Lightning (An Ansh short story)

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rusha4003

@rusha4003

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

This is your first ???????

It's BRILLIANT !!!!

Take a bow dear ... 👏 👏 👏 👏

Totally loved the end !!!!

Do write some more ...

PS: I cant bring myself to call you ' Blahdoo' 😊 ... Is there another name I can call you ? ... BTW ... am Usha !

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Kurup

@Kurup

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

mesmerizing... no words to applaud this...

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Blahdoo

@Blahdoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

roberoi, Vedo, vasanthimaro, sujak, katts, bhavi_shiv, michelle, Kurup: Thank you so much. Your positive feedback means so much to me.

Shaista33: Hahaha. I really think that if the CVs show Ansh being slightly more attuned to their physical desires, it would be totally normal. After all, there are a mature couple and not love-stuck teenagers. Especially for Anandi, who has known marital relationships before.

Usha: Hello, thanks a ton for the compliments. My name is Ray. You can call me that! :)