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Posted: 12 years ago
it was very nic plzzzupdate soonand do pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
ya we all r safe.its nt tat bad here bt 1 ov my frnds has gone 2 NY 4 some work.havnt heard abt her yet.
plx pray 4 her!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
yippie finally tumne kuch tho toda sa beautiful update dediya aur baaki ke liye hum intezaar karenge
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey luved the update ... Jaldi pura update doo na ... Plsss ... Finally rey ko pata chal gaya ki ansh uski beta hai...!! Jaldi se pura update de do na ...!!!:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
hawww... this time i'm so late...sowwiieee... busy wid studies...

okay coming to update YAYYY!!!! finally rey came to know dat ansh is his and kriya's son...

i'm so happy... not happy happiest...

but otherwise also widout knowing him being his son..rey was taking care of ansh just like a father...good to see drastic change in him...

HAWWW... viha separated and neha married a man elder to him... really feeling bad for him...

kya kriya ko sach mein kuch yaad nahi...

loved d scene when rey was feeding kriya soup...

and loved kriya and ansh's bond... angel and her baby...awwiee...

so ab i am hoping we will get more kriyaansh moments...

and it is still not completed...

its okay do it when ur net will get fixed...




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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey hie last gym also U didn't pm me and again u didn't plzzz next tym do pm me wen u update plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey..i read all d 3 threads of u'r dis..i really luv it..u really make emotional at sum parts..just awesum..it took me 2 whole days to read all d parts.. It'z a request..plz pm me wenever u update plz..
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Posted: 12 years ago
my dear readers n all my frnds!!
em really very sorry 4 making u wait 4 so long bt u knw the weather conditions here!!n my frnd who ws in NY!!I ws really worried abt her so cudnt come n came 4 short periods bt cudnt update..
i apologise 2 u all!!
nw tat em here thou i wont b updating regularly due 2 some personal probs bt this update wud b finished soon!!
love u all
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 44
em really sorry 4 the very long pause ppl bt trust me it wsnt solely my fault.still i apologise 2 u 4 the delay.ll try 2 b regular 4m nw on!!love u all 4 bearing wid me 4 so long
plx bring poppy n meow bck!!!
aftr knowing tat he ws ansh's biological father n he let his son live like orphans 4 sucha long tym made him feel guilt pangs!reyaansh always kept thnkng hw 2 mend his mistake?
he ws the more guilty 2wards kriya as he let her suffer.he ruined her married lyf n evrythng.kriya ws still down wid fever.rey sat by her bedside 4 long hrs n made food 4 her n tried 2 b wid her all the tym.kriya owing 2 the amnesia wsnt aware ov his real intentions thot tat its coz ov her disinterest tat she won his love bck.she tried 2 take advantage ov the situation by tryng 2 come near 2 rey.he ws bearing this wid great difficulty,leaving the situatn before it gets 2 late ws really difficult 4 him.
the tom & jerry game ws still on wid kriya trying 2 woo rey n rey tryng nt 2 make her feel bad or involved in her again n break her heart.
NIGHT
rey ws lying on his bed wid kriya's picture in his hand
r:kriya!hw cn i tell u the truth?i cant go away 4m u neithr cn get closer 2 u.it wud giv u even more pain.u r my brother's wife n i cheated upon u so i dnt deserve u even.hw cn i b so insane tat i let u come closer 2 me?it wud just bring more disaster.no kriya i wont let tat happen
kriya(from brhind the door)y eagle y?wots wrong wid me??wot did change tat u acting as a stranger wen u came bck 4m ur mission??did u start loving sm1 else?did u marry sm1 in the mission??
r(startled) kriya!wen did u came?
k:tats nt the answer 2 my question eagle!tell me wot changed between us??
r:kriya!i wanna confess smthng 2 u.idk hw u gonna tak this n hw ll u react 2 this??
k:sure.go ahead.nothng cn b more painful than ur ignorance 2wards me.
r:ok lets go 2 the seashore
k:lets go
n rey took her in his car 2 the seashore.very cool breeze ws blowing n it ws sucha lovely site.kriyaansh were walking barefooted on the sand wid the water waves touching their feet.kriya ws enjoying it completely
rey(breaking the ice) so kriya i wanna coonfess smthng 2 u
k:ya sure go ahead.
