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It was a well awaited weekend when Maan planned a small outing with Ananya and Bi. They were having the breakfast when while munching his toast, Maan announced. "Bi, today I have planned to go on a small picnic with Ananya" Maan gave Ananya a sweet smile with all the love he has inside who was sitting beside him on a chair as Bi was feeding her some cereal "And you have to join us" Maan declared sipping his tea when Bi stopped feeding Ananya momentarily and replied. "Beta, In this age how am i suppose to go out and enjoy...rather i will be a burden on you due to my constant pain in knee..." Maan rolled his nose "Bi, but how can i manage alone with Ananya without you?" Bi's eyes shine up with the question and she silently pass a look to Smriti and sheepishly smiled as answered "May be you can take Geet with you as she is managing Ananya well from last week when I was too wrapped up with my pain to even look around" Bi made up the excuse once again which was working fine from the last week as she made Geet serve Maan the dinner. She used it at every chance she got to make Geet get close to Maan and in this process, she even involved the other couple workers of the house and made them left for there village for a month. Only the maid will come for cleaning and cooking. If Maan ask for tea, Geet beta, please can you make tea for Maan...Smriti will back up Bi at that time and If by chance, the tea was already made up by Bi, then Geet had to delivered that to his room. From the last week, its looks like her duties has suddenly increased so much. It was her duty to serve breakfast, keep a check on Ananya's feeding habits at the time she is home, make sure that a fresh towel is being placed in Maan's room abd to check on the dinner. And last but not the least, to make sure a full jug of water was placed in Maan's room which was the most difficult among all cause Maan would be all alone in the room, wearing just his trouser and a loose vest that could hardly cover his gorgeous body. Geet always felt her mouth go dry seeing this amazing creation of God. She would find her legs melting and her body reacting to the intense gaze, he will pass her way. As if the days were not hard enough on her, now even the nights have started taking a toll on as her dreams were also captured by him and his essence. Just 2 days back, she saw herself with him indulged in a hot make out session in between a jungle on a hay stack. His hands were devouring her body in the most sensuous way possible memorizing each curve. His lips were covering hers, exploring each corner taking there time. The dream was feeling too real that Geet was almost moaning in pleasure and as in her dream, he gave her a love-bite on her shoulder opening the front two buttons of her front button up office shirt, she wake up panting hard. Thankfully Smriti was under heavy dosage of medicines to not wake up with her voices and too see her red blushed face. From that day, the dream was keeping her occupied most of the time and right there on the dinning table, she was too busy with her mind to hear what is going on around. She was brought back to reality when Smriti nudge her. "Will you Geet??" She just asked that. Unaware of the real question Geet just nod as that seemed right at the moment but her confusion got sorted out the very next second when Bi squealed in happiness. "Yayy...Its good you children go out and we oldies stay back home, enjoying a day off" Smriti and Bi smiled widely and wink at eachother when the other two were not looking being caught up in there own thoughts. Where Geet mentally kicked herself for not being attentive, Maan made a promised to himself to talk to Geet as if why she is ignoring him too much. He don't wanna think as if why it was hurting him, but now, that's enough. But there was something else too, that he had to look up first. Wiping the crumbs from his mouth with napkin, Maan get up "Bi...can i please talk to you for a minute in my room" Maan left giving a last glance to Ananya and Bi as Bi nodded.
