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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

woah! kitna bhari barkham concept!!
bt i'm in 4 it!
i can already c d sparks in MN's story!!😉😆
cont soon!




nah donot worry... it will be bhari barkham very few times

thanks ur in..
on that front its a fast track story

thanku so much

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

wonderful. mindblowing. beautiful loved it. continue soon. very very different story




thanks alot dear
glad u liked it


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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Prada_176

Congrats Fiza for new FF

Is this the same we were talking in PMs ?

wht an amazing start , I was shocked after reading first part I mean fiza and something like this, I absolutely loved it as usual fabulously written I loved nupur's words here, being a wh**e I found her pure hearted

Great job



thanks alot dear

i think so this was the same...

lolz... i know .. its difcult for me to write any such thing and the more stroy will progress using sum words will be a real thing for me.. as i donot use them..
thanks alot dear
glad u all can feel wht nupur is


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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: drmaha

congtrz for ur new ff dear ...

i love it nice concept...
and i love nupurs m,aturity her way of talkin and poor maynak wow he is so cute ...
good work



thanks alot dear
glad u liked it

thanks jani

aray yaar mjhy tum se baat kerni hai ... mjhy yaad dilna .. as im planning k hum us ko ghar ja ker wish ker k aay... mera tu plan hai .. tu if u want u can jon me to


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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: --WHATEVER--


Congo for new FF..
Nice concept..
Loved d part :)



thanks alot dear
glad u liked it

Originally posted by: .Divya.

New FF... Ek khatam doosra shuru.. WOW... I m going to read this regularly.. every update 😊


Very nicely written 😊




thanksa lot dear
han dono almost khatam hogay hain... tu socha tum logo k asay kasay jany doon

thanks alot dear



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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Ohh Di hard to imagine Mayur in these type of character yet u wrote so beautifully that it worked..congratulations for ur new FF.🤗


Chapter one is interesting...you noe its like an OS...a complete story in itself...don worry I'll read further😆

continue soon.




ya tht is hard to imgine i know... thanks alot dear for accepting them like this
rofl han tu yeah raz ki baat hai k OS k ff bana dala mein ny😆.. ek writer hi dosray writer ki chalaiyan pakar sakta hai 😆😉


thanks jani


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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Irum.

If I say that I was surprise to c a ff on this concept from u, so this will b wrong.

B coz I know that u r a brilliant and versatile writer.
I so wanted that someone write on this concept, prostitute.It is a very intense topic.Though It is bit hard to digest that Nupur and a prostitute.Bt I know u will make it beautiful.
Mayank and Nupur both r broken ans shatterd souls.

One more thing u said it is a fairy tale tu fairy tales main happy ending hoti hain😃
Or jb tum likh rahi ho tu fairytale jitni beautiful hi hogi.
Waiting impatiently for next update.
Inshallah agr Allah ne chaha tu main daily update k liye spamming karon gi😆


Array han yaad aya main tu tum se khaffa thi.U did not reply my Pm.😡😭




thanks alot dear for ur such words means alot to me..
thanku so much
i know its hard to digest and it ill be harder to digest them in there CS too.. as still u donot know mayank n his all aorund...

lol han meri story hai tu hapoy ening hi hoga
very good shabsh...
thanks alot dear



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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: vinan2050

Congratss for new FF fiza amzing Update jst lvd it

so u gave us new version of Mayur...
Thanxx for PM



thanks alot dear
glad u liked it

n donot worry

im working on ur wish too.. bus mjhy ek solid plot nhi mila hai rough idea hai ... so mayb soon



thanku



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Posted: 12 years ago
#38


"Fate is funny, naah it isn't exactly. It gives us what we believe we deserve, not what we desperately seek to deserve"

Chapter: 2

As soon as she closed the door behind she touched the corner of her eyes to felt moisture..she touched and removed it and laughed … taking the elevator she went back to her home.. Today she isn't feeling like making any one feel good… she was feeling strange…. A little good

The way back to her home was not as smooth as ever have been, though it has never been.. yet today it was for the person she is in real not the person she has become over these years.. If he thought she didn't recognize him he has mistaken… Mayank Sharma.. how cum any one cant and than a person like her, who to keep check on the things around her…

And yet she has meet him in parties to, when one of her clients has asked her to be there with him… sigh yet he was different look today… completely different

The moment she saw him all around the Cosmo cooperate world she was dam sure he is one of those, one of bloody those who are nothing less filthy than herself… but than …

She closed the door to her apartment and lean to it… strange it was to feel.. when she has stopped being all in those effect.. strange she has stop feeling any thing good… it has never meant to be like this ever… but today making him not do to this she felt she won the whole world..

