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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha512

but it gonna take lot of the time...
my typing is quite slow today



kyu kya ho gaya???? tired???
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



kyu kya ho gaya???? tired???

no lazy😆
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Posted: 12 years ago


PART 82

Geet was shocked not understanding his words. Geet tumne kabhi pucha nhi aur maine kabhi bataya nhi. I had loved you always not from now, nor from our wedding day but since last 8 years when I was 16 years and saw you the very first time.

Geet just stood shocked trying to gauge his word. He took a deep breath and took her hand pressing it firmly. Geet I know you must be thinking why I am saying it now, that too here outside this cathedral. She didn't show any emotion still trying to consume his words. Geet today I am gonna state that part of my life which no one knew. Just keep patience and hear me out so that after that what I want to ask to you, you could answer that with free and open mind.

He again spoke, trying to rewind the most beautiful day of his life. Geet it had been 8 years back, when I came to peru with our whole family. it was a week stay here and it was the last day of our stay. I was quite disappointed then, as I loved this place. It was so calm and serene and its beauty just attracted me so much.

That day I decided to visit cathedral, it was one of the beautiful church in the whole world, and its ambience could make anyone calm and relaxed. It was early morning around 6 when I came here and the cathedral had just opened few minutes them and it was empty and silent. When I was praying, I heard footsteps of someone and that's when I saw a little girl, the girl was crying and her face was filled with tears.

Though she was sobbing silently, she did look beautiful in that form too to me and here big brown eyes were just looking at god angrily. To say I was lost in her would in itself would be less. She came and sat beside me, keeping her head on the pews (the sitting bench on the church). I felt bad for her and instantly offered my hanky to her.

To say geet was jealous was so less, if she could meet the girl on whom her husband was drooling in childhood, she would definitely kill her. She looked at his eyes which were lost in some other girl and she muttered, babaji wasn't he supposed to tell me his love story for me and he is saying about his first drooling session.

He kept going on, she looked at the hanky and then at me and gave me a glare and wiped her tears of with her hands and them rubbing them on her frock. She looked so mesmerizing, her face fully tomato red, eyes angry yet sad, nose held up in attitude and those pouting lips, I felt as if she is the most angelic thing in world and then, I asked her what happened, she again gave me a glare and said, its not my business.

Her words were rude though her voice was soft. But her tears weren't stopping at all. I could feel my heart going for her and I wanted to take her pain away the very moment. But not liking my intruding, she got up and went to aisle making her prayers. I too followed her and sat beside her, but not for praying but to hear her murmuring to god.

She was apologizing god for being rude to me as she didn't meant too but then she even blamed god himself for making her this way. The pain could be heard in her voice and all her previous rude words were all forgotten.

Then she ran out of the cathedral leaving me there. I knew there were again tears in her eyes as she ran away. I too ran back after her maintaining enough distance, just following her from far. The sun was rising in the sky and the air was cool. I saw her going through the same way we were living and followed her down.

In the mid, I saw her going inside a building and it was a hospital. I didn't knew why but I just couldn't go inside fearing something. I had a deep fear of losing her the same very second as I realized we have to be back in few hours.

I stood outside the building for a while and then went back to our hotel which was few blocks apart. I somehow convinced mom dad for extending our stay for two more days. I was more than happy with the decision.

I again ran back to the hospital and saw her again going out but with a boy 5-6 years older than her. I was so jealous to see her all smiling and enjoying with him. I so much wanted to punch the guy but he looked strong and secondly I didn't wanted her to be upset again.

She looked so bubbly then, playing with the boy, pulling his hair, making him give her piggy back. Whole day I was just following her and then they went back to the hospital. Whole two days I did the same and then it was the time for us to be back.

I again woke up early the same day reaching cathedral, hoping to have a glance of her for the last time. And it seemed as if the god fulfilled my wish as she was there again, praying on the aisle but today she looked bubbly not the crying form like the last time.