He was arranging his things when Bi entered his room. "What you want to talk about Maan?" Bi was still standing in the door when Maan turned to her and sigh. Marching towards the door, he closed it just for precautionary measures while Bi looked at him confused. "Bi...What's going on here?" Maan asked raising one of his brow. Bi looked at his serious face with a confused expression. "What you are talking about, beta?" And that made Maan sigh again. "Bi...I am not gonna beat about the bush...The point i want to ask is why you are pushing Geet on me...I am observing...you and Smriti Aunty will always ask her to do something related to me that automatically make her uncomfortable...Why are you both doing this?" Maan first started with a serious tone that later changed into a helpless one. God knows he never wanna enforce something on anyone and especially not Geet. The girl has already suffered much. She just hardly escaped from the trap of a sour relationship that here, she is getting pushed in another one. Bi looked at him and after moving forward, cupped his face in one hand. "Maan...beta everyone has a right to live the life the way they want it...Not with regrets but with happiness and as far as i know, you and Geet both deserve happiness...I know that now you pretty much understands our intentions behind all this" Bi looked up at him expectingly as he looked side ways, not knowing what kind of expression his face may project. A happy one on feeling the attention he was being given by Geet and all those flutters he feel, whenever she would be around her. He has never felt these kind of emotions before, not even with Sneha. Or a sad one to express his irritation with the way, she was getting forced to come close to him. Bi hold his shoulders and continued. "Me and Smriti really think that you both are perfect for eachother...We are not saying that you both have to agree with us and just get together to make us happy...its your decision beta, totally...All we want is that you both take this perspective of ours in notice..If it can't work, its ok...but if it does, than no one will be more happy in this world than us" Maan look down at Bi. A pool of emotions run down his body just with the mere thought of them, together, being a couple. "Think about it beta" And Bi left the room.
It was around 2pm when after getting all the necessary things in the car, Geet was about to settle herself in the back with Ananya but Smriti interrupt this time. "Beta, you better sit in the front" Geet tried to retort when Maan, after closing the trunk of the car, came up and opened the passenger side seat for her and seeing all the eyes stuck on her, she get in quietly. While the two women grinned, Maan was feeling too happy to atlast make her sit back into his car which she was avoiding from last month. "There is no escape here" He thought looking at Geet and move around the car to went upto his seat and drive off. "Samiya, You really think this all manipulation is working here" Smriti asked seeing the car disappearing into the dust that was left behind. Samiya hold her hand and squeezed it. "Yeah it is...and its all for there benefit and a lovely future" They both smile and went back inside the house.
They was too much silence in the car which was soothing for Geet but was making Maan irritated. He was hell tired of being an admirer of silence and right from the last last month, after getting the sweet loudy voice of her lil angel ringing in his ears all through the time he was home, he don't wanna experience silence for a second. Ananya was sitting back in car looking out to the scenery and then as if she took his daddy's hint, started exclaiming loudly. "Wowww daddy...see how many trees??" Maan looked back at her excited face from the rare-view mirror and smiled. "Yeah...and see the birds" Maan voice made Geet attentive as she too take a look at her surroundings and asked. "Where are we going?" Maan finally sigh hearing her voice and replied looking ahead. "its a beautiful lake in between the jungle where i used to go with my friends in my college days...you will like it" and there something told Geet that something gonna happen. An unknown feeling gripped her body making her shiver.
"Heaven" that all Geet could muttered as she get out from the car to look at her surrounding. Maan smiled hearing her lil whispered and closing the door, went back to take out some essential things from the trunk. Ananya was too happy to say anything as she too get out and run to the lake that was surrounded by immense number of trees. The waterfall was running between the huge stones in a corner making a soothing sound. The greenery was providing peace to the souls. The sun was trying to peek from the heavy number of leaves but was unable to let his rays touch the ground. Geet heard the trunk opening voice from the back and started helping Maan with the things. For now they just took the picnic chairs with a sheet to settle themselves on the ground along with few eatables. Maan was already in one of his grey tracksuit that had a black strip along with a grey t-shirt. The got a spot quiet away from the few people that too were enjoying the nature along with there families and spread the sheet. "yayeee" the both look up to see Ananya shouting in excitement splashing the water, standing at its edge and smiled. "Ananya...come hear and change into your swiming suit" Hearing Maan's voice, ananya quickly run back to him.
