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Part 16

Dadima: Maan.. m truly sorry son. M so ashamed tat I doubted you.

Maan saw his Dadima crying and he instantly ran to hug her. He knew tat though she doubted and used harsh words for him she never meant them.

Dadima: I did not know wat got into me. But when tat Pari said she was pregnant I could not hold myself son. It was like.. you betrayed my trust and morals son.

Maan: Dadima…I know tat and trust me m not angry. Anyone at your place would have done the same. I have spent seven months with her Dadima and its obvious tat anyone could doubt on us.

Dadima: nahi Beta.. I was wrong but the moment she said tat she is pregnant with your child I lost my sanity son. It was like everything was blur and I felt tat whole KM was getting crushed with her words. I had only one thing in my mind tat how Geet would take this. wat would happen to her if it was true and my anger took our my mind and heart. M very sorry son.

Maan: I know and m happy tat my own family thinks more about Geet than me Dadima. M truly blessed tat they love her more than me.

Dadima: but m ashamed of myself Maan. how could I think tat my own Maan would ever do such things. I should be punished for it. I should really be punished for it maan.

Maan: Ok.. so my sexy Dadima wants punishment.. hmm than I have one.. kya hain na.. its days tat I have eaten something made by you.

Dadima: Kya..

Maan: Haan.. why don't you prepare tat special Pasta of yours sweetheart with all your Indian masala's.. waise bhi inh dino Mom ke haatho ka khana khake mera taste hi badal gaya hain. so for a good change I would like my Dadima to prepare her special Pasta for her Maan. wat say.

Dadima: par yeh tho Punishment nahi hain na..

Maan: I know.. but how I can punish my Dadima who is always right and who thought be to be wat I m today.

Geet: Haan Dadima.. Maan is right aur waise bhi you did all this for me so it was not in wrong intentions. I know tat you all are very worried for me but believe me dadima my Maan can never be wrong. He can never cheat me for anyone. Haan kuch samay ke liye inka dhimang ghaas charane gaya tha par ab sahi jagah wapas hain.

Maan: geeettt…

Geet: I know my name is Geet and you don't need to shout. Woh kya hain na... baby will get scared of Dhust Dhanav..

Maan: Geet ab bahut ho raha hain.. m warning you..

Geet: dekho Maan.. don't think tat m alone.. I have my full family to support me but trust me you don't have any one here.. kyu Dad… sach kaha na..

Raj: Haan.. beta.. there's no one to support Maan here. After all he is Maan Singh Khuranna who does not require anyone.. Kyu Maan..

Maan smiled at his dad and understood his meaning.

Maan: Haan Dad.. par ish nadaan ko kaise samjhaya..

Geet pouted in anger while she faked cry that panicked everyone.

Naina: Yeh kya kiya.. see now she started to cry.. Mera Bacha (She hugged geet).. don't cry.. you know na.. this father- son only know to trouble us.

Geet: Mom.. I hate them…I really hate them..

Dadima: Raj… Dadima…. Bahut hua ab.. say sorry to her.. Annie.. get my stick.. its better tat I teach them how to behave with their wife.

Annie: Stick.. ohh.. tat one Dadima.. acha… I will get.

Maan: Bas kijiye Dadima.. I very well know how nautaki is your daughter. I swear dadima this pregnancy is making her weird day by day.

Geet: see how he is blaming me for everything. I know Maan tat you don't love me anymore. I know..

Maan: phir shuru ho gayi.. come on Geet you had enough adventure today. Let's get some rest for your ever active brain. Kya hain.. Since the pregnancy its very much active..

Maan carried Geet his in arms while the others had a smile on their face. Finally, they were completely back to their life and the evil Pari was out of their life.

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Maan: Jaan.. r u ok…

Geet: hmmm.. but wats up with you.. I mean kuch hua hain kya.

Maan: Haan.. have just heard tat Pari had been hospitalized.

Geet: Kya… wat and how did this happen.

Maan: Relax Jaan.. she deserved it. she deserved much more than this.

Geet: Kya hua Maan..

Maan: heard tat she is in Mental Asylum. You know she met with an accident the very same day resulting in loss of her mental balance.

Geet: is she fine Maan.

Maan: I don't know Jaan.. and don't even want to know. Its her sins tat resulted her destruction. She was mentally sick and will be. Par jaan…

Geet: I know Maan.. she was your best friend and the way she betrayed you.. I can.. please aap dil pe mat lijiye..

Geet muffled her pain while speaking but Maan was fast to see it.

Maan: jaan.. are you in pain.. You look pale Jaan.

Geet: Nahi Maan.. aisa kuch nahi.. hota hain na.. m due soon. so this pain is normal.

Maan: Are you sure.. sach keh rahi ho na.

Geet: Haan Baba.. aap kyu itna tension le rahe hain. just see how tired you look. Chalo get freshen up, I will ask Nakul to get your coffee.

Maan: hmm.

Geet: Maan.. wat about her parents.

