WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE~~MANVEER SS~Prt24 newpg 78 - Page 11

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kitna or wait krna pdega?????? ab to update kro!!!!
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i xpcted regular posts frm u...u've really dissapointed me...daily cum to the page nd see it blank...not satisfactory:(
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awsum yaar...
manyata and j jealous of each other lolx that is something!
w8n 4r the next update😉
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Originally posted by: cherry.parul0

i xpcted regular posts frm u...u've really dissapointed me...daily cum to the page nd see it blank...not satisfactory:(


awww m do sorry actually my exams are on so cant updte regularly...😃
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WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE

PART 8: MANVEER:::::::: ❤️ :::::::

All are standing on the beach'.anya and Uday also join them'.

J to Uday: Uday da humara surprise kaha hai??

Uday: han han j tumhara surprise ata hi hoga'

J: ata hi hoga matlab??

A voice comes from back'.

Person: hum agaye'.

Uday turns back..: ye lo surprise ka naam liya aur surprise hazir'

Evry1 turns back then'.

J becomes super duper happy'.

She shouts'." Jagat.." and runs in his arms'

Jagat: are aram se sweetheart'.kahi hum dab na jaye'.

J: shut up jagat'.hum apse bahot gussa hai'aap kal fresher's party mein humse milne kyun nahi aye'.pata hai hum apse aur Uday da se milne kitne excited the'par aap dono ko to humari parwah hi nahi hai'.

Jagat: esi baat nahi hai love'hum party mein aye the lekin mom ko minor heart attack hua to hume jana pada'aur jab hum wapas aye to aap pehle se hi ghar ja chuki thi'

J: oh its ok'.hum aunty se milne ayenge'.

Jagat: acha toh apne hume kitna miss kiya???

J kisses on his cheeks..:sabse jyada'.

He smiles'anya is impressed by seeing the love in them'while niks is busy looking at aarman and aarman looking at anya'

Uday interrupts..irritated by their lovey dovey talks..: ahem ahem'jagat tumhari gf kya mil gayi tum to hume bhul hi gaye'

Jagat: are esa nahi hai Uday koi apne best friend ko bhul sakta hai bhala??vese tumhari tabyat kesi hai?

Uday: I'm f9 yar'

Jagat: hi anya, niks, aarman'

All 3 together: hey jagat..

Niks: toh j tumhari gf hai han'.

Jagat nods and then looks at j and holds her waist'

Jagat to every1: so chale??

Every1 go in water'

Anya and uday don't'

Anya has sum problem with water'while uday hates going in beach water'

Anya sits on the sand and starts making castle still lost in flashback'thinking wat was it'.

Uday sees her and has the same flashback'

The kids were non other than Uday and manyata'.

Uday went and sat besides her'.

She was busy thinking about flashback and making castle'

Doesn't realize Uday sitting besides her'.

Uske baal uske muh pe ate hai..

She tries to put them back with her backside of hand as uske hath sand se bhare the'

Uday smiles at her effort'

Then slowly moves those hair back'caresses her cheeks'she smiles at him..

Anya: thanks Uday'

Uday: hmm'.tum to hume thank you kehna band hi kardo' nahi to din mein das bara bar to hume thank you bol hi dogi'

Anya: acha'she hits on his hand'

Uday: aur nahi toh kya chalti phirti problems ko attract karne wali magnet'

Anya: chup kar halkat vede kahika'

She throws some sand on him'

Uday: bad move princess bad move'.

And he starts throwing sand on her too'both behaving very childish'.

Uday se galtise who sand castle bigadta hai jo anya ne banaya hota hai'

Anya gets really angry on this'she doesn't know why but she feels some tears gathering in her eyes'not even knowing the reason for them'

Uday sees this..: I'm sorry princess hum tumhe rulana nahi chahte the'

Anya suddenly again remembers the flashback as exactly same had happened'

She angrily gets up without speaking a word to him and leaves'

For almost next two hours she doesn't talk to him'

Whenever he went to talk she walked away ignoring him completely'

Uday to himself: Uday beta ye tune kya kiya??ab kese manayega use??

Then he suddenly has that evil smirk on his face as his brain had finally given him a full proof plan'

Uday to himself: humhe ye pehle kyun nahi sujha'.ab dkehte hai princess kab tak naraj rahogi humse'.

