ham sath mil k packing karenge"


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Arohi laying on the bed... She was thinking of new guest and saying herself "Arohi, Be careful, ghar me ek ladka aa rha he, pata neh kesa dikhta hoga ab, anyways muje kya, mazaa aega band bajane ka.."


Here Arjun is constantly thinking about Arohi "shit, i hv to tolerate that stupid girl, pata neh kesi dikhti hogi "Jagahra Queen" , bt now its my turn to take revenge..."


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Next day


"bye everyone"


"bye Arjun"


Savita "take care beta"


Arjun hugging her "yeah mom, sorry Maa ohk, love u"


DJ "Jaldi vapis aa jana study khatam karke,


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Dk "if u need anything just call me"


Arjun "ok dad, i will miss u, hey natasha ki bachhi, will miss u too"


Natasha "love u bhai. Now go otherwise u will miss yr flight"


Je "hey ab chal, teri biday ho gai ho to, itna senty ho rha he"


Gauri suddenly came there "Je, im cming with u to drop him"


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At airport


Gauri "don't forget to call me, love u Arjun, bye"


Arjun with fade smile "ohk baba, bye"


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Coming out of airport he said with his special one sided smile "Be ready Miss. Arohi, Be ready for my revenge"

😉 😉 😉
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"Tere ghar aaya me aaya tujko lene,


dil ke badle me dil ka nazarana dene,


teri har dhadkan kya bole he


Sun Sun Sun Sun


Sajan ji ghar aye Sajan ji ghar aye.."

I know it was too boring, sorry im not expert in all this. So


plz forgive me guys and don' t be canjoos, Be udaar.. Plz do cmnt, and hit


da like button. and Do let me know how it went and should i continue or not...


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and pls ignore my


grammer and spelling mistakes...


Next updt will be after 4 months.. and bye everyone, i will be back with more n more boring updts after exams..THANK U


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cooljaya11 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok i m rolling like hell

" tumhe kya panchat"🤣
and then he came to gujarat 😆
i hope ye arohi tu he ish 😉
and what about after 4 months😡
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i wanted to b first :'(:'(:'(:'(
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Originally posted by: Broken_Heart

i wanted to b first :'(:'(:'(:'(

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i done with my reviews
the dy be4 yesterday night
so continue asap

"Jagahra Queen"
Shaitaan bandariya rolling on hahaha
the biggest roll natasha is arjun's sister hahaha gud one
revenge: o now update asap hahaha
it's not boring atall @:
it's kickass humor
hayeh Salman:*
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i was updating bai:@
:'(:'(:'(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ish!!! Tera os. Omg! Let me read.
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Ye aru ish khud hi hai kya! Btw ye 4 mnth ka brk kyu?
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Thank u so much 4 liking, will give reply aftr my practical, fasi hui hu yha pe
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Originally posted by: cooljaya11

ok i m rolling like hell

" tumhe kya panchat"🤣
and then he came to gujarat 😆
i hope ye arohi tu he ish 😉
and what about after 4 months😡


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Yes my next updt wl b aftr 4 mnths, coz im busy in prp, n abt ish n aru , to abhi tq to neh socha tha esa, lekin ab age ese soch k updt banaungi, btw did u like title, is it ok?

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