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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome dear

Loved it

Continue soon

Will be waiting for epilogue

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Posted: 12 years ago
Fiannly cuaght on!

love the trust geet has in her maan!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful one...
loved maan and maan's father's fighting over their angel...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazinggg update di...
Toh chudail pari mental assylum pohoch gayi...very good..sahi punoshment mili use...
Awww...Maaneet got their angel...
Ufff..Maan fighting with hus whole family for his angel...it was ssooo ccuutteee...:-) :-) :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eagerly waiting for epilogue😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi dear..

I don't know wat should I say.. should I be happy or sad.. OO RABBA.. was not a story from a concept which I had for days in my mind but it just came and I penned it down but wat it was a surprise for me when you al love it so much. Initially I had just 5 parts in my mind and would have ended it with it but seeing the immense love and response for it I had to extent the story and here today it ending with my EPILOGUE.. hope tat you all love it.

I know tat I never reply anyone but its very tough for me to do. the very little time I get I use to update my FF and these days being free I use it for completing some of my updates. Please don't get angry tat I did not reply as I think the love which I hold for you cant be just expressed with few mere words from me.

The best and most beautiful things in this world
cannot be seen or even heard,
but must be felt with the heart.

And m thankful to you all for showering all your love on me and my work…I don't have words today for you but trust me Shoba.. does fall less of words when it comes to express herself.. Its strange na when I give such lengthy updates I don't get words to thank you but its true I don't have.. But I do feel the love in my heat which you all gave me..

I specially thank each one for their immense trust and love for me and my work.. I don't know whether I will be back with a season 2 for OO RABBA as some have asked.. As right now no story in mind for it..

Hope you all loved this sweet small journey with OO RABBA and enjoy the Epilogue..

EPILOGUE

Geet: Maan.. Ohhh Maan..

Maan: Hmmm..

Geet: Where is Mehar, Maan..

Maan who was busy is his file looked up to see his wife Geet asking for some Mehar. He was confused to hear tat name, as he did not know anyone named Mehar.

Geet: Aise kyu dekh rahe hain aap. I asked where is Mehar.

Maan: Jaan.. if m not mistaken than I don't know anyone named Mehar in this house.

Geet: uff.. Maan mazak nahi.. m seriously asking you where is Mehar.

Maan: m too serious Jaan. I know Raj- My Dad, Naina-My Mom, Savitri Devi- My Dadima, Annie- My sister and you're my love, my wife Geet.. and yaa my Angel.. she is so cute na.

Geet: Maan.. ushi angel ka naam Mehar Maan Singh Khuranna hain.

Maan: Wat.. when did you keep tat name Jaan..

Geet was getting hell angry on him now and she literally burst her anger on him.

Geet: Maan.. I asked where is Mehar and for kind information I would like you to know her real name is Mehar Maan Singh Khuranna and not Angel. Do you get it.

Maan got up from his seat and held her by his shoulder.

Maan: Jaan.. tum bhool rahi ho.. she is Angel Maan Singh Khuranna.. you remember I named her Angel.

Geet: Maan..

Maan: Jaan…

Geet: Mehar.. right now in front of me..

Maan: Phir se Mehar.. its Angel, Jaan.. Angel.

Geet: ohh really. Bu i don't see any angel here.

Maan: Ya.. she is only my Angel na.. so how can you see her Jaan.

Geet: Bahut hua Maan.. Just call her right now. Since last 1 hour m running behind her with this glass of milk and she is just not getting.

Maan: Rehne do Jaan.. Bachi hain.. She will drink it later.

Raj: Haan.. Geet.. why do you force my Angel for this yuck milk. Wat say Angel.

Maan and Geet saw Raj coming with Mehar.. uff Angel on his shoulder who had a chocolate in her hand. Geet gave an angry glare to both while Mehar got scared but smiled back to her Mumma.


Angel: Mumma.. Dadu gave.. me not.. see Dadu.. I said na.. Mumma.. angry.

Raj: Opps.. Police Mumma.. angry.. m sorry Mumma.. but you know.. Angel.. loves chocolate not yucky milk. Hain na Angel.

Angel: Haan.. Dadu.. milky milky bad.. chocolate good. Yes na Dadda.

Maan: Yup Angel..

Geet: Mehar.. down right now…

Angel: No.. Angel.. wannna.. have .. piggy ride.. Dadu.. pomisled… me.. piggy ride..

Geet: Piggy ride.. Dad… let her down right now.

Raj: No… Angel and Dadu going for piggy ride.. right Angel..

Angel: right Dadu.. wanna.. come Mumma.. Dadda.. will. Give.. piggy ride.. for.. Mumma..

Maan: Wat.. Angel.. Mumma.. is fatty.. see..Dadda… bone break.. with Mumma…

Angel: Olle.. Angel.. forgot.. Mumma.. fatty na.. hain na Mumma..