Maan: don't know. Looks like they have left the city Jaan.

Geet: hmm.. it was not their mistake tat they had a daughter like Pari. I hope wherever they are, they are fine.

Maan: Don't think much about them. They are no one to us. Now just relax and I will be back soon.

Maan settled Geet on bed while he place pillows to support her. He kissed her forehead asking her to sleep for sometime and headed towards the washroom but before he could enter, he heard her scream in pain.

Geet: Maaannn.

Maan panicked hearing her and he saw her holding her stomach crying out in pain.

Maan: Jaan.. Jaan..

Geet : Maan.. dard ho raha hain.. Maan angel.. its paining Maan..

Maan: Mom.. Dadima.. Dad.. Mom….. Jaan calm down Jaan.. kuch nahi hoga.. angel will be fine Jaan.

Maan carried a screaming Geet while he met others outside their room. He asked them to get into the cars while Dadima sat with Geet in his car and Raj, Naina and Annie followed them.

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It was almost two hours since Maan was hearing her screams. She was in pain and he could not do anything to calm her down. He so much wanted to be besides her but was not allowed inside the labor room. Everyone tried to calm him down but he was not ready.

Maan: Dad, I swear.. I will sue this hospital and the doctors for making my Geet to scream in pain. I swear Dad.

Everyone chuckled at his words while Raj patted his back.

Raj: Maan beta.. if m not wrong than its you who is responsible for the pain. Kya hain na she is giving birth to you baby.. Samjhe Mr. MSK.

Maan: But they are doctors na.. than why cant they handle her.

Raj: Hmm.. tats true but you cant do anything in this matter.

Maan: But I will.. I will sue them, as they are not fit to be doctors.

Dadima: Maan…. relax. There's nothing to worry Maan. Normal hain and she is in labor Maan.

Maan: Nothing to worry. My wife and my baby are inside and you say nothing to worry Dadima. How can I relax. Mom how can they say to relax.

Naina rolled her eyes while she made him to sit next to her.

Naina: Maan.. she is your Geet and your baby and they know how to fight Maan… they will make it through. Just trust them.

Maan kept his head on his mother's shoulder while his hand held her hand tight.

Maan: I know Mom.. but m scared.. her pain is ripping my heart and soul Mom….

Naina: Kuch nahi hoga.. Maan.. she is brave Maan..

Maan: I swear mom.. no more kids.. bas ek hi kafi hain. I cant see her crying in pain like this.

Naina smiled at her son and slowly patted his cheek while she prayed to god for his blessings.

Annie: Mom… aapka beta.. sach mein darpok hain. I really cant imagine ki MSK…itna dorpok hoga.

Naina: Annie.. bas… he is just tensed and you are adding to it.

Raj: Why not.. be brave man Maan.. don't forget tat you are Maan Singh Khuranna..

Maan: I know but I m not ashamed to say tat I fear to lose my family and my love.. samjhe aap Dad.

Dadima: Raj.. bahut hua.. let him just relax..

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It was yet another 30 minutes when they heard the doctor say.

Doctor: Congrats Mr. Khuranna.. you are a proud father of a cute angel. I must say she is way to pretty than her mother.

Maan: Angel.. I mean.. are you sure doctor tat it's a baby girl.. I mean my angel.

Doctor: is there a doubt Mr. Khuranna..

Raj: Nope doctor.. but my son is way to excited to hear tat his dream did turn into a reality. I mean he always concluded tat the baby would be girl.

Doctor: ohh.. don't worry Mr. Khuranna your dream is indeed true now. she is an angel or say your angel.

Maan: Mom.. Dad.. Dadima.. Annie.. did you hear… its an angel.. my angel Mom.. I…I really..

Maan hugged everyone expressing his happiness of having their angel in his life. He truly wanted to have a look at his Jaan and wife but was sad when doctor said tat they would be able to see them in another 30 minutes.

Maan: 30 minutes. Do you know doctor 30 minutes have 1800 seconds and how can I wait for so long.

Doctor: Mr. Khuranna.. just 1800 seconds when you have waited for nine months I think you can wait for another 30 minutes or say 1800 seconds.

Maan: hmmm but make it fast doctor. I cant wait any more to be besides by wife and by angel.

The doctor smiled at Maan while others chuckled looking at him behaving like a small kid.

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Maan entered the room followed by others. The moment they entered inside, they could feel the happiness of having a small baby in their life. Maan smiled seeing his Jaan sleeping peacefully while a small bundle of joy wrapped in pink was sleeping besides her. His lips carved into a perfect smile while his tears touched his cheeks. His steps were slow in fear tat he may disturb the two angels in his life. He wanted to capture this moment in his heart and his eyes did know about this wish, as they did not leave their view for a second. He stood next to the bed while Dadima sat besides and others stood behind. He slowly saw Dadima touching Geet and calling out for her.

Dadima: Geet beta..

Maan: ssshhh Dadima.. let them sleep. My angels look cute when there are asleep dadima..

