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Originally posted by: Tanuka_TanHa
Monster eagerly waiting for the next part , i had missed this ff so much ..😃
Hello everybody...It has been very long time since I have last updated this FF... This FF and Response to it are most important to me not that others are not but this is my very first piece of work and first things are always special to everybody... so after very much thinking I finally found out a suitable going for this story and writing this part made me very happy so I hope it makes happy also...now the response you all gave me was just amazing for the last part...all the big to biggest comments were just pleasant read for me and it made me smile because those comments were actually way better than my update... I have comeback after a month or so and many things have changed here and I can see many people have forgot about me and my FF's so I would be glad if I get half of the response which I got for the last part...so I think I am done with introduction part now going back to the story...here goes the update...This time I have just given a name to Part 9 because this part marks the new trend in the story... And ya there is a special surprise for my two friends Sukanya and Amrita (Rasmalai) in this update...
Part - 9 (Defining the means of Joy)
(So the story will start exactly from where we left off...that was Swayam and Sharon just reached Mumbai)
Swayam and Sharon just reached Mumbai and the weather was utterly romantic here also and slow drops of rain were falling down and people were running around not bothered about the weather...they saw everybody was running around and in the centre there was a old woman sitting on a hand lorry which was covered with plastic and above which some type covering was there as one roof of one of the shops was extended to the road...she was selling Makki ka bhuttas (Corn for those who don't understand Hindi much)...
Swayam saw that and he got temptation to eat the bhuttas as he just enjoys to eat something tasty and delicious in the rains...those bhuttas were specially ironed with spreading salt and red mirch powder on it...seeing that swayam's mouth was like watering and he wanted to jump out of the car grab one and eat that...
But however he knew a fitness freak and classy Sharon was sitting beside him who will never allow him to have this one when she is with him...
On the other side Sharon was observing all the changes in the expressions of swayam seeing something...she was also very puzzled with the fact that there is something in this world which has such effect on Swayam Shekhawat who never shows any excitement to any thing...
She went in line with where swayam was looking while driving. She found out that swayam was actually dying to have bhuttas... Sharon just smiled to herself and thought how cute he is...he wants to have bhuttas in rains just like filmy heroes...really no matter what he is such real fun to be with...
Sharon: Hmmm Swayam where are you looking at?
Swayam: Well nowhere just driving as usual...
Sharon: No you are staring at something. Tell me what is it?
Swayam: No nothing really I was just watching how people here doesn't get effected with this much beautiful whether if it was jodhpur than we would danced our hearts out up to now...
Sharon was really amazed that he was missing being in his hometown and friends...yet he was so sweet that he didn't let Sharon knew that he wanted to have bhuttas...
Sharon: Do you want to have bhuttas?
Swayam just froze the car at very moment in the shock. He could not believe that Sharon actually had asked him to have bhuttas...swayam coughed and spoke up...
Swayam: Sharon do you really want to have that bhuttas? I mean there is no protection to it and they might be unhygienic for you...
Sharon: Oh really...as if we have really made some efforts today to keep my hygiene levels...from morning to evening we had tea and ice cream and whatever thing at various stalls...to ek bhutte se kya fark pad jayega...beside I want to taste this thing...
Swayam was just dumbstruck with the cuteness she had on her face while saying this...but what was more amazing to him that she never had tasted bhuttas in her life...
Swayam: tumne kabhi bhuttas nahi khaye?
Sharon: No nahi khaye...kyu what's the big deal in it?
Swayam: Big deal...it is just that everybody is starving to have bhuttas in the rains and here you are who have never tasted it...
Sharon: Ya but that's why I want to try it Na today that how it tastes actually...
Swayam: Oh it is the most delicious thing you will ever eat...those tough and cranky beans are just delicious when they are ironed with salt and red mirch powder and some pepper on it...you just feel that you should go on eat and eat and eat only...
This description actually brought water in the mouth of Sharon and she was actually now very curious to have one bhutta and besides that the cute look on Swayam's face for having bhutta was added flavour to the most romantic weather you will ever find in Mumbai as the true hearts were there with each other that made that moment and weather very special...