Geet: haan.. Mumma.. very fatty.. happy..

All saw Naina and Dadima coming towards them.

Naina: Hogaye Shuru.. I swear Maa… this Dadu-Angel-Dadda team will never give up.

Raj: Jaaneman.. hum dene walo mein se nahi..

Naina: Bas Karo Raj..

Dadima: Angel.. get down and have this milk first.

Angel: Sexy… Angel. No milky.. Angel.. chocolate..

Dadima: Maan..

Maan turned other side the moment he heard Angel saying sexy.

Dadima: Maan.. tum ishe bigaad rahe ho.. You know yesterday she said Sexy

to me in front of Mrs. Sharma and it was so embarrassing.

Angel: Sexy.. why shouting at Dadda.. you look.. sexy na… haina na Dadu..

Raj gulped hard seeing his own mother staring at him.

Naina: Angel.. she is Badi Dadi not sexy..

Angel: nope.. Jaanneman.. she is sexy.. hain na Dadda..

Naina: Jaanneman..

Angel: Yes.. She sexy… you Jaanneman.. Dadu said.

Naina: Raj….. wat is this.

Raj: Kyu. Jaaneman.. tu ho na meri Jaaneman..

Angel: Jaannema.. no shouting at Dadu.. Angel.. getting angry.. look.. Angel.. eyes like Dadda.. big big….

Geet: Oye.. Maan Singh Khuranna ki sherni.. ab neeche uttar.. and have this milk.. Enough of your sexy and Jaaneman..

Angel: Naaa.. Angel.. piggy ride. Dadu.. piggy ride.

Geet: Dad.. stop right there.. agar aapne ek kadam bhi liya na.. than I swear.. aapko aaj khane mein sirf boiled vegetables milege.

Raj: wat.. boiled vegetable.. Geet beta.. its not fair.. Oyye Angel..get down.. teri Mumma.. Hitler ban juki hain ab.

Angel: no.. poblem.. Dadu… Angel hain na..

Raj: Angel hain na.. but Angel. Beta… You Mumma.. is the boss. Here.. and.. Dadu.. does not like boiled vegetables… so please..

Angel: Naaa.. Angel.. piggy ride.. piggy Dadu.. pwease..

Geet: Mehar.. right now..

Maan: Jaan.. rehne do na.. please..

Geet: Maan.. aap chup rahe hain. You and Dad.. its getting too much now.. pata nahi chale kab aap dono ish shaitan ke liye fight karte ho and when you team up against us for her.

Maan: Jaan.. if you want I can come to yourside but kya hain na.. inh dino kuch jyada hi cranky ban juki ho tum. So don't wanna take risk with you.

Geet : Haan.. and its because of you. did I tell you to do this.

Maan: nahi.. par.. haq hain na..

Geet: Maan.. don't try to divert me.. get her down and make her to drink this milk.

Geet hands the milk glass in his hands and goes away pouting in anger while Maan looks at his Dad and Angel with fake anger.

Maan: Gussa ho gayi na.. Dad.. its all coz of you and Angel.

Raj: Me..

Angel: Me.. naa.. Dadda.. lie.. Mumma.. fatty..you said na.. Dadda bad..

Raj: haan.. Angel.. Dadda.. Lie..

Maan: Oyye.. bas karo aap dono ab.. get down Angel and have this milk.. nahi tho Mumma meri bandh baja degi.. Come on Dad. Get her down.. and you Angel finish this milk right now.

Raj: Wahhh.. Maan.. kya patli maar di tumne.. Sach hi hain.. you are nothing in front of your wife.

Maan: Beta aapki ka hoon Dad.. Sangat ka asar.. you know.. Jaisa Baap waisa beta.

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Geet: Hmmm.. You na be Mumma's boy haan.. not like tat Mehar Maan Singh Khuranna. She na. she is a Dadda's girl.. and always ready to fight with me for Dadda… but now Mumma not alone.. Mumma's Armaan will be with her..

Angel: Naaa…. Armaan baby.. Mehar.. togeltehr.. not Mumma.. baby…

Geet pouted her lips once again looking at Mehar and than at her belly which which showed tat she was 6 months pregnant. She patted her belly as if telling it tat he will take her side.

Geet: Na… Armaan baby.. my side.. not Angel..

Angel: Dadda.. Mumma.. see. Mumma.. she telling baby.. not Angel..

Geet: Haan.. Angel- Dadda.. team na.. so Baby- Mumma team..

Angel: Naa.. na.. na.. Angel- Baby- Dadda team hain na Dadda..

Maan carried Angel in arms and settled next to Geet who was half sleeping on the bed.

Maan: Haan.. Angel..

Angel: Pal.. Mumma.. saying na..

Maan: Mumma. Mad.. she jealous as Dadda loves Angel more na..

