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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey my lovelies! 😃
Hope you are all well! I wanted to take a break from studies so I decided to excite and treat you with another poem! Yeah you got that right another poem! 😉 😆😆 Sorry I may have killed your love for poems! 😆 So here it is this one's from Pankhu yearning for Adi's warm embrace! 😉 ❤️
How I yearn for his warm embrace,
Tears fall down my face,
Can you see in my eyes,
How much I hate our goodbyes,
I think about you all the time,
I know in the end we will be just fine.

Hold me..Love me..be with me
the way we are suppose to be
I've always wanted to be with you
and do the things that lovers do
Tell me you want to be with me
and that we were meant to be.

Precious pain go away
Please don't
come back another day
Dreaming of you
is all I do

This fire I feel sparks, heat,exotic...burning inside
My feelings for you I cannot hide
wishing..hoping...yearning,needing you near
Oh god can you tell how much I want you dear
I can't pretend anymore
It's you...whom I adore
It's you whom I've been longing for
I just want to give you my love..my heart
and I never want us to be apart.

In the moonlight I wish on the stars that you were here
instead of being there.
One day I will feel your warm embrace
and no more tears will fall down from my face.
Hope you enjoyed this one! If you did please leave your honest feedback all comments welcome! Also if you dont like it tell me why! I wanna know guys! 😊 Thanks for your love and support! Love you all! Peace! ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sonia!!! This was beyonnnd beautiful!!! I don't know about Pankuri, but I sure feel that way for Adi!!! I was reading each line and kept thinking, Oh yess, pleaase!! Oh Adii.. How we long for your touch..

Anywayss, back to reality. This is my favorite out of all you've written. Seriously. It's damn good! Keep it up, and I hope your studies are going well. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sonia darling !
This was BEAUTIFUL ! loved reading it, and re-reading it.
it's very well written!!
How do you make it so realistic, it touched my heart! for real !
Love it so much. <3
Keep writing!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice poem, well written with thoughtful words and superb diction.

Simply awesome effort Sonia.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey sonia ,,,lovely poem

lovd it vry much ,,,,its really beautiful ,,,,,

carry on dear :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hayes Sonia ... I always go to another world when I read your poem It's beyond Awsome written ... Just superb !! ⭐️ Specially the blue lines .. Aaahhh !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That s fabulous...i don't know how you put your emotions in word ...
wooow ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww..Lovely poem..! I lyked it vry much...!! Really u have a great talent sonia sis..!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful Sonia, pl accept me as your fan!!
And keep writing moree!!!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fantastic!!! You better start copyright-ing them... otherwise I am tempted to steal them & use them... somebody stop me...

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