This man has so much in him.. his touch… his closeness is drug .. its hard… no body dares to provoke any effects inside her… a single look of admiration on the door… his fingers doing the magic on his skin…. His eyes demanding answers from her… all still was making herself to feel pleasure… err.. this sumthing nobody should do o her.. nobody does to her … she shouldn't feel… there is nothing such thing tht feelings in her life… its just work…. Just simple work..

She closed her eyes can still feel the warmth of his breath, the lingering of his fingers… she snapped open them and shrugged all her thoughts… the touch the closeness make her feel nothing.. nothing at all ..but was doing today

Nupur: I need sleep.. I think my over working body and brain has gone nuts… she chukled and went to freshen up… and threw herself on bed.. and remember him, do still in this world such man are found.. cute.. innocent.. pure… she smiled and closed her eyes to have a peaceful sleep… somewhere she was feeling so good .. she saved a soul today…

On the other hand the moment she left the place he regret it… making her go away.. he was feeling he need her… right her… her words for enchanting.. her eyes were believing… there was strange pull… strange .. she wasn't behaving as girl call… nothing was disgusting about her.. she was more like a friend… a GOD's angel bestowed upon him to protect him from the worlds filth….what the hell… how can I even think about all this… and that so about a person who change men evry night…but that isn't her choice…. Why I felt so…

But than why she didn't let me do that.. she would have easily drown me in… I was already doing so.. I never get closed to Esha( his girl friend) like this… it isn't like they haven't share the level of intimacy with her…. Yet still with Nupur he might end up moving to the edge… he wasn't feeling anything like wrong right when he was moving near her…. gosh this alcohol is making him crazy… this is all because of that..

Nupur, beautiful mature angel…he getting drift in his sleep he can came up to all the good adjective for her…. A person who hates those kinda girl… to core..

……………

Morning was different for him, sumhwere her words made a real impact on him.. she is right why I m making myself so low for some one who herself is not less than pro***** … he smiled looking around his suite…he has now nothing horrifying belonging to here.. he has the best ever few hrs of his life right here…. He get freshen up to strt life with knew hopes and knew him…

……….

Samrat: Good morning brother..

He smiled at Samrat.. his younger brother his kid, the most beloved person in his life

Mayank: morning dear..

Samrat stopped in his tracked and looked at mayank… it seems like ages he has heard that music in his voice, the smile and the affectionate morning ..

Mayank: are u planning to spend the rest of the day at my cabins door.. ur allowed to cum in don't u know tht…

Samrat: he smiled… actually I m kinda bewildered

Mayank: why .. is there any problem at the project…

Samrat: certainly not.. the way ur working bro do u things so there can be any… the most lavish town city will be ready to live with in a month… and will make history

Mayank: so than what happen…

Samrat: that's exactly what I am planning to ask…. What happened

Mayank: nothing….

Samrat: ya right nothing… that is why… u weren't in the office all night… nothing ..thts why u were there with mom in the kitchen in morning as the old time… and today even u wished me morning as I didn't found u sleeping here… and what is exactly this "nothing" is … I really want to know…

Mayank couldn't hold to smile… his little brother has grown big .. to old to read him like abook… and sumwhere they donot hide anything from each other.. not even there sins…

Samrat: OMG bro now this smile is … ahh.. who is this "nothing"

He said taking the place in front of him

Mayank: and how cum ur so sure that its someone

Samrat: the smile…. As my lady says.. each smile defines sumthing…

Mayank: waala…. Ur lady needs to be in opera …donot she

Samrat: honestly I really wonder it should have been… 40% of time I donot get her definitions

Mayank: I will add more 30% on ur behave…

Samrat: stop making fun of my girl.. and straight cum to the point.. are u dating

Mayank: he chuckled… to u think I will… ever. Go back to the nightmare of my life again…

Samrat: than…

Mayank: nothing it was just a meeting with sum person and words did magic…

Samrat: he raised his eyebrows…. Are details cuming up or I have to continue with my FAQs..

