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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Hope mayank find out about nupur dad planning...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Writer Note

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Posted: 12 years ago

Love and Hate

"Papa you can't do this"Nupur's heart sank and her voice came out like a whisper she turned back to look at her father.Her face wore a white, distraught look, and Radha who was caused of this hurt felt a pang of guilt. "Papa how could you do---like'this to'me?"her voice choked with panic she looked at her father, "you didn't left any other way or did you?"Shiv groaned avoiding looking in her hurt-filled eyes, "I tried to make you understand that don't go back to him, the person who had snatched your happiness but you didn't listen me you've been gone mad in his love'you've been forgotten what Mayank had done with you, with us" he breathed deeply and then regarded her with an angry look, "you can forgive him but I can't---I can't forgive that person who snatched my daughter's happiness and i'"

"he didn't snatch my happiness'he is my happiness'he is my everything Papa'I love him'he is my husband, my love" her voice choked dangerously as she gave her father a pleading look and felt him stiffen, listening her plea but ignoring it, "please Papa don't snatch my happiness'I love him" she ached at the sight of her father so heartless, Shiv tilted his head towards her and his lips twitched into hard, rough words, "you'll have to forget him because now I won't let you go back to him, he'll get punished for his deeds, soon I'll send him divorce papers and I'm sure he'll sign them when he get to know that you has sent those papers willingly"

Nupur had begun to shiver uncontrollably, her teeth chattered not from cold and

Exhaustion but from panic and fear that had been engulfed her heart to see his father so determined to separate her from Mayank. "Papa you'can't do this"

She stammered and gasped trying to stable her breath she lifted her eyes at her father regarding him with hatred, "I won't let you do that'---I'm going back to him'--I'm going back to Mayank and you can't stop me" As she took step to slip out the room Shiv caught her wrist roughly and yanked her back with the force she collapsed with the wall and lost her balance Radha rushed towards to hold her, Shiv whirled regarding her with great anger, "you can't go back to him'---forget him" Shiv groaned and taking long strides slipped out the room locking the door behind him.Radha was silent, miserably aware of her own helplessness and when she tried to pull Nupur for hug she jerked away her hands,Radha gasped struggling with tears.

Shiv was determined to make his plan succeeded and the thought made her shiver with fear and a kind of terrified anticipation'--No'---She shivered badly with fear and panic and Radha wrapped her in her arms and this time Nupur didn't jerk her away or struggled to pull back, "MOM why did you do that? Why did you speak lies to me?"

Angrily, she bit back the rest of the words she had been about to utter and lifted her chin to look at her mother and Radha turned her gaze to avoid looking back in those eyes which were filled with hurt,panic and accusation, "I'm sorry Beta'I didn't know Shiv has been becoming a heartless person"

She straightened her face and met with her eyes, "I know it's difficult for him to forgive Mayank as he is a Father'--A father who loves his daughter so much that if she gets ill he couldn't have got comfort even for a moment until she got well'---he was a possessive father, a protector of his innocent daughter but he couldn't have saved her when someone had kidnapped her at her wedding day'--can you imagine what he might gone through'--Shiv had been broken completely'-I have seen him crying for you'---I've seen him spending sleepless nights"

She gasped as her words chocked due to tears, "I know he is wrong, whatever he is doing is wrong but I can't blame him either after whatever Mayank did as a Parent he can't forgive him easily"

"But I've been forgiven him Mom'--I tried to hate him but couldn't as he has filled my heart with his love'--Papa always wants my happiness then why don't he try to understand Mayank is my happiness'he is not hurting Mayank but hurting his own daughter" she ached with the hurt that his father had given him, "I won't let Shiv to hurt you'I--- won't let him hurt Mayank"Radha cradled Nupur's face and bent to kiss her teary-streaked face and a sob slipped Nuppur's lips, "I've to go back to Mayank'---Mom I can't live without him"Nupur whispered in pleading tone and Radha caressed her face lovingly trying to remove the lines of panic from her face, "I won't let Shiv to separate you from Mayank '--I won't"Radha pulled her for hug and Nupur hid her face in her lap letting her tears to come out from her lids.

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Way back towards the home went into silence, he didn't know why he was feeling restless'---he didn't know why he was feeling as there was something wrong.

As Mayank stepped inside the house the first thing that was in his mind to call Nupur,he wanted to listen her voice to make sure she was alright, Mayank swiftly shrugged his coat off his shoulders and slipped his hand into his pocket grabbing out his cell phone he dialed her number and put the cell with his ear lobe getting desperate to listen her voice but there was no response. "Why she has switched off her cell?"Mayank felt a lump formed in his throat, the panic was back.

"Is she alright?"He gasped, his heart pumping from exertion due to the panic that was hauling him, he shrugged gulping for airs, "she would be with her parents and forget to call me'---yes-that's the reason"

He swallowed and tried to shrug those negative thoughts which were making him restless giving himself the most possible reason, but it was not possible to remove those thoughts from his mind as his heart was giving him continuous signs that there was something wrong.

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The hairs on her arms bristled at the sound of the opening door and she felt the blood drain from her face to see the person who was standing at the doorway, she swiftly stood on her heels, "how dare you come here?"She hissed biting her words regarding him with the great hatred.

"Ah!!I'm happy you still don't forget me'---of course how could you forget me after all I'm your Ex-fiance and now soon to be husband" He smiled mockingly stepping close to her, A panic quivering began deep in her body and moved with a purpose to the surface of her skin. She reached out to grab the bedpost in an effort to steady herself, but her knees gave way and her knees collapsed with floor, she gulps of air trying to steady her breath and then looked up at him standing on her heels again "get out of here---I said get out of here or else------I'll-------I'll kill you bas****" she jabbed her finger at him and then pushed him hard.but ignoring the rage in her eyes he clutched her wrist and then pushed her back, "didn't your father tell you that he has been chosen me as your future husband---sign these papers and come back to me"

Earth beneath her shattered. She couldn't have believed what he just said'---Papa couldn't do this to me-----never.

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here is next part--i hope you'll like it😳

Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i hate that B*************😡
i kill shiv also
poor nupur
mayank save her
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice updt maria
hating this neev..hope shiv understand that mayank is nupur's happiness ..
waiting for the next updt...cont soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by gopi06 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg wat a tragedy ...
why tis shiv s doing this ...
i hate him ...poor nupur ...
she found her happyness but his father s distroying it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMGGG what happening with Mayur
plzzz Mayanksave ur Nupur
plzzz continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was an amazing update
superbly written
do continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mndblowing part
beautifully written
loved it
do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
I feel like giving Nupur a hug poor her, Nice update <3

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