SS: Eternally in love(part 4-pg:15)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Nice one dear

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loved the concept

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Update soon. Do pm me. And plz mention story name in subject while doing pm.

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ur update...😳

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mrk_pm

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Posted: 12 years ago

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updating this SS now ...

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Durga

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Posted: 12 years ago

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give me 10 more mins yaaar ... i have banked up some parts .. just editing it .. 😊

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Durga

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Posted: 12 years ago

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sorry for not updating all these days .. now my exams are all over and free to update 😃

PART -1
(The update is small and just an introductory about the male lead character . the next one ll be an introductory of the female lead )

Maan was pursuing his MBA in London and also looking after the business operations of the London branch of Khurana constructions . He believes only one thing : smart work is important and not hard work . He followed his dad's foot step and has made a separate identity in the world of business at the young age of 20 . He posses the attitude that one would respect and admire. Strangely he din't fell in love with any girl yet .

Today he is returning to India after 5 long years . His dad , mom , grand ma , brother dev and his wife naintara were present in the airport to receive him . The medias were waiting so very eager to take his interview since he had won the young successful business man of the year award.

As soon as he came outside , his family rushed towards him and gave bone crushing hug . guards immediately surrounded them creating a safe distance between them and reporters .

Maan hugged them dearly and bent down to touch his grandma feet .

Savitri devi hugged him [in short S.v] : khush raho beta . am so happy to see you

Maan smiled : me too dadima . missed you all .

Their family talk was disturbed by reporters who were eager to get some flashes of him .. they started bombarding questions at him .

Reporter 1 : sir , how is it feels to be in your country after 5 years ?

Reporter 2 : did you expect that you ll receive the award this year ?

Reporter 3 : to whom are you crediting this success to ?

As the crowd started increasing , the guards gestured MSK to move to his car . dev got his luggages and settled in the car and they drove towards home .

At home ,

Maans mother made him enter the home only after taking aarti . after a while , everyone got seated in the living room .

Maans dad : so maan finally you are here .

Maan smiled to his comment : where can i go without my family papa ??

Annie who returned from college just then interrupted : ahahaha bhai .. where were this family for the past five years ?? you dint even talk to me properly .

Dev : haan bhai . annie is right. You became so busy with the business that you completely forgot about us .

Maan : even I was helpless dev but my presence was needed there . you all know that its my ambition to start our companys branch in London . I just did what I had to do ..

Maans mom : now yeh sab chodo . remember you are taking rest for the whole week and no office work even at home . for now go fresh up .

Daadi : haan maan , get freshened up soon . we ll be waiting for you in the dinning table .

Maan stood up : teek hai dadima .

The next part ll be uploaded today evening .. please leave your valuable comments and hit the like button 😊

Edited by mrk-1 - 12 years ago

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vrinda22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

nice part..

maan a businessman

an young achiever not fallen in love

hmm..its becoz he has yet to see geet na..

lovely family..

Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago

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mrk_pm

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: valli22
nice part..
maan a businessman
an young achiever not fallen in love
hmm..its becoz he has yet to see geet na..
lovely family..

thnk u so much didi ..

your reply meant a lot to me 😊