Mayank: if I will tell u all … u will get scared…. To be precise…as I m certainly not going in details… I meet a girl and we had sum chat… I was drunk so spoke more than required.. and im kinda happy that I did so.. as her words helped me a lot

Samrat: that I can see…. But who was she

Mayank: that's a wrong question …

Samrat: may I know why

Mayank: u wont over react aren't u

Samrat: I will try to…

Mayank: A call girl

Samrat: WHAT…. Bro have u lost it.. why u cant get out of that filthy girl and her words… OMG u spend the nite with a pr*****

Mayank: Samrat… please… I will prefer u just donot use such words for my comfort.. please

Samrat: bhai… ur actually scaring me… u did it with.. freak wht if she go is press or blackmail u later… or she got pregnant and will accuse of rape case or

Mayank: breaks sami…. I didn't it anything… ur such an over actor

Samrat: oh really.. u were with a call girl whole night and u are saying u didn't did anything… when I can see so much after morning symptoms… were u that much drunken

Mayank: grow up… I wasn't that much drunk… 2) I didn't did anything with her.//strange kinda but SHE didn't let me….3) we weren't together whole night it was few mins that's it… we talked … I talked…she was done.. she left.. that it…

Samrat: really…. Ok…. I will try to summarize this all in a reality ..rigth now it feels like some badly scripted hindi film lovey dovey story I must tell u… it cant be real…

Mayank: he laughed…. So cut it .. we have loads of work for today… so get on it..

Samrat: I think that's a better idea.. but bro

Mayank: donot worry.. I will never to any such thing again… im kinda content the way I am.. and the way life has been and I now… now I know…. Its perfect…

Samrat smiled and left the place.. leaving behind a grinning mayank

Mayank: thank u….

…………..

It has been almost a week to her n mayank encounter, and today after a harsh night she was sleeping like a log.. but than someone was not in a mood to let her sleep.. the bell rung one two and three time…she want to ignore that but the person was so adamant to break the door or burn the bell…idiot.. she was feeling like killing that person…

With half sleepy figure she went to the door and open it… yet her eyes popped out

Man: good morning ma'am

Nupur: morning…

Man: ma'am this is for u… pls sign here….

Nupur: for me.. I think ur mistaken

Man: ur MS nupur… right..

Nupur: ya… she took the huge bouquet of white lilies …signing the receiving…close the door… she look at the card and was shocked to her wits

" I donot find anything better to say..

Thank You…

And u can say welcome by cuming at 1 at the same hotel for lunch…

Mayank Sharma"

She rubed her eyes and read it again.. and than looked at the note again n again… Mayank sharam.. sending flowers to thank… but what for.. if she say in her kinda language ..tu is ki izaat bachny k liyan… lol… what has got into him..is he nuts or what…

Nupur: what the hell…. he has lost it… is he mad or what…. Ur welcome Mr sharma.. but why on this earth he send me all this… he is dam freaking me…

She touch the flowers they were so beautiful, and the colour white.. she is now the most afraid of… cutting there edges placing them in the vase… she was looking at them with a smile… chessy he is… flirting he knew… she chuckled. .and than her eyes went wide

Nupur: wait a min… wait a min man.. how on this earth he knew were I live… nobody does...freak. he took out all the details… did he… this isn't done this is definitely not done… these are not the right ways ….

She sigh and went back to catch her sleep… who cares it was morning… her weird working hours have made things such…. And sleeping in literally meaning she loves to do… laughing out loud .. off her cell phone as this week work has been done and she isn't taking any more client.. she is planning to have a movie week … watching all her favts.. she doze off on her bed….

For mayank it was the most stupid idiotic and ridiculous thing he has ever done..