r:kriya u call me eagle.isnt it??
k:yeah!!so?
r:well tats just my name in my unit.its nt my real name
k:i knw.
r:do u knw wot my real name is?
k:yeah!vick told me.its rohan raj(just a hypothetical name.4got wot i mentionaed earlier n it d b 2 hectic 2 search it in the past epis 😆 )
r:no.its nt..
k:then wot it is??
r:reyaansh singhaniya...
kriya ws dumbstruck😲 she stopped breathng n her heart stopped beating 4 once..rey got worried
r:kriya,kriya r u ok?
he tried shaking her n she fell unconcious in his arms.rey paniked like hell.he picked her up,placed her in his car n went 2 hospital.
the doctor said it ws just normal.vasovagal syncope(sorry 4 introducing this medical term here bt i really wanted 2 😉 4 those who dont understand,dnt bother n move ahead) she got emotional fainting.aftr smtym kriya ws bck 2 conciousness..she said the 1st wrd"reyaansh"wen she ws concious
k:reyaaansh..reyaansh..
r:em here by ur side dear!!em sorry u fainted cx ov me.
k:plx dnt go away.u r my teddy..i cud never tell u bt i always loved u n i ll keep on loving u till my death..
rey placed a finger on her lip
r:no dear!plx dnt talk abt death..
k:nw i came 2 knw y u were acting so strange.i swear reyaansh i dint push pinky..i swear..plx dnt leave me like u left me yrs ago..if u leave me i ll die..plx dnt...
r:sshhh kriya!!calm down..em nt gng anywhr..em nt leaving u...plx dnt strain urself.u r already v tired.
k:i dint ruin ur family.
r:i knw it dear!i knw n pinky has gained conciousness n she told me evrythng..
k:really?wen??
r:ya its 4 real.she ll visit u soon.dnt wrry..
k:rey!i wanna go home.
r:lets go dear
n they went bck home.
the next day pinky came 2 meet kriya.she apologised 2 wot she did wid her n thr were lots ov formal talk among them.rey ws also thr.they talked 4 hrs then had dinner 2gethr wid vicky n ansh.it ws fun 4 them.it ws more ov a reunion.their mothers were also present.thou mrs singhaniya wsnt liking it,she hated kriya 4m the core yet she had 2 act sweet 4 her daughter n sons.
the dinner ws over n evrybody left except the inhabitants kriya,rey,vicky n ansh..
MORNING
vick ws gng 2 the hospital.he ws really upset wen he saw kriyaansh bck 2gethr like old tymes.he knew nothng can b changed bt seeing them 2gethr brought bck old memories 2 him,his college memories,memories ov a lady the 1 n only lady whom he loved the most,his 1st n last love:NEHA!!whom he had placed in the most secure n faraway corner ov his heart n brain aftr his marriage wid kriya.the singhaniyas n shekhawats hav lost contact wid swayam since then.the only connecting link ws sharon who aftr lots ov tussle made her way into shekhawat family as swayam's wife bt she wsnt allowed 2 interact wid them aftr wot happend btween vicky n neha.
he ws lost in thots wen he caught sight ov a baby girl crossing the road.he intantly applied brakes.the grl screamed so he worriedly got outta his car 2 c if by mistake the grl got hurt.
he saw tat the girl wsnt injured bt ws just bit scared.he gently caressed the girl's hair.
v:u r ok sweety!nothing happened 2 u.
girl:okay(still sobbing)
v:btw wot r u doing alone on this road at this time ov the day?where r ur parents??
g:i ws angry 4m my mom so i ran off 4m my home.now i dont know where is mom or my home.
v:baby!plx dnt cry.i ll help u search ur mom.come sit in the car.
g:mom asked me nt 2 trust strangers.
v:i am a dr.n we can b frnds dear.i ll help u.promise.em nt a bad man.
g:u seem 2 b a gentleman.okay i ll go wid u
vicky took her n made her sit wid him on the front passanger's seat.
v:btw wots ur name sweety pie?
girl:naina
v:hi naina.em dr vicky!!u can call me vick.
n:hi vick!u r so sweet..
suddenly naina saw an icecream vendor.she shouted...
n:icechweam..icechweam..i want icechweam...
v:ok ok.wich flavor wud u like?
n:i like stlawbelly!!
v:ok madam..
he stopped n took 2 icecreams 4 naina
COMING UP:
vicky finds naina's parents...
rey n kriya intimate..
ansh n naina's budding friendship

so tats all 4 nw guys!u cn guess who r naina's parents?if i get 5 correct guesses ll update asap!!otherwise update wud b wenevr i feel like!!
plx give ur cmnts n likes...no pms again...sorry 4 tat!!!ll pm all parts 2gethr wenevr i hav tym...n next update wud b on next thread..so plx dnt force me 2 update..instead increase ur cmnts 2 make it 2 page 150 so i cn make a new thread n update!!!
love u all!!!
TINA
Edited by tinatartari - 12 years ago
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hey tina...tum sory mat kaho...

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