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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful Anu...even i was tensed as to how Geet will react once she is back to Delhi but I think now she is recovered and healed a lot...she is ready to be true life partner and share his pain along with his love...i guess that is the next big step which u want to highlight...

pammi is cheap as usual...there is no end to some people's greediness...


loved the update a lot...Mohit's b;day was awesome and for the first time with his full family...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..
awww geet wnts to share maan's pain..
erhh hate pam..
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 51
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Geet tried many ways to find Maan's pain but he always changed the topic by changing her mood by his flirty acts.

It was the other day Morning, Geet was called by Dadima

"Geet bete, are you sure you want to do it"

"Dadima, I am very sure. Maan had hurt me but in return he has filled my life with so much love and care that rarely any girl will get it. And he saved my Mohit, only as he was there Mohit was saved. I had done all to destroy my child. Maan ka gussa kuch haad tak theek bhi to tha"

"Maan whatever he did with me, he did for my Mohit only so why should I be so selfish of thinking about my pain and Dadima Maan loves me so much now, I want to cherish that love. Few days back I denied our relation as husband and wife, Maan was very hurt. I want to make him feel I have accepted our relation"

"Dadima, I want to do something for Maan and this is for his well being, how I can not do it. Unse naraz hokar bhi hamesha unkee salamtee ke dua he kee hai maine. I am in all case doing Karvachauth dadima."

"Per aapkee tabyat" "I am fine Dadima, aur Maan mujhe kuch hone hee nahi denge."

Dadima blessed her and was about to leave when Geet called her again "Dadima"

"hmm bete" "woo Maan uss din, I mean he got so upset with Parminder Aunty and he says Dev is his brother. I was till now just lost in my pain, I feel so bad, I don't know anything about Maan's past

Maan doesn't say anything aur puchoo to unke chehree kee udasi dekhee nahi jatee' please tell me dadima."

Dadima Shied, sat down and asked Geet to sit down too.

"Maan's mother, Sweta, was the sweetest and most innocent girl. The girl who had faith in everyone and as she could not hurt anyone, she never believed anyone could hurt her too. She was blindly in love with Maan's father.

Maan was nine years old when she got pregnant again but there were lots of complications that came along and she could not take even proper care of Maan. Though she would always run at one voice of Maan, doctor's had advised her complete bed rest.

Then Parminder came as Nanny to Maan and also to take care of Sweta.

She had never ever seen this lavishness and could see how much respect Sweta got as Bahu of this house and what her position was.

Staying closely, everyday with this, Parminder started to dream it as hers and seeing Sweta's bad health she started to use her womanly charm on my son.

I never knew, my son was this week. Separation from sweta due to her health and all Parminder's womanly charms worked on him. He fell badly for parminder and started to spend day night with her.

Maan was growing kid and yet small, he could see everything but could not say. He could not say actually what was going on but he felt everything was wrong.

Parminder, getting the support of my son, also avoided doing her job properly. Maan and his mother were ignored. I tried to talk with Maan's father , I had tried my best beta but he was all lost in his new lala land. Denied to hear me too.

Words went to Sweta's ear and she denied to believe it and went to talk to Rajendra but when she saw them both in compromising position she fainted, she could not take it.

She was hospitalized but doctor's could not save the child.

Her health started falling, Maan started hating his father. His father ignored them completely and one day we heard that Parminder was Pregnant.

Rajendra announced that he will marry Parminder and Parminder almost started acting as the lady of house.

I could not take any more. I then announced that he now does not belong to this house and I disowned him. He took most of the property except the core ancestral one which was directly going to Maan.

They settled in Canada.

Maan was a child and this thing went deep inside his heart. His behavior started changing, he became aggressive and the the junnon of showing his father down went inside the small child's head."

Tears were flowing Geet's eyes "Aaj ke liye itna hee beta. You will not be able to take further and it is not good for your health."

Geet came to their room and saw Maan busy with Mohit's puzzle.

"Mohit go play outside dear, Mama dada need to talk" Maan looked confused at Geet but Geet ignored and sent Mohit out with a lady maid.

She closed the door behind her and then walked towards Maan.

Maan gave a naughty smirk to her raising his eyebrows but Geet came forward and hugged him tight, tears flowing down her eyes

"I don't deserve to be your wife, I only think about myself."

Maan separated her a little and got disturbed with her tears "what happened Mishty and don't ever say like that, Samjhi"

"I was always lost in my pain, never tried to understand about your life and I say I Love you." Maan holds her shoulder and makes her sit down

He wipes her tears "Maa-aan" Maan places finger on her lips "chup bilkul chup" Geet looks at him and fresh lot of tears start flowing down her cheeks.

"You talked with Dadima? " "you were avoiding to say anything then what should I do."

Maan sat down on floor near her, he took her palm and rubbed them "It hurts deep inside Geet, I don't even want to think about it. After he left, I have seen the condition of my mom."

Water started falling down his eyes, he had never talked about this to anyone and today he was sharing with Geet. He laid his head on Geet's lap, Geet was still, just ruffled his hair with her fingers. She wanted him to pour down everything.

"Mom was not herself, a complete broken self and she went to such condition that no one could help her, complete shock. Dadima tried her level best but Mom was not in senses.

I was without father that time and needed her support but seeing her condition, I became mature soon. I was supporting her but in all this my anger within me kept growing.

None my parents were for me that time. My trust in relation was completely gone. Only Dadima was there for me to make me feel, I was a child.

My mom then left this world, leaving a complete shattered me all alone to face this cruel world."

"I build my own self and thus did whatever I felt, never believing in relation and playing with people and their heart.. Girls, pub, party was my life and above all I became crazy about being top on business world. I wanted so much power that no one could hurt me. "

Tears drop down Geet's eyes and fell on Maan, but Maan stayed there like that only on Geet's lap. He was too vulnerable.

"when I took medicine with Mohit in my belly, it was so natural for you to not trust be. You got scared for your son, aur main to khud ka hee sochtee rahee"

Maan immediately woke up on his knees and wiped her tears "No Geet, it only proved I was son of the same monster and due to his blood running in me, I am also the monster who so badly hurted a girl who madly loved me."

Geet hugged him tight "khabardar jo mere Maan ko monster kaha' I will love you so much that I will wash away all your pains."

Next: Karva chauth, Maan upset

Part 52
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Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww its a lovely update...
awesome work...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...loved it ...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
i feel sorry for maan

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Posted: 12 years ago
It was so special to see Geet taking initiative to rebuilt their relation... Maan's past is so painful, hope geet's love will heel his wounds...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww ... Nice update
Loved it

Though Maan's past was painful ... but now Geet has changed it n will make his life better
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional part but yu describe fabulous 👍🏼❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! Loved the outpour of emotions! Beautifully written!

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