Swayam parked the car in side and went there and brought the bhuttas and came back to the car...
He gave one piece to Sharon and started eating his piece without even waiting for Sharon...
Sharon was just smiling at his cute acts. He was eating it like he has got this after ages and someone will snatch it if he delays in eating that...
Sharon took the first bite and just liked the taste of the bhutta...she really thought that this was one of those things she has ate whose taste will last forever in tongue...
By now swayam had already finished his piece and Sharon had just started to eat it...
Swayam was watching Sharon eat and he was enjoying all the pleasant expression she was making while eating it...
Sharon actually had turned into baby who eats slowly being afraid that this will end early if she hurries in eating...Swayam was just enjoying all the antics that Sharon was doing...
This was actually very rare sight of Sharon that many of the friends would not have seen...Even Rey had seen or not was also a matter of question...
But as they say all the good things come to an end sometime that bhutta of Sharon also ended and there was a satisfying look on the face of the Sharon...
Swayam smiled up at seeing Sharon being so satisfied... Sharon also smiled back at swayam...
Swayam started the car and drove off to Sharon's place...
They reached at Sharon's house; Swayam parked his car near the Garden of her house and saw Sharon...
Sharon actually was not feeling like stepping down and go home...
Swayam saw a look on Sharon's face which indicated to him that she wants to spend more time with him...
Swayam in mind: gosh this is a big thing for me ke subah tak jo mujse baat karne mein interested nahi thi vo abhi muje chodke jane mein interested nahi...way to go my boy you have actually won the heart of her now...
Before swayam could say or do anything...Sharon opened the door and bid good bye to Swayam...
Sharon: I will get going from here now...it was a nice day...thank you for the ride and joys time you gave throughout the journey it made this journey very memorable experience for me... See you in the college tomorrow...
Swayam understood that she was in two minds and that's why she had decided to go in without waiting much so swayam understood her mind and decided to leave without doing anything...
Swayam: Ya sure you will see me in college tomorrow for sure...and it was indeed my pleasure to have such a beautiful girl accompany me for a day...it makes me super happy to know that it was memorable experience for you...Thank you for saying all this...bye cya in the college tomorrow...
Swayam drove off the car and Sharon saw him going until he vanished from her sight...
Sharon came back to her house she was wet as she waited for swayam go in the raining outside...
Sharon quickly called her servant and ordered a special tea for her...who came in minutes after she changed and took bath from those rainy clothes and tired sweating body after a day's hard work...
Sharon took the tea mug and stranded near the window and show rains falling and was having hot tea...
Suddenly a thought came to her that she should dance Kathhak as the weather is so beautiful and besides that she was very happy today...
So she took out the Jhanjar from the table drawer and wore it...
She hit the music which had classical tabla bit on it... she enjoyed doing kathhak on the tabla beat alone very much...
One side Sharon was gearing up to have dance...here swayam was lost in the dreams of Sharon and the day they spent together...
He was getting happy that finally Sharon got relaxed and they had a pleasant time with each other after many days...and they are back on track...
Swayam : Thank you God for making the day such a wonderful day...Everything just happened unplanned but what happened one after another was much better than what I had planned for her...Her blushes and smile are still fresh in my mind as ever...
God please don't tell me that this was dream...and if this was a dream than I never want to wake up as this is such a beautiful dream that I can just end my life in this dream only...
Swayam was just so much happy that finally Sharon and his relationship were going back to where it was...
And strings of his thoughts were just broken by ringtone of a phone...
Swayam got irritated and took out his phone to see who was disturbing his thoughts at this hour of the day...
But to his surprise his phone was not ringing...than whose phone was ringing actually...and phone was constantly ringing somewhere...
Swayam stopped the car in roadside and searched for the phone as voice coming from the inside of his car...he searched the whole car finally he got the phone under the seat which was next to driver's sit where Sharon was sitting the whole day...
Swayam took out the phone to check actually who was calling and he was relieved to see the name on the phone...it was Rey who was calling so it was safe for him to pick up the phone...he picked up the call...
