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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: punam2712

When do you start this

posted the prologue in september and the first part today 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
nice start
so maan is a big business men at the age of 20
coming back india after 5yrs
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
superb, beautiful n mindblowing update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART -2
AN INTRODUCTORY PART OF GEET

Dawn is the time where the darkness ends and the bright light takes over the world . A phase which assures the human that all the sadness will end on a day and happiness will be filled in his/her life . But who can over power the all mighty ?? all the things happen the way in which it is destined to happen . Can the human , an emotion filled weaker force possess the power to change their life ?? their destiny ???

A young women starred at the breaking dawn from the balcony of her flat . She noticed how the dawn spread the light and darkness was completely wiped out .But the dawn is yet to appear in her life . Her eyes were filled with nothing but the longing , pain and the sadness .. Her heart ached to fell the happiness ' she wanted to be loved , to be cherished ' to be cared for .. but can it all happen ??? over again ???

Yes , she too was a normal human loved and cared by everyone untill the evil spell broke on her in the form of accident which left her both legs paralysed ' sort of handicapped '.

Geet handa commonly known as Geet ' the prankstar was born to a upper middle class family of the Handas . Being the only daughter of mohinder handa and Rano handa , she was immensely loved and never let to cry even for once . Though brought up in a wealthy background , her parents never failed to indulge the culture and humanity in her .. She pursuaded architecture as per her fathers wish and was placed in a reputed and 1 among the top 3 construction firn in India "Khurana Construction" . she worked as a head architect and won every one's heart by her Intelligence and innocence .

Soon , her father found a perfect match for her through a common friend . The boy named "Rahul Khanna" belonged to a considerably rich family and owned the Khanna constructions . The engagement happened and it was a week before the marriage . Everything was fine till that date . geet was driving the car after leaving her friends at their place . The person driving a two wheeler before her car unexpectedly fell down . Shocked geet turned her car towards right to avoid running over him . Bt unfortunately the car dashed into a timber lorry . she was heavily injured and was admitted in the hospital . Though she was saved , the accident has made her both legs paralysed and hence handicapped . There was no feeling in both her legs automatically the news reached the bridegrooms family and they broke the alliance leaving geet and her family devasted .

There was no scars on her body but the impact of the accident had definetely left a deep scar in her heart . The once bubbly geet has now transformed into a dull and non-speaking dumb human . There was no life in her .She stopped talking to any one .. Her room became the only witness to her living .. Mohinder and rano could not take it anymore .. how can they see their only child living like a dead soul ??? they suggested her to rejoin office so that she could get a change in environment .. but she sadly smiled and asked them who would willingly give employment to a handicapped when large number of fit and healthy ones are outside ???

Days turned to months but the sadness and emtiness alone dint leave her''..

Previous part : Part 1

Next part : Part 3

My system was affected with virus guys .. just today got it serviced .. but the broadband connection is not stable .. using 2g data card which is dead slow ... ll pm everyone as soon as i get my broadband back ...
Edited by mrk-1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Beautiful update.

A different character is shown of
Geet. She is handicapped.

A jovial person turned gloomy
N dull.

Has she quit Khurana construction???

Waiting eagerly for story to begin. 😊
Continue soon😊

Edited by crazydream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: crazydream

Beautiful update.


A different character is shown of
Geet. She is handicapped.

A jovial person turned gloomy
N dull.

Has she quit Khurana construction???

Waiting eagerly for story to begin. 😊
Continue soon😊

i have tried a different concept this time ... hope it shapes out well ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
@tamanna - thanks yaar ... you are regular in commenting though am irregular in updating .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
thanks for the comment ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

superb, beautiful n mindblowing update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz..

part 2 updated buddy 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: mansi.tripathi

nice start
so maan is a big business men at the age of 20
coming back india after 5yrs

continue soon

lets take maan to be around 25 or 26 yrs 😉

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