Dadima smiled hearing his words. He sat down just admiring the cute angel. He so much wanted to touch it but the fear tat he might hurt her was backing him off.

Geet slowly opened her eyes while Maan was busy staring at their angel. She smiled seeing him while Dadima caressed her hair.

Geet: You can touch her Maan.. aapki angel hain woh.

Maan: but wat if I hurt her.

Geet: Angel wont get hurt if Dadda touches her.

Maan looked up to see his Jaan smiling at him while he smiled back to her.

Maan: Can I really feel her Jaan.

Geet: don't you want.

Maan: but she is so delicate na.. wat if my fingers hurt her skin.

Geet: Maan.. she is Maan Singh Khuranna's daughter and she knows tat her Dadda wont hurt her.

Geet signaled Naina to give the angel into his hands who slowly held the baby and made Maan to hold the baby while she stood behind him. The moment the angel was in his arms, he felt an unknown happiness that he never knew. His eyes shone with a bright light as if he had the whole world under him.

Maan: Jaan.. i..

Geet: she is all yours Maan.. just your angel..

Maan: Naaa.. she is our angel.. our love Jaan..

Geet: only ours.. but don't you feel tat even others have a chance to hold her.

Raj: nahi beta.. hum tho line pe khade rahene wale hain na.. ki kab yeh Dadda Maan Singh Khuranna will see us and gives a opportunity to hold the angel.

Maan: why should I give.. she is my angel.

Raj: Oyye.. yeh mat bhool ki agar main nahi hota tho tum paide bhi nahi hote.. Naina. Better tell your son not to be over possessive for the angel otherwise I swear I will turn the angel against him.

Maan: ohh really than go ahead Dad.. but I wont give her.. she is mine.

Raj: geettt…

Geet: haan Dad..

Raj: Geet I swear if I kill your husband and my son for this over possessiveness na. than don't blame me ok..

Geet: No.. Dad I wont blame. Aap tho phir bhi Dadaji ho.. main tho uski Mumma hoon na par dekheye.. yeh aapka beta aur mera pati kaise pakad baitha hain meri beti ko..

Dadima: Maan….

Maan: Nooo…

Dadima: bahut hua Maan.. give the baby to me..

Maan: dadima please na.. see na she is so cutely sleeping in my arms.

Dadima: Maan beta.. chote bache sote rehte hain.. aur ab na ishe hume bhi dijiye so tat even we can love her.

Maan: Mom.. kahiya na.. aapke pati aur saasu ma se..

Naina: Maan… its enough now… let even us shower our love on angel.

Maan looked at Geet to see if she supports her but she gave him a glare and instantly Raj came to hold the baby while giving a teasing smile to Maan.

Maan: Haan Haan.. abhi pyar kijiye .. Once she is home I will see tat no one comes near her.

Raj: Haan dekh lenge.. waise bhi hum jaanthe hain ki tumari kitni chal ti ghar pe Maan Singh Khuranna.

Everyone laughed seeing the father-son fighting to hold and shower their love at the little angel. Who will say tat these two are the best Business tycoon of India running the KC all over which has reached to new heights.

Precap: Epilogue

So here is my last part of my OO RABBA.. its was nice journey and to say I never thought tat it would have been liked so much. It was just a small thought of mine tat I penned down but I was overwhelmed with the response it got. Truly to say.. I don't know how I feel as some where I was bit scared to write down this concept but now I know tat you all loved it with the immense love you all gave to my OO RABBA…

My biggest apologies to all as I never reply to you all but you know wat ever time I get I use for my updates and as m bit free up to 25 NOV, I m trying to finish my updates.. so once again sorry for not replying anyone of you.

Thank you all and love you..

Shoba…….

awesome ,brilliant part
loved it
loved maan's family
dadi ma may be think wrongly about maan but it's her fear , tension, pain for both maaneet
one side pari is questioning their up bringing another side what will happen with geet and it's lead dadi ma's out burst
but maaneet both understand it well
loved maaneet moments and their conversation
maan's tension when geet is in labour well described
maan's possessiveness towards their angel
so cute
loved maan and maan's father fighitng over their angel
loved their family bonding
it's beautiful

Loved it tooo goood update
Pari deservesvto be in mental hospital
Maaneet r happy
Nd deir angel came in the world
Simply beautifull
Nd maan is sooo happy seeing his angel
Nd all r happy
Great cincept
Will be waiting fir n epilogue

awesome part

Awesome dear maan possessiveness for his angels will never change aur uski antics while geet in labour was too good sad that it ended bt waiting for prologue

soo cute update

wow lovely emotional update.. te wya my maan making everyone to feel light was lovely.. now my maaneet got they angel, my maan ki angel.. te way maan was scaring for geet's screaming , oh god maan.. i had tears wen my maan holding his angel in his arms.. oh possessively dadda, and bechare family now hav to face all his tantrums..i love te update so so much dear.. wow lovely update