I went up to her trying to make the least possible noise, knowing she wont like my interruption. She was busy praying while I was busy in capturing her image in my heart so that I could remember her till my last breath.

After finishing her prayers, she turned around and was shocked to see me. But this time she smiled, and not a fake one but a smile that was from heart and could capture anyone's heart. I smiled back and was about to say something but she just left away.

I prayed god to let her smile the same way and left the cathedral with the hope to get her back.

He sighed taking a long breath. He came back of his reverie to look at geet who was completely fuming by now. Kya hua mishty, why are you so angry? He asked flabbergasted. She pulled his collar bringing him close" weren't you supposed to tell our love story instead of that pretty girl of yours." She gritted her teeth angrily. He placed his arms on her waist bringing her close. She struggled in his hold but he tightened his arms around her. Just listen na mishty then you say something.

He again started, it was more than a year and I hadn't seen her once after that day. I so much tried to make mom dad ready to make a plan for Peru but it seemed luck was not in my side. I got dull day by day missing her. I never find any girl as sweet as her. I tried to mingle with girls to forget her but that never worked for more than few minutes even.

But I never knew my prayers would be heard so soon, when I saw her again. It was my class 12th first day, when I saw her standing in the next corridor of our school with a bunch of other students. She was quite shy and was looking nervous. But then other students befriended her and then I realized, she was a new student in our school and was in dev's class.

It was even greater. Soon dev and she were good friends and dev used to tell me about her though I tried to act as ignorant as I can. I used to follow her in my free periods and used to keep stealing glances of her. As the time passed, she became quite friendly with all and became a talk in college due to her being an all-rounder.

But then I had to leave college for my architecture and for a whole year I couldn't see her though I kept track of everything about her in one way or the other. I would send her gifts for her on her birthday too but with annie's name or dev's.

She joined the same college as mine the very next year and it was like a blessing for me. As each day passed, my liking for her grew more and more and I myself wasn't aware when I fell for her. Or maybe I had fallen for her the very sight itself though realized late. I would dream of her and see my future ahead with her.

But never in all these could gather strength to talk to her, to confess to her my love for her. May be a fear of rejection was in my mind and the fear if she hate me then. I decided to confess her the day I would be something and would be of her worth.

Sach khu to I knew her more better than she knew herself. She was an enigma. Soft at heart, hard like coconut, strong yet weak. Her face were her mirrors. Her dilemma, her pains were like a needle for me. But she was a gem in herself. She could take anything yet won't take a word against her friends. A pure prankster was she, yet would take whole blame on herself if any problem was caused.

It was the last year of my college and was counting my days with her. But I didnt knew when dadima fixed my marriage and I just couldn't refuse to her but inside I was broken. My love which I cherished since last eight years was going to be lost forever. Time was flowing out of my hands and the day arrived when I was to be tied with someone whom I don't know neither I wished to know.

But the god again favored me when I realized, the girl is none other than, she herself. My mishty my jaan my geet, my life. I felt I got everything the very moment but the pain in her eyes was enough for me to know how she was feeling. I knew you inside out geet, tumhare dard ko tumse pehle mai jaan jata hu.

I would have stopped the marriage if that what you have wished but still there was a light in my heart that you won't regret it. I will make you realize my love which is strong enough for both of us. Isi hope k sath I married you and made you my wife.

After he finished his story, he looked down at her and saw her shocked, then her expression turning to confusion and then at last fury. He didn't knew what she was thinking now. He waited for her to speak and then she said how you could have hid such thing for me, she spoke angrily.

He looked at her in shock with her anger. Aur nhi to kya, you were loving me all along, and I had been such a dumb to not even realize and above all you didn't even proposed me. Wo to accha hua dadima ki she is smarter than you to fix this marriage warna agar apke ya mere hatho par chod dete to hum dono to sath hone se rehte. First thing after going back is am gonna thank dadima for her great decision warna aap to patani kis chudail se shadi kar lete.