Samrat: and what on this earth are u planning to do on launch with a hooker…

Mayank: just wanna thank her

Samrat: are u kidding me or urself.. first u almost end up with a call girl … god knows wht would have happen if she would have recognized u and made it in press… already we are in soup because of ur so bi*** girl friend.

Mayank: Samrat….

He sigh as he can see the effect of the reminder of that bitch in his life.. Samrat his younger brother and partner in all the sins n evil always … is the first one to be learning this amazing story as he claim it to be… yet being more carful n almost worried about his elder brother he was now afraid….

Mayank is a easy to fool person, a little sympathy, to chesy stories of sick father or rapist boyfriend and mayank is blown away…. And that was exactly Samrat was afraid of…and now in the kinda of situation emotionally mayank is, he was fearing more for him… and to make things worse he is planning a date with that girl… wht is going on…

Samrat: im sorry bro but its just that I donot want u to get used again.. and that's so by call girl

Mayank: people who get used evry day donot do tht to others kido…

Samrat: stop calling me kid … and .. ok…fine.. why have u asked her out on launch

Mayank: shall I tell u in French or Spanish…. To Thank Her…. He said putting the last phrase in quotation…

Samrat: my dear brother …. U send her flowers n a card.. tht wasn't enough

Mayank: maybe… but now.. I have asked her to cum.. and its certainly unlike Sharma's grace to make the lady u called to wait… isn't it

Samrat: aha really… and the lady back home who has arrange a cosine for u…what shall I be doing with tht…

Mayank: if ur talking about our dearest mom… than u know what to do…. Tel her I m out on launch with a client

Samrat: aha.. are u the client or ur with the client….

Mayank: same pinch..

Samrat: it isn't…. u r mayank Sharma

Mayank: im certainly not suffering from amnesia …. I know dear…

Samrat: and u found in a hotel .. on launch with a that kinda girl… will be a news..

Mayank: oh donot worry about that.. I just wonder wht these days media has left Politian's and got stacked with me…. It has been 5 months my girl friend ditched me and they are still there…

Samrat: ya when u have moved on with the that girl…. Holy sh***

Mayank: my little brother….stop over reacting as if I m marrying her… its just a launch…. Plus for ur convince and not to be bothered by all the media… the dining areas is booked completely…. So donot worry.. and now I m getting late ….bye bye….

Samrat kept looking at the closed door of Mayank's lavish cabin… sigh… he is afraid his brother is going in completely painful path….. it isn't a fairytale and he is certainly behaving as one of the protagonist of the story…

Right now..he has to answer his mother… fine… lets move…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok! First of all...i know that it was a very longgg update bt still!!!! i wanted to read more ya...
uff!!!!!! i was like nhiii!!! yeh yeha kyun end ho gaya...
now i dont know bt mujhe ek update chhaiye hi chhaiye woh bhi jitniii jaldi ho saktey mostly in this week plzzz 😔😔
God!!!!!!!!!!! i sooo loved it API...🤗
it was Awesome!!!
loved it to d coreee
loved it lodsss
Gosh! it was sooo captivating i mean u glued to the part to see what happened..😆
i sooo loved d way They Both Felt for n abt Each Other...
n already loving this caring lil Bro Samrat...
Their convo was really cute!
loved it a lottt
n Gosh!!! i sooo wanna read more n moreee
n wow!!!! Flowers waise ek pal ke liye i felt its Him..😆 bt i know itni jaldi thodi a jayega 😆
bt gosh!!! i m dying to read abt their lunch!!!
n hayeee...pura resto book waise karna hi hain...unke khudka jo hotel hain...hayeee
u know srsly!!! i felt like reading a Mills & Boon novel...
i loved it sooo much!!!
u r doing Awesome job like alwaysss!
n m already loving this...
loved it lodss
loved it to d coreee
love u lodsss API 🤗🤗🤗

ps: 😆 Thank u 😳 bt u know my API ROCKED more than Any One...😉😳🤗

pps: plzzz API...😔 i want an update asap!!!!!!! plzzz love u lodsss 🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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totally different concept. beautiful. mayank is so soft person

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