Rusty & Ajit-part3 updated-Ajit's GF is.. - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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I loved it it was awesome!!!!!! VERY Nice!!!!!1 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrystalBue345

I loved it it was awesome!!!!!! VERY Nice!!!!!1 👏 👏 👏

thnx😛

sorry guys but i was out today and i still haven't done my hw so can't update tonight but i promise that i will update tomorrow...i'll make it up to you all

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Preview: Ajit has a girlfriend and guess who it is and we will meet the rest of the family members
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Posted: 19 years ago
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maybe or maybe not

you'll find out in about 15 minutes

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Heya guys, i was actually very busy with school and i didn't wanna get behind in the first few weeks.. anyways thnx for waiting and here's the next part

Part 2:

We see Ajit walking casually towards the end of the living room. He turns right and carefully walks down the stairs. Carefully because these are old steps and are made of wood so they can break any moment. He is still walking while taking in the scene. the shining bright light gleaming in the room, old, rusty walls, and a small figure sitting on the carpet which was placed on the floor. We can't see anything about the fihure except that there is a person there and all we see is in black. (you know how sometimes in order to create suspense, directors often make the person that is there in black. like the background color and this view is about 2 centimeters from where Ajit is standing)
The figure has their head bowed and slowly put her head up and takes the arti. Ajit stands behind him/her and prays silently to himself. Then he sits next to the figure and we see it's none other than..??

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Going back to Kandy. She goes up the stairs slowly and we hear her heel clicking against the shiny steps. In the background we hear Randhir and Dheeru talking about the meetings they have this morning and how happy everyone will be that the Kapoor's are back now. Kandy. being a slow walker, finally reaches the top out of breath. We see a lady in a sari walking up to her. The sari was a plain light pink sari. The lady's hands were moving and we could hear the bangles making noises as they were clinked against one another. The lady puts one hand on Kandy's shoulder while the other resting next to her hips. Kandy looked up and kinda smiled. The lady spoke.

Lady: Kya hua tuje? (what happened to you?)

Kandy: oh kuch nahie. main to sirf sab ko kehna ke liye upar aiyee ki (shouts)THE KAPOORS ARE BACK!!! (oh nothing. i just came upstairs to inform everyone that the kapoor's are back!)

We see a smile forming on the lady's lips and then slowly we see it's Nilu.

Nilu Deol: Wife of Dheeru and mother of Kandy. She treats Ajit like her son and never thought of Ajit any less of a son as Kandy a daughter. She is a housewife and is a simple, outgoing, trying to be modern mom, wife, sis-in-law, and a daughter-in-law.

that's it for now and i will reveal who the figure is in the next part. sorry but i don't have time right now. gotta study for a test, got geometry homework, and gotta study for two quizzes that i have on friday. tell me what you think abot who the figure is. hint: you never thought it would be this person!

Edited by Indian101 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awww man!...More suspense! lol I like how the story's going though😃...Don't worry sweetie, continue whenever you get the time. I know what u mean by being preoccupied with school. When you'll get to uni, it'll be MUCH worse!🤢
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Posted: 19 years ago
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~DOSTI KI KHATIR~

Part 3:

The figure turns around and we see the one and only BIJI standing there.

~CHARACTER SKETCHh~
Biji- in her mid 70's and treats the Kapoor family as her own. She loves to be modern but fails and is very close to her grandchildren considering Aji her grandson too. She can be filmy at times and is very lovable grandmother. Always supports her grandchildren and is wishing for great-grandchildren from two of her grandkids.

A smile lashes on both their faces but then suddenly as quickly as the speed of light the smile vanishes from Biji's face and she slowly lifts her ahnd up. Ajit, shocked, slowly lifts his hand up too and in a ver slow process their hands make a sound as they are hit against one another: splat! Ajit quickly hugs Biji while Biji tires to put away the arti ki thali which she had in her hand on the table nearby. Ajit realises that Biji has the thali in her hand put his hands on top of the fire and moves it around the diya. Then he passes his hands on his hair and smiles appogeticaly at Biji. Biji puts the thali away and gives a big hug to her granson. Tears of happiness form in her eyes as she hears Ajit say the word she was pining to hear all these years: girlfriend.(There you go guys...Ajit's girlfriend is BIJI and not Rusty)

Ajit: Girlfriend, ab to mein aa gaya hoon to ab promise karo ki no rona dhona aur sirf shor machna. (he is saying that while still hugging her) (tanslation: Girlfriend, now i'm here so no more crying and only noise making as in partying)

They let go of eachother and Ajit slowly wipes the tears in his girlfriend's eyes.

Biji: To abhi yaad hain ki tum mujhe girlfriend bula the ho? (Translation: You still remember that you used to call me girlfriend?)

Ajit: Haan aur yeh kya? Apna boyfriend ko nahin poocho giye ki mein kasia hoon, kab aaya, kaise aaya, kyun nahi baatayien? (Translation: Yes and what's this? You won't even ask your boyfriend how he is, how did he come, when he came, why didn't i inform first?)

Biji: (letting out a chuckle) acha to mein jaayab deti hoon..tum teek hon, tum kal raat aya par raat ko do baje aur hum so rahe the aur tum sab nahin chate the ki hum uth jaaye, tum KLM ki flight se aye the jiska time tha waha se do baaje se flight leena aur phir tum sab ne Europe ka Amsterdam Airport mein do gaante goo zara the aur phir India mein aye ek baaje par plane mein kuch problems the aur isiliye ab sab ko adha ganta plane mein the, ap saab chathe te ki yeh suprise ho isliys hume nahin baatya. (Translation: Ok then i will give the answers...you're fine, you guys came last night at 2 AM and we were sleeping so you guys didn't want to wake us up, you huys came in the KLM flight in which you guys had to board from London at 2 PM and then there was a 2 hour wait in Europe's Amsterdam Airport and then you reached India at 1 AM but there as some problem in the plane so you guys waited 30 minutes in the plane, you all wanted it to be a suprise so you guys didn't tell us)

Ajit is shocked as to how she came to know all this and then a light bulb pops up in his head and he realizes how she knew this stuff.

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Nilu is excited and she runs downstairs while Kandy goes to the other rooms to tell others. First she goes to a room that is to the right of her and she sees the door is closed so she knocks impatiently. SHe waits about 2 seconds and is about to knock again when her mouth drops open at seeing.......... in front of her.

That's it for now. I'm trying to make longer parts but my teachers are so bent on giving me homework on the 3rd week of school to main kya karo? anways, guess who's in fornt of Kandy and i will write soon.. until then bye.

Edited by Indian101 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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always leaving cliffhangers aren't ya? 😡 😆 that was an awesome update! 😃 thanks so much sweetie! 👏 😃

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