All have played a lot so they come out of water all wet'

Anya is still angry'

They were standing in group chatting drying themselves when some1 starts playin guitar from back'.

All turn back and are shocked to see Uday '..

He goes near anya'and starts singing'

Gustakhi maaf karde.

He holds her hand'.she frees herself and turns'
Abb to insaaf kardein

He again blocks her way she again goes away'.
Apna dil saaf karde

He holds her by west this time and starts dancing'..
Kehna to maan le

He puts his guitar aside still singings twists and twirls her'..
Jaane bhi de bhi hua

Jaane bhi de bhi hua

Jaane bhi de bhi hua

Jaane bhi de bhi hua

She struggles to free herself then he holds his ears making a puppy face'.: ab maaf bhi kardo na princess'.sorry na'

She cant deny the fact that he looked very cute right now'she smiles at the thought of her heart'and mind'

Uday: hasi toh phasi'

He holds her by waist again..

Anya removes hi hand'

Anya: hat pare'.hasi iska matlab ye nahi hua ki mene tumhe maaf kardiya'.

Uday leans forward: sorry once again'acha humare pas tumhe manane ka plan b bhi hai'humne tumhara castle toda thana to chalo phir milkar wapas banate hai'.wats say?

Anya ignores him and turns away'

Uday then holds her back..and both go where all were standing'.all are double shocked'

1st shock: Uday was so awesum at playing guitar and singing'

2nd shock: seeing the romance going on between anya and uday'.

Uday: guys muh band karo makhi chali jaegi'.hum princess ko thodi der apne sath le ja rahe hai'tum log chaho toh humara wait karo ya phir ghar jao'is it ok??

Jagat: han han bhai sab ok ok hai'humne kab roka hai'hum thodi na kabab mein haddi banna chahenge haina guyz??

Evry1 giggles except J'.

Uday glares at jagat'

Then he takes anya from there'.

They walk and walk in silence'.

Its half an hour and anya was really tired walkin'they were passing through a place which looked like a combo of jungle and beach to her'.

Anya irritated: Uday mujhe kaha lekar jaa rahe ho??dekho its almost night chand bhi nikal ne wala hai'I'm fed up walking just can walk anymore'

Saying this she sits on a huge rock there'

Suddenly she is up in air strong muscular arms around her'.

Anya: Uday kya kar raha hai'niche utar mujhe'.

Uday walks silently ignoring her'she struggles but all in vain finally she gives up'and lets him carry her'

After 5 to ten minutes walk they finally reach the spot'

He puts anya down'not evn bothering what the place is'anya turns to Uday and starts shouting at him'

Anya: halkat vede yede khasmanukhane'sade hue papite'sunwar'gadhe'.

And she was going to continue with her galiyon ke phrases but Uday puts a finger on he lips'

Uday: shh... express train ruk jao'. And turn around'.

Anya was in no mood to listen him'so he holds her shoulders firmly still smoothly'and turns her around'.

Anya finally looks at the place and nearly gasps''

~mahi~

hey guyz jo bhi gusa ho i'm really really sorry my exams are on so wasnt able to post...
Edited by MAHI1198 - 12 years ago
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OMG a very sweet update love it n plz pm me
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Originally posted by: Khawaunju

OMG a very sweet update love it n plz pm me


your there in ma buddy list na so will definately pm u and thnks...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏 LOVELY UPDATE !! 👏 👏 👏

SUPERB ... OUTSTANDING

UDAY PLAYING GUITAR AND SINGING ...WOW I LOVED IT .
J AND JAGATH SCENE IS CUTE

ALL LOOKING AT UDAY SHOCKED IS SO SWEET ...VERY NICE ...👏👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Uday the guitarist...very nice...this roothna manana is so cute...ekdum filmy style...
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Originally posted by: puggyy

👏 LOVELY UPDATE !! 👏 👏 👏


SUPERB ... OUTSTANDING

UDAY PLAYING GUITAR AND SINGING ...WOW I LOVED IT .
J AND JAGATH SCENE IS CUTE

ALL LOOKING AT UDAY SHOCKED IS SO SWEET ...VERY NICE ...👏👍🏼


awww thank u so much...

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