Maan raised his eyebrow, hearing her calling him insensible, duffer and what not on his face. And here he is listening his insult silently actually knowing she is saying truth too. Then suddenly she realized that how come dadima knew about all this as he said he never told anyone, but yet dadima was much smarter than both of us and must have figured it out seeing his deewanapan.

Then she tried to remember her visit to peru 8 years back but couldn't gather her meeting him. She pouted her lips at that, not liking her memory weakness. Ab why are you making faces after giving me so many curses, taunted maan. She ignored the taunt and said, why I couldn't gather meeting you. That's because meera told me you went to peru for your depression treatment for a month then and must have been already so tensed to remember that small visit and in during college times you didn't knew me so it was possible you didn't noticed me or may had noticed and ignored.

She smiled with the explanation and hugged him tight in happiness. She just thanked god for giving her such a awesome person who took all her deeds and gave her just happiness. She was hugging him tight when she actually realized the reason for him calmness in the initial days of their marriage.

She immediately pushed him making him step back in shock and said, you always knew about my nature, my pranks and that's why you used to be so calm when I would try to make you feel hurt or give you problems. He just smirked looking at her O shape mouth and he just wanted to take them full in his lips but well the place was holy and it won't be nice so he hold back his urge.

You, you are cheater maan, geet whined like a baby while he took her back in his embrace while she hit his chest in annoyance. He held her hand and said, comeon geet, no sensible person would have married a psycho like you except me who knew you a far better than you and could guess from far away kab kaun si khichdi tumhare dimag me pakti h. she turned her face away in hurt hearing his words while a smile formed on his lips.

And I wouldn't had even let any other person to make you his, as you were born to be mine and its only me who have the right to cherish each of your antics which make my life worth to live, he whispered in her ears. She smiled hearing his soft yet lovely words and hugged him back with a full force.

After a silence of a minute or two, he said, geet it's the same place where I met you the very first time, and the same place I wish you to be mine forever and ever for all the afterlives too, with all your happiness and agreement. Geet will you grant me my wish, will you agree to be mine again here the ery place which had seen our first meeting, would you marry me again geet?

He waited and waited for a while for an answer but didn't got any. He parted her a little and cupped her face, she nodded no in denial and he was shocked to hear that as an answer. Wasn't he thought she would agree for the marriage but she declined outright.

After a while of silence she said, maan though I wasn't happy during the marriage, but after a while I realized it was the best thing that happened to me. And for me that marriage is everything though I wasn't happy at that time but I do cherish it and don't regret it maan.

Maan smiled hearing her confess her heart but then again said, geet who says that marriage is inst important. It gave me you, and I would never try to deny it but today before starting our relation in true sense I would like to take the vows again and would like to give you memory of a happy dream wedding which every girl dreams of. Can you just grant my single wish love, to mark this day as our union day in true sense.

After a short while she actually realized the sanctity of the marriage, the first brought the individuals together and the other one is marking their soul as together. She smiled wide in acceptance while he returned her a bright smile in response. Holding her hand, they both made way for their wedding in the church.

Precap: Aj ki raat h sare adhikar ke

The most awaited part SR😳


NOTE: guys I want to know which type of SR you guys want. Is it the simple one without any detail or the full types( ab samaj jao khud).

I want my maximum readers to enjoy the part so please tell me your choice. The maximum votes would win so please let me know and it's a real request guys.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome .. Zabardst Update 😛
& I want Full SR 😉 😉
Jaldi dena Update 😳 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey I am the first to comment...wow...fantastic update...what a man, kudos to you khurana...continue to be this way with geet and keep her cocooned in your embrace for ever...loved your writing style and eagerly waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update ...
we want the full romantic and passonate SR
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! The past was extremely beautiful!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
omggg maan was in love with her from longgg time and never said it

love dadimaa
who knew it and made maaneet married


omggg sr to detail se banta hain
after this long wait😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet khuse hi gussa ho rahi thi...pagal hai sahi mein...but m speechless seeing maan's love fr her...

superb n beautiful n mindblowing update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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