Geet tried to stop her giggle as she saw Maan wondering how to to take off the pretty red polka frock off from Ananya as it was skin-fitted as he couldn't spot any buttons in the back or even a zipper. He was making Ananya turn too and fro in order to spot anything but nothing seemed helpful. "Let me help" Geet said as she pulled Ananya to herself with a smile and open the buttons of that romper dress that were under the waist below the upper layer of the frock and pulled it off and help ananya wear her blue swimming suit. In the mean while Maan filled the swimming tube with hot air and put that around Ananya's tiny wast as she rushed to the lake once again. Maan laughed and pulled of his shirt only to make Geet gasp seeing his well-toned body and throwing the shirt on the sheet, run behind Ananya. He surly noticed Geet's reaction to his action but doesn't want to make her uncomfortable so didn't look back at her. Geet looked at the duo enjoying splashing water at each other. Maan occasionally would pick Ananya up in his arms and twirl her that would make just her feet touch the water and make her giggle. It was so sweet to see this amazing bond between the father and daughter. Geet was busy in praising the scene when Ananya called her name and asked her to join. "Aunty..." and she moved her fingers to call her but Geet nodded in No. Maan too looked at her expecting her to join but seeing her shaking her head, he bit his lip and again get busy with Ananya. It was 15 minutes that Maan and Ananya were having a gala time in the lake. Ananya was floating on the lake due to the tube and Maan was holding on it so she will not get far away. Geet get up feeling bored and decided to have a walk near the lake bare footed. She bend down a lil to examine the beauty of the lilies and daisies that were grown up near the edge and touched its petals lightly. In the back, both father and daughter observed the scene and grinned at each other. Maan slowly, without making a voice come to her and in a sudden moment, hold her from the waist and pulled her into the water with himself. Geet was shocked out of her wits as she got lifted up from the ground and later her feet touched the coldness of the water. At the time she realized, she was half drenched into water and her trouser was now moving with the water barely making a contact with her skin. She looked around to see Maan and Ananya giggling and smiled at them evilly. The next second as she tried to move forward to splashed them with water, her foot slipped and she was about to loose her balance when Maan caught her from her nape just in time to not let her face get into the water and moving the other hand around her waist, he helped her stand up. At The moment, they both were lost feeling there totally drenched bodies striking to eachother. Maan body was fully dipped with water. Water drops were falling from his hairs and the intoxicated fresh smell he was having was driving Geet crazy. Maan moved his hand a lil up on her waist over his baby pink t-shirt only to find her trembling while biting her lower lip. It amazed him to see the power he had over her. His own body was deceiving him now as he pulled her more closer to herself. The lines of her inner wear were visble through her light color shirt that made Maan mouth go dry. Her breath got heavy feeling his hot breath on her cheeks as he moved his face forward near her when "daddy" Ananya splashed water on their face and laughed covering her mouth with her tiny hands that broke the moment and Geet got away from Maan. Maan smiled at Ananya but look back at Geet who was trying to steady herself. "What happened?" Maan asked with a worried look. "I think i sprained my foot" Geet said as she turned and move towards the edge limping a bit. Maan got concerned and holding Ananya followed her. Geet was now sitting onto a huge stone at the edge of the lake pressing her fingers into her foot, trying to find the exact point of pain. "Its hurting too much??" Maan's concerned tone made her look up instantly. His face showing as if he himself was in pain. "No...Its just paining when I am walking...otherwise, its ok" Maan bend down on his knees and replaced her hands with his, trying to massage her foot. Geet gasped loudly feeling him taking over and pulled her legs back. "No sir...What are you doing?" Maan looked up at her and again moved forward his hand to take a grip on her foot. "Let me see to it or otherwise, it will get worse later on" Geet didn't had the heart to pull back from him thinking that may be her luck was not so great to be with him, atleast she can savor these moments with him while on the other hand Maan was thinking something totally opposite as his lips turn into a grin while he thought. "Bi's idea is worth giving a chance"
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