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Posted: 12 years ago
so guys here goes the update😃surprised naa?me update and all😆 😆 😆.i updated so fast naa😆i know.i'll keep updating fast like this😃😆sorry my frnds i know i keep u all waiting for a long.i was stuck with my exams,colg works and all .+ i'm such a lazy fellow,that's why😆.again frustrating u all with my speech😆love to see u all angry😃wanted to say many more things,but forgot😆so u guys r safe now.yes end of my small speech🤣

part 2

rey:have u guys done with ur stupid ideas and all?
gang:yes sir.
rey:gods graceok see u guys in the hall after a while me and swayam have some works to complete.
gang:ok.but don't forget ur promise😉
rey:😡guys
swayam:chod naa yaar
rey:hrr...

in taani's house

tm:taani aren't u ready yet?time for breakfast dr.come fast ur dad is waiting
taani:s mom coming...
taani comes down by the staircase wearing a party wear of red and white mix
taani's dad:wow my daughter is looking like a princess.
tm:of course she is a princess😊
taani:thanks mom thanks dad.
t d:so first day in new colg,looking hot hmm wat's cooking in ur mind?trying to fall the boys huh?😉
taani:(taani in disbelief)dad...😡
td :woh cool down sweet heart .i was just kidding😆well do u have any bf taani?i don't mind,i mean we don't mind if u have any...
taani:mom tell dad to shut his mouth or i'll do something really bad😡i don't have any bf yet is that clear dad?also i'm not in a mood to find one.if i find one i'll inform u ok😡.
t d:hmm chance to get one today😆
taani:😡dad😡.u r too much.i'm leaving.bye mom bye dad
(she had her breakfast in btw these convo ok😃)
tm:bye dr.sharon will be waiting for u naa?
taani:yes mom she said she will wait me in her house.ok bye
taani leaves home and reaches sharon's house and they together leaves to the colg.
in the colg...
swayam:wats up guys?so lets rock it.
rey:yes guys go for it
vicky:so it's our colg day,time for party.so first the dance by the louians and then the special music and rey's kiss😉
rey:not again
bharat:u can't say no now rey.it's all fixed.
nilesh:so time for our dance.lets rock it guys

the whole gang and others dance for the song disco diwane(u guys r free to imagine any other songs if u want😆)
they all danced well as always and finally it was time for that special song...
with taani
sharon:so finally we r here taani,in the st louis colg.all must be there in the rehearsal hall.colg day party would have started by now.lets go.well taani u looks so pretty i should say
taani:thanks sharon u too looks good.
sharon:thanks.well i'll introduce u to my friends.they all r so good😳.
beep..beep..sharon's phone rings
sharon:yes dad.any problem????k i'll come now
taani:wat happened sharon?why did uncle call u?
sharon:oh no prob taani.just something related to his work.have to go now.will be back in half an hr.till then u enjoy the party dr.i'll be back soon...ok
taani:hmm ok 😕
sharon leaves and taani is alone now...she heads towards the main door.all the boys around there looks at her with open mouth😆
1 boy:omg who is she?she looks hot man
2nd:haan yaar seriously...
taani ignores them and heads on

...
so finally the music is on😃
vicky,bharat,nilesh:get ready for the kiss rey...the music is on.lets see if we find ur princess for u😉
rey:thanks 4 ur help.but i'm enough to find my princess.
gand:cool rey.the music is going to end soon.so be prepared😉😆

...
here taani enters the colg main door and hears the music from the rehearsal hall and walk towards the place from where it comes(it was one of her fav song.u guys imagine any song ok)
finally taani enters the hall and the music stops and the spot light is exactly on her(ffu finally )
there was a big silence in the rehearsal hall for a while.all looked at her with open mouth.well girls where jealous of taani that she was going to kiss rey😆.now the boys where jealous of rey that he was going to kiss that beautiful girl😆(he he my head is working reverse so expect more stupid ideas from me😃)
now taani was looking all around.she din't understand wat's happening.now after that big silence it was vicky who spoke out.so rey here is that lucky girl...hmm might be the princess whom u was looking for😉
well for all this time rey was looking at her only.he was mesmerized in her beauty...of course taani did saw rey. coz she is not blind to miss a handsome one like rey.as for now no one was moving.finally rey started walking towards taani.she saw him coming towards her and she started stepping back.so the picture is clear rey walking towards taani and taani doing the reverse
finally her back hit on the wall so that she was unable to move an inch back.now rey was so close to her so she wasn't able to move away.anyway she gave a stupid try to get away but it all went in vein.
rey was looking at her eyes only.he was just lost in those pretty eyes.he felt something strange while looking at her.watever the feeling was,he felt good looking at those eyes...he never felt like that before.taani had the same feeling.she too was lost in his eyes.she was lost ,lost deep in those dark eyes.both where standing like that for a while .it was taani who finally recovered.
taani:who r u?why r u blocking my way?move away...i have to go...
rey getting his senses back
rey:(putting his finger on her lips)shh...u wan't to leave huh?
taani:(she was again lost in his eyes)no...i mean yes...
now rey hold her waist on his left hand and moved her more closer to him...
rey:oh so u really wanna leave?
taani was just silent.she was now completely lost in his eyes...
rey moved her closer to him and moved his lips towards her.finally the gap between their lips was cleared and neither was a gap btw the two.his lips touched her feathery rose lips.it was soft,so soft.but he felt like his body was freezing by touching her lips.bcoz it was so cold...
taani felt like she was in lava.it was too hot for her to handle.the moment his lips touched her she felt something unusual,unexplainable by her.but the very next moment she felt like loosing something big,loosing her world...she felt like fainting...she wanted to be free
now rey too was feeling bad.he felt like she was uncomfortable.he broke the kiss in the very moment...he looked at her.tears started rolling from her eyes.rey felt like something hard hit on his heart.he started to say something,before he could say anything she pushed him away and ran out of there
(omg i'm more than scared now.u guys must be probably with stones to throw at me.lets see how much i can increase the no.😃)
sharon was coming to the rehearsal hall and saw taani running with tears.
sharon:taani...taani where r u going?y r u crying?😕
she din't answer her
sharon:guys wat happened?
gang:oh u know her?is she new here?well she is a very lucky girl.rey kissed her.don't worry about her.she is crying of joy...
sharey together:i don't think so
gang:😕??????

