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Posted: 13 years ago

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And yes criteria still remains the same... you have to comment... at least occasionally...

I don't send PMs from the main Account 'shraddska' so no point sending a buddy request there...

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shraddska

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Posted: 13 years ago

Can You Forget The Past...

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Chapter 47: Coming Closer

Chapter 48: Nafrat Paas Aane Na De...

Chapter 49: Planning To Party

Thread 9

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ananya123

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Posted: 13 years ago

I'm going to unres this by Friday. I have my exams going on! Sorry Shradds...

But here's wishing you a super Diwali filled with lots of love & light!

*Edited*

Shradds,

You've used language beautifully and each and every word seemed to flow without any effort. The story/plot is so realistic and your characters are complex people with their own flaws and issues in life... It's all so REAL!

There's something about this story that I can relate to and the way you've expressed Arnav's state of mind just clutches my heart.

It is impossible to walk through this life without hurting someone or being hurt by someone. Sometimes we need to forgive ourselves; sometimes we need to forgive others. Easier said that done - true, but there's no point harboring feelings of anger and resentment against either yourself or someone else. Only through love can we stop becoming prisoners of our past! I hope that Khushi's love can help Arnav forgive himself and forget the past that haunts him so much...

Your writing conveys that you have a deep understanding of intricate human relationships.Those we love, at some point in time, have wounded us. We all know the pain of disappointment and betrayal. All this leads to so much of pain that we can't even fully understand our own feelings of anger and hatred that are developing within us, before it's too late. Because of all the pain that a relationship can give us, we don't even realize when we go through this process by which our most dear and treasured bonds with those we love are sometimes destroyed. But I'm glad that Khushi decided to forgive Arnav and let go of the past before any of this happened to her...

I LOVE the way you've unfolded this story so far and the way you have beautifully portrayed the issues that affect people and their relationships.

It's 3am here and I'm really sleepy so I'm sorry if I'm not making any sense!

Keep writing wonderful stuff, like you do already!

Update soon! :)

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tina_1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

yeyyy me second

congo for new thread

awesome part

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Posted: 13 years ago

Res

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isse kehte hain dosti...res pe bhi like...😆 shukriya KC and Ananya...

HAPPY DIWALI...🤗

Now COMING (CLOSER) to update...

Loved it...how you portrayed the uneasiness or discomfort of Arnav...👏

GOSH...Arnav still has fear of losing her...he is still living in past...I think he is not being able to forgive himself for what he has done in the past...

I simply loved that part where you describe them coming closer in last month...

working together...catching glimpse of each other...

he picked her up in his arms...

her kisses...

waiting for the time when he will come out of past and how khushi will make it possible...

YOU ARE AWESOME

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