Angel: Haan.. Mumma mad.. Mumma..jealthous…

Geet: Haan Haan. Mumma mad jealous all na.. Angel and Angel Dadda nice na.. wait.. let baby come.. than I will tell who is nice..

Angel: Pal Mumma.. Dadda says.. Angel best. Mumma mad na..

Maan looked up at Geet who was frowning and giving him glares.

Geet: Angel.. Dadda.. na darpok.. you know medak..

Angel: medlak.. ohh.. frocg… but Dadda.. office.. Hiltler na…

Geet: haan.. but home.. he is medak.. you know he get scared of Mumma.. Mumma.. one sound and big eyes Dadda will be medak.. you wanna see..

Angel: Yesl.. Mumma.. Angel.. wanna.. see.. medlak.. Dadda.. medlak..

Maan: Nahi Angel.. Mumma na telling lies.. she na.. she wants you to be her side so telling tat Dadda Medak.. but you know na.. Dadda strong.

Angel: Pal Dadda..Angel.. saw.. Dadda.. getting scared of Mumma.. see.. you na.. sleeping.. there night.. Angel saw.. Mumma.. shout .. Dadda.. and Mumma.. sent.. there.. sofa.. Mumma. big eyes.. Dadda .. fear.. Hain. na Mumma.. Angel wright na..

Geet: wah re.. mera Bacha.. You are too good..

Geet pulled Mehar to her and she almost jumped on her lap kissing her mother.

Angel: See.. Angel always right.. see Dadda.. Angel.. know.. Dadda medlak.. hain na Mumma..

Geet: yes sweetheart..

Maan: Haan.. haan. Ab Mumma-Angel. Together na. so Dadda medak.. no Dadda chua.. hain na angel..

Angel: chtua.. wat..

Geet: chtua.. no beta.. mouse..or say rat.. Dadda. Mouse… Kya Maan.. atleast medak was good par yaa.. this name is too good for you.

Maan: geet. main keh raha hoon bas karo.. bachi ke samne meri izzat..

Geet: izzat.. Where was it last night.. Uske samne.. kiss karte samay kuch nahi hota na.. do you know she goes round telling how Dadda kisses Mumma.. sharma nahi na aapko..

Maan pulled Geet by her shoulder kissing her cheeks while Mehar closed her eyes with her hands.

Maan: Kya hain na.. my Jaan looks sexy day by day so I cant.. you know..

Angel: sexy.. Dadda.. Mumma not sexy.. badli.. Dadi.. sexy.. you know sexy..

Geet: chup besharam. Don't listen to Dadda… he na.. medlak no chua.. so listen to Mumma..

Angel: Olle… Mumma. How can Angel.. listen to Mumma only.. Angel. Dadda-Mumma Love na.. so listen to Mumma-Dadda.. and baby listen to Angel.. hain na baby..

Mehar bends down and places a soft peck on Geet's belly while Geet threaded her hair. She soon fell asleep patting the baby to for a sleep. Maan and Geet smiled seeing her antics. Since the day she got to know tat they will have a baby she always made it to sleep like Geet does to her. Geet lay her down on the bed while Maan covered her with the duvet. Geet settled herself in between, as she knew tat Maan would come and place Angel at the side while Maan made sure tat Angel was surrounded with extra pillows. He settled besides Geet pulling her closer while she moved into him.

Maan: Jaan.. yeh theek nahi.. you tell her tat I fear you.

Geet: Nahi tho.. sach hain na.. and when you and she trouble me..

Maan nuzzled his nose into her neck puling her closer while she wrapped her hand.

Maan: Woh tho mera pyar hain na.. and you know na Jaan tat I like to trouble you..

Geet: haan. Tats why you say tat m fatty na..

Maan: woh tho hain Jaan.. but you look more beautiful like this.

Geet: Maan..kya kar rahe ho..

Maan: Pyar..

Geet: Angel..

Maan: she is asleep Jaan..

Geet: Maan.. she will get up.. you know na..

Maan: Nahi.. she is very tired today… she wont..

Geet: hmmm..

Maan: Jaan.. I love you..

Geet: I love you too Maan.. Pyar karo na.. Maan..

And there they started they love all over again.

Here my OO RABBA ends..

Do like and comment for the last time..

Yours

Sdlife19

Shoba...

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome epilouge👏
maaneet wid deir angels ws awesome
sad dat dis ss hs come to an end...
waiting for another one frome ur side😊
Edited by moni6262 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
M gonna miss this...
Lvd it... Awsm work Shoba..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely epi..wow te way my maan-dadu-and they angel making hell of geet's life was lovely cute scenes.. angel , or mehar..lovely family..my maaneet.. now geet is 6 months pregnant, and naughty maan still loving his geet ..i love te update so so much.. love os, thanku for giving tis lovely os...
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Maan's angel is so shaitan.. Happy Maneet family.. Amazing. Nice ending.

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