ok guys i'm ready for stones,chappals,eggs or watever...i'm so sorry guys it din't go as i expected.it end up to be a disaster 🤢bad me.wat can i do?my head is not working guys.there is high chance for mistake in this update,i haven't checked if there r any.i have no courage to read this😳.cmnt guys😕



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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG firstly I wanna kill u for making us wait of sooo long!! But the wait was seriously worth it!! No sreelu I wanna hug u seriously WAT a update the kiss was SOOO emotion full!! I LUVED it !! HAAYYYEE SOO romantic!! I can imagine it all n !! Aur PLZZZ meri maa ap KA uh JO JALDI update tha NA PLZ iss aur JALDI KAR do mein wait NAHI KAR sakte!! Update soon!! N YAAR the way u expressed the emotions 👏 !! But I wanna kill u for making us wait for so long!! Awesome update!!! I LUVED it!!
Edited by Sara_Taarey22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
'Phewww' aisi kiss mujhe rey se milti tou I wud have died a zillion deaths :p :p

I loved it sreelu thankGod the wait was wrth waiting for hehehehhehe :D :D

The way he kisseddd forgettin abt everyoneee !! Omg frst meeting mein ye hua tou aage tou sab kuch hee hojayega :p :p can't wait
Plz aur nahi torture karna jaldi update karna :px
Edited by zara.92 - 12 years ago
sreelu094 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
me scared let me vanish 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res...
Unres...
Finally u update sreelu... Me was gonna kill u 😆
nw cumin to ur update... Well no way u dnt desreve chappalzz... Or anythin buh u deserve a hug 🤗 i luved it loafzz... The kiss was sooo hawwt... Intense and magical... Poor Taani cryin awww... Really awssum sreelu...

Plzzz update soon... Dnt mke us wait another century 😉 😆 😆
Edited by XTaaReyVirManX - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sree Im shocked I had to pinch myself to believe that u actually update wow thank u you're such a sweetheart🤗 now coming to the update it was super duper amazing I love it all. taani parents are so cool especially her dad lol. The kiss was cute. But I feel bad for Taani dont no why. They already are attracted to each other. I love this part so no tomatoes today lol. But u better continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Sree Im shocked I had to pinch myself to believe that u actually update wow thank u you're such a sweetheart🤗 now coming to the update it was super duper amazing I love it all. taani parents are so cool especially her dad lol. The kiss was cute. But I feel bad for Taani dont no why. They already are attracted to each other. I love this part so no tomatoes today lol. But u better continue soon.

lol😆ya i updated.u have no tomatoes for me😲that's so sweet of u😆.i know it was a bad update...gud to know that u like it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zara.92

'Phewww' aisi kiss mujhe rey se milti tou I wud have died a zillion deaths :p :p

I loved it sreelu thankGod the wait was wrth waiting for hehehehhehe :D :D

The way he kisseddd forgettin abt everyoneee !! Omg frst meeting mein ye hua tou aage tou sab kuch hee hojayega :p :p can't wait
Plz aur nahi torture karna jaldi update karna :px


SOO true ZARA kash REY mujhe Aisi kiss karta phir toh mein ALLAH ko pyaari HO jaati!!
Edited by Sara_Taarey22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sara_Taarey22

OMG firstly I wanna kill u for making us wait of sooo long!! But the wait was seriously worth it!! No sreelu I wanna hug u seriously WAT a update the kiss was SOOO emotion full!! I LUVED it !! HAAYYYEE SOO romantic!! I can imagine it all n !! Aur PLZZZ meri maa ap KA uh JO JALDI update tha NA PLZ iss aur JALDI KAR do mein wait NAHI KAR sakte!! Update soon!! N YAAR the way u expressed the emotions 👏 !! But I wanna kill u for making us wait for so long!! Awesome update!!! I LUVED it!!

seriously u din't felt it bad😲woh i was really scared that it was so lame🤢i can't say how good u all r.love u so so so much.🤗sorry for the late update dear.will try to update soon nxt time😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
ARGGG FIRST i hate u sreelu for making us wait this long!!
and OMGGG POOR TAANI ARGGG!!!! SREELU U BETTER UPDATE FAST IM DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!

other then that i loved it!! sooo glad u finally updated 🤗

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