Rey: Hey Sharon kahan thi tum? Kabse call kar raha hun main tumhe? Kuch to bolo ab. Kahan ho tum log Mumbai pahonch Gaye kya??
Swayam: Relax Rey mai Swayam bol raha hu... yes hum log Mumbai pahonch Gaye hai... and Maine Sharon KO thodi der pehle hi ghar drop kiya par shayad VO apna meri car mein hi bhool gayi hai...
Rey: Oh thik hai... par tera phone kyu nahi lag raha tha pura din haan? Sharon sath mein thi to hum logo se baat hi nahin karneka haan beta...
Swayam: Are phone to chalu hi tha shayad road mein network nahi hoga I guess...and shut up Sharon sath thi to you know muje use thik karna tha...
Rey: Acha ya use yad aaya mereko tera master plan work Kara ya nahi...
Swayam: Well actually Maine koi plan implement hi nahi kiya...
Rey: What? Par kyun... Swayam ye har bar tu aisa kyu karta hai...kitni efforts lagane ke baad Sharon KO manaya tha tere sath Jane ke liye aur tu lallu kahin ka aise hi vapis AA Gaya use manaya bhi nahi...
Swayam: Are par muje apni baat to khatam karne de...aainvai bich me suru ho Gaya Tu...
Maine bola Maine plan implement nahi kiya but aisa kab bola ki Maine Sharon KO nahi manaya...
Rey: Oh great that means tumne Sharon KO convince kar liya and your relationship is safe now...
Swayam: Ya VO convince ho gayi aisa laga to sahi usne kuch bola nahi but her expressions were saying that usko satisfaction hua mere me change dekh kar...
Rey: Acha agar tuje laga to for sure VO convince ho gayi because Sharon ke matter mein Teri judgement kabhi wrong nahi ho sakti I know that...
Swayam: Ya you know usko main kitne ache se janta hu right...
Rey: Ya right...
Swayam: Acha sun main ye phone Sharon KO vapis deke aata hu VO worried ho rahi hogi apne phone ke liye and main tuje ghar pe jake call karta hun bro ok...
Rey: Ya right tuje to ab vo hi dikhega ke Sharon worried ho rahi hogi...never mind yar tu ja usko phone de I know vo abhi tak to kitne rounds mar chuki hogi phone ke bare mein soch kar...
(Ab inko kya pata Sharon is least bothered about her phone...actually use pata hi nahi uska phone swayam ki car mein rah Gaya hai...VO to apni kathhak ka maza lene mein lagi Hui hai)
Swayam: Ya exactly...chal I will talk to you later bahot kuch batana hai tuje but Aram se baat karta hun baad mein...
Rey: Haan right muje bhi bahot kuch sun Na hai and bahot kuch puch Na hai to Aram se baat karte hai...hahahaha...chal bye you get going...
Swayam: hahahahaha tu bhi Na...Chal bye...
Swayam cut the call and sat in the car reversed the car and drove to Sharon's place...it was raining heavily...swayam thought ke iss waqt main door se Jana thik hoga kya??
After several brains storming session's swayam thought:
Nahin iss waqt main door se janeka idea thik nahi hai...sidha uske room ki window mein ghusta hoon aur use phone deke vapis AA jata hun...
And he climbed her window...window was closed and curtains were stretched so use dikh nahi raha tha kuch Ander kya ho raha hai...but he could hear ke Ander se music ki sound AA rahi thi...
Swayam just got his techniques right and opened the window and just moved the curtains sufficient enough to see what was going on in the room...
But what he saw was just amazing...just left him numb and his jaws were open...he could not believe that he will one day see her like that...
Sharon on the other side was not aware of all this things going on in her back side as she was so involved in dancing and music that she barely had any idea of what was in the room even...
Music was playing Ta Thai TATATA Thai...Thum TATATA...Thai- Thai-Thai...
Sharon was bringing the same sounds from her Jhanjar... and she was moving flawlessly from here to there...here feet were moving in string and tandem...
She had this big smile on her face and was enjoying the music...her hands were enacting the beats in their very way...the perfect blend of Indian Classical form was going on and it was just eye pleasing to see Sharon dance in that form...
Swayam could make out from her smile that she enjoyed dancing on classical more than anything in this world...
A pleasure was being seen on Sharon's face...she was having lots of fun doing that...still her legs were moving to the music up and down and hard to make out that rhythm and sound from her Jhanjar to match the beats of Tabla...
It was just an experience for swayam to see that Sharon was just in another world...she was not aware of anything that was going on in front of her...but her smile that million dollar smile was enough to make swayam lost her...
Swayam was so lost in her that he forgot that he was Standing on the window half holding and half standing outside...he forgot that he will lose his grip if doesn't go inside...
Fortunately the music got over and Sharon came back from her trance and she just sat on the bed with towel in her hands to brush her face and those sweat on her forehead that came after dance...
Just then She saw Swayam standing there and lost in her...he was smiling like a cute puppy and didn't know that where he was...
Sharon just got shocked seeing swayam there at that moment so she shouted on him...
Sharon: What the hell... tum yaha kya kar rahe ho??
Swayam came back to senses after hearing that...and he felt that he was losing his grip from window...
Swayam: (just shouted) oh my god I am losing it please help...
Sharon just ran to the window and took hold of swayam's hand and placed it back on window so that swayam could climb back and swayam just forced himself to climb back...
Due to that force swayam came inside at such a rapid pace that he could not control the flow of himself and he along with Sharon just fell on the bed running from window...
And on bed both of them were so lost in their eyes that they both forgot that they were on each other and needed to get up...
Both of them were so close that there no space for air to go through them...
Their lips were so dead close that they could feel each other's breath...their nose was touching each other...
Just than a loud voice came Sharon baby kya hua? Sharon baby don't worry I am coming...
But both of them here were lost in each other and suddenly brought back to reality by that voice...they both got up and got worried what to do now...
Well thats the end of this part now...I know it's unfair to leave this part here but I am deliberately doing this because I feel otherwise my readers will not ask for update or I am losing my readers so thats a deliberate attempt to keep my readers holding on to the FF...Please leave your comments on this and do hit the like tab if you all like it...as you know I will take in to account each and every comment that comes my way so be stress free and tell me honestly what you felt about the update good or bad anything will be welcomed...and as always I have replied all the comments on previous update and will reply all the comments on this update too...and how was the surprise Sukanya and Amrita (Rasmalai)? Do tell me if you have turned up to read this one...
Thank you very much for your time and patience to read this update...
Regards
Pratik...
Swayam: Sharon do you really want to have that bhuttas? I mean there is no protection to it and they might be unhygienic for you...😲
Sharon: Oh really...as if we have really made some efforts today to keep my hygiene levels...from morning to evening we had tea and ice cream and whatever thing at various stalls...to ek bhutte se kya fark pad jayega...beside I want to taste this thing...😳😳
Swayam was just dumbstruck with the cuteness she had on her face while saying this...but what was more amazing to him that she never had tasted bhuttas in her life...😆😆😆
Loved the way he understands her & she is trying to understand him...lovely chemistry...oh god...Mr Detailing...u explained the bhutta so cutelyy😛Sharon was just smiling at his cute acts. He was eating it like he has got this after ages and someone will snatch it if he delays in eating that...
Sharon actually had turned into baby who eats slowly being afraid that this will end early if she hurries in eating...Swayam was just enjoying all the antics that Sharon was doing...Swayam in mind: gosh this is a big thing for me ke subah tak jo mujse baat karne mein interested nahi thi vo abhi muje chodke jane mein interested nahi...way to go my boy you have actually won the heart of her now...
Loved his POV...about their relationship & her...my fav lines...
God please don't tell me that this was dream...and if this was a dream than I never want to wake up as this is such a beautiful dream that I can just end my life in this dream only...
The kathak dance was just amazing and he decided to come back...just in time...
She had this big smile on her face and was enjoying the music...her hands were enacting the beats in their very way...the perfect blend of Indian Classical form was going on and it was just eye pleasing to see Sharon dance in that form...😳😳😳😃
Oh goshhh...u stopped there,...i will kill u ...can't wait to read the next part😳...really sorry for commenting late
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