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Posted: 12 years ago
phew... waiting for the inquiry of MSK
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: OsheenDGr8

Not today dear... internals finished today only will type tonight n then probably will update tom, n no promises there huh😛

ok 2mrw ,a long 1 pls hapy 2 dena,bohat ro lia maneet😊
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for it 😛
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3 nov. hai aaj... w8ing 4 update😊
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WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE !!!!!!
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UPDATING... 😃

with slow net so it might take some time
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Posted: 12 years ago

MILAN- The Final Destination
PART- 72

@kalabhas, @ar-n-only-ar
Ooo😲 u read in one gooo... superb yaar, glad u liked it😳
@NoorFatima
Aw Noor how shud I thank u for the lovely comment... muahhh❤️
I am so so happy... firstly bcoz my internals r over n then I saw so many new commenters on this thread. I am short of words right now n can't thank you enough... u ol r sooo great⭐️
"Even the darkest of night ends with a vivid sun"
Geet woke up the next morning n when she opened her eyes the sun rays hitting them didn't triggered the customary pain in skull. There was no sickness, no headache nothing... n it was the second day in row that didn't brought the ache with it. The change was appreciated heartily at least the morning were better n she credited the medicines for the much needed betterment.

It was Sunday. Aniee was not home n Jia was still asleep. On the breakfast table Geet avoided Maan as usual n Maan also did the same but Dadimaa sensed the extra tension in between the normal act of avoidance.

Not once Maan raised his eyes from the plate n Dadimaa looked at him with concern. He took the spoon to his mouth n that's when Dadimaa caught the sight of it.

What is this Maan? She gasped in familiarity.

Maan dropped his thoughts with the spoon n quickly covered his wrist so when Geet glanced at him she missed the contusion that was now completely hidden by the cloth.

Am done. Maan said n left where as Dadimaa just wished what she was assuming was far away from truth.

She had thought the situation was getting better but again the seed of doubt held the ground n for the first time she was questioning if the step of getting Maan Geet married was right. At that point of time she was sure they were the need of each other though their togetherness only seemed to intensify the agony. She wondered what kind of love it was that made them burn in other's presence.

Dadimaa kya hua? Geet asked the old women who appeared worried n deep in thought.

Kuch nai... She said giving her a smile. Aap bhi kha lijiye beta.

Ji but first you take your meds. She handed her the pills n then water.

Maan had dressed Jia n now was taking her to the aquarium since the last time he wanted to take her she had gone out with Geet. So he rescheduled today's meeting, Jia mattered the most n he also wanted to spend some quality with her to calm him after the horrible night.

Geet was coming down the stairs while Maan n Jia were there ready to leave. Maan saw her n as soon she saw Maan n Jia, she turned around all set to flee from the scene but Jia stopped her before.

Mommy, daddy taking Jia to acu-acu. Jia came closer n grinned ear to ear.

Hmm.. Geet muttered being caught.

You also come, we will have fun.

No. Both Maan n Geet prostested in unison.

Mujhe na thoda kaam hai Jia. Geet stated, biting her lip. Tum... tum daddy k saath chali jao.

You are a liar. Jia pouted n Geet looked at her with hurt, least she wanted to be accused by the little one too. You don't lub me. Nan n Annie are always out n you also don't play with Jia. You don't colour with me n you didn't even coloured my nails, we brought the big girls things na. She reminded n Maan furrowed his brows at that.

Haan wo... Geet didn't know how to pacify Jia with Maan standing there on head; it made her nervous n shaky.

Jia... Maan interrupted. We are getting late princess, do you want the guard to not allow us in. He took her in arms n looked at Geet resulting in lowering of lashes.

Otey... Jia said giving into Maan's threat. Jia is a good girl... but mommy will come nest time. You will come na? Jia asked sticking her lower lip out.

Geet nodded meekly n she hated to lie, especially to Jia, she deserved the truth.

Maan moved out n Geet resumed her duties.

Daddy how much more time? Jia asked impatiently.

Baby we just came out of the mansion.

Jia hit her head n scrunched her nose. Arre haan.

He looked at her fondly; his daughter was a bundle of joy. Sooo cute... He said rubbing his nose with hers.

Sacchi Daddy..

Mucchi princess. He pecked her cheek.

Daddy aap bhi bahuuut cute ho. Jia said pecking his cheek. Anyone else Maan would have killed them for calling him 'cute' but everything was allowed for his tiny-miny angel.

Accha what were you saying about bringing those big girl things.

At this Jia became really excited, ready to tell him about her shopping spree.

You know mommy took me to stopping.

Yes Jia I know then?

Then we went to that big wala building. She stretched her hands. Where the stairs move.

God! She was talking like she went to mall for the first time. Okay, phir.

There were 4 floors. Though she said four showed three fingers n Maan felt like banging his head.

Then what did you do there?

Stopping!!! You silly. Aggghhh... Maan nearly screamed. We went to the toy shop. There was Barbie, I was confused between the Nurse Barbie n Doctor Barbie. I liked the nurse Barbie betause her clothes were good but mommy said Doctor is better so I took the doctor Barbie.

Maan took a deep breath. Jia.. darling. I want to know about those big girl things that you were talking about to Geet when we were coming out.

Who teeth? Ufff...

Your mommy...

Oooh... I asked mommy to take me to the big girl shop. Mommy said that the things were for big girls' n not me. So I told her that I am a big girl, you said I am a big girl na?

Yeah yeah he said. Yes you are then?

Then she took me to the shop. We brought strawberry soap, shamphooo n smelly perfume n other things... wow na? Mommy is very nice Daddy, she brought me everything I asked. Jia said her eyes sparkling with happiness n appreciation, she certainly was damn impressed by her new mother.

Maan closed his eyes he had accused Geet for shopping cosmetics when she had only purchased things for Jia.

Sir we are there. The driver informed.

Daddy acu acu aa gaya?

No princess, Daddy has some work here. Maan looked out of the window n a small motel stared back him.
Dadimaa came home in the evening n Geet brought tea for her.

Bete aapko yeh sab karke ki koi zaroorat nai hai. Dadimaa said. She knew Geet was not physically well still she was doing all this when there were a dozen of servants for the same.

Please Dadimaa ab aap phir se shuru mat hoiye. Geet said with a fake frown sitting beside her n handing her the cup. You have this tea n eat these cookies, maine abhi banai hai. Iske baad apko meds leni hai. Okay.

Okay beta. Dadimaa smiled. Aapko naraz thode karna hai.

Yeh hui na baat. Geet returned the smile.

Accha Geet Jia's birthday is in three days. We every year arrange a puja in morning n then a party in evening. Dadimaa informed.

Oh accha.. Geet nodded.

Party arrangements toh Maan ne shuru bhi kar diye honge akhir unki princess ka birthday hai, aap puja taiyaari dekh lijiyega, hume thoda kaam...

Dadimaa... Geet cut her in mid. It's okay mai dekh lungi.

Thank you beta. Koi zaