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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi guys...another attempt. its not a continuation...its just another thought...i hope you guys will like it. again i repeat im not so crative...its just a thought i have penned down.

SWEET MOMENTS 2

Was is just friendship...or more than that?was it love?..."dont think of the L word madhu"... amidst all the taunting by deepali...RK and her had become great friends supporting eachother. Madhu laughed at how she saved RK from dips when she was trying to flirt with him.

she had called out for RK from the bathroom...the door slighty open and one hand out she called out to him..."RK... i forgot my towel...please give it to me"...and RK wondered whats up with her now...but he thought getting trapped by madhu was better than getting trapped by dips...so he said "sure biwi"...and picked up the towel from the bed and went to the bathroom. to his surprise she pulled him inside along with the towel. RK was shocked...but what was even more surprising was madhu was inside the bathroom fully clothed.

R: what the hell?

M: shhh (she put a finger on his lips)...and she whispered...let her go...

R: totally understood his pagal biwis plan and let out a chuckle..."you are mad"

M: they both broke into laughter and hi-five d eachother once dips had left.

Madhus thoughts had broken when her phone beeped...it was a msg from RK...

R: free ho?

M:quickly replied...haan!...par kyun?

R: coffee?

M: abhi???

R: why not?

madhu had no patience to msg anymore so she called him...

R: biwi...

M: RK...its like 1:00 now...its lunch time...

R: so????

M: so we are supposed to have lunch...not coffee

R: biwii...has anybody told you that you cant have coffee at 1 o clock?...why do you always fight with me for everything?...dont be a spoilt sport biwi...come na! please!

M: the please was good enough to make her do anything for him...she smiled to herself and said "ok".

R: fine i will pick you up in 15 mins...get ready.

madhu checked herself the 20th time in the mirror..."am i looking alright?"...soon bittuji came to her room and said "bhabhiji chief is waiting for u in the car." madhu soon ran into the car and he drove down to the nearest coffee day.

in the coffee shop...they had ordered coffee and was sipping on them when madhu asked

M: what happened to you today?

R: kyun...mujhe kya hua?

M: no...coffee...that too with me?

R: why cant i have coffee with my friend?

M: hmmm...your shoot is over?

R: no...its break time

M: so what did you do in the shoot today?...did your scene go well?...before she could continue he stopped her...

R: you ask a lot of questions dont you? why are you asking questions like a reporter from the press?...cant you keep quiet for some time?

M: no...actually idea bura nahi hai...RK...think that im a reporter and answer my questions quickly...rapid fire round...ok???

R: biwi...tang mat karo...

M: please RK...she said with a sweet smile...

R: he couldnt say anything to that lovely smile of hers for which he had fallen for a long time ago...he calmly nodded his head and said okay...

M: main hoon...madhubala reporting live from...hmmm hmmm...XYZ news...today we have a special guest RK the superstar...RK...welcome to the show.

R: smiled at his pagal biwi..."thankyou"

M: lets have a quick rapid fire round...your favourite colour???

R: black

M: food?

R: aloo paratha

M: sport?

R: football

M: passtime

R: movies

M: best friend...

R: tum

M: rk?

R: superstar

M: Madhu

R: pagal

madhu laughed at this and her interview ...fun ...laugh...all continued till he had to get back to his sets for the shoot. the coffee thing had become a daily routine with eachother. both madhu and RK waited for lunch time to come so that they could spend time with eachother. sometimes coffee...sometimes lunch or sometimes just a drive. they felt for eachother...they knew it within thier hearts that it was love...never commited.

Today was just another day...it was 1:00 pm...no msg came...no call...nothing. madhu was getting irritated. yet she dint want to show him that she was desperate...so she did not call him. she waited for him to call...2:00, 3:00, ...4, 5, 6...it was testing her patience.she still did not want to give up. 7:00 pm and the phone rang...it was RK...

R: biwi...

M: RK...dont "biwi" me ok...where were u?

R: i was busy biwi...kyun muhje miss kiya?

M: haan! matlab ...nahin.

R: tum free ho to chale?i will pick you up in half an hour ok...and he cut the call before she could say anything

M: superstar RK...what does he think of himself?...uff

At 7:30 sharp madhu was outside the entrance area...she saw RK wating near his honda SUV...his arms folded leaning close to the door ...in his while shirt and blue jeans looking as dashing as ever...her heart skipped a beat...im falling for him...she thought to herself.

RK saw his beautiful biwi...in her black suit with red border ...her hair left open...her fringes slightly flying in the breeze...awww!!!...i can make love to her right now...i cant just take my eyes off her.

.he opened the door for her and when she was comfortably seated he closed the door and quickly climbed to the drivers seat and drove off...the drive was very quiet...both of them were quiet. once they reached the destination he parked the car and they got into the lift. the lift took them to the top floor...to the terrace of a very tall building.

R: biwi...this is one of the tallest buildings of mumbai...and i love the view from here...i thought i will bring you here

M: wow!!!...her mouth wide open...her face brightened up to the most amazing sight she has seen in bombay...the city looked beautiful from here...all lit up .

R: seeing the glee in her face he asked..." you like it?"

M: i love it!!!

both of them stood close to eachother looking at the lights in the city...the amazing view the saw.

R: biwi...can i ask you something?

M: hmmm...

R: why did you fast for me for karvachaut???

M: totally not expecting him to ask something like this...she replied "why did you break my fast on karvachaut?"

R: did not expect such an answer from her...looked at her and asked..."we are friends na?"

M: yes we are...

R: (both of them were facing the wall ...looking at the city)...he slowly slid his hand into hers...held her palms...fingers intertwined.

R: madhu what if i say i like you more than a friend????

M: looked into his eyes...all she could see was love...love for her. she smiled at him...turned away looking at the city again not to face him.

R: madhu i think im falling in love with you...and i know that you like me too...is that true???

M: oh my god...he confessed...he told me that he loves me...he loves me...there was so much of happiness in her heart...she giggled like an idiot.

R: madhu im asking you something...answer me.

M: she was too embarrassed to answer that so she took his hand that was holding hers...put it around her shoulders...still not leaving his hands...for a side hugg...smiled beautifully and asked him "mil gaya jawab?"

R: smiled...tightened his arms around her shoulders pulling her more close to him... he gave a soft kiss on her cheek...and whispered into his ears "i love you madhu"...finally he had said it...he felt joy in his heart.

M: looked into his eyes...he smiled warmly at her...his dimples...i can die for them...he looks so cute with those adorable dimples...she hugged him...put her head near his broad welcoming chest and said "i love you too rishab"

R: hugged her back tightly ...never letting her go...rested his forehead on hers and asked her tum mujhe chodke nahi jaoge na?

M: never...



guys i only have ideas...but to write it down into an os is very difficult for me...i may have repeated words...phrases or sentences...thats because i dont know to write properly.please excuse.




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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice..beautifully written👏thanks for the update😃
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Aww !! its realy nyc.
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thankyou all for liking my OS...
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nicely written 😊

keep it up 👏

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Awww lovely os:-):-) so cute:-):-)
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amazing loved it so much😳
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It is Amazing
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Lovely and cute update.they confessed finally wow.thanx for pm nd continue soon.
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aww.. it was super niCe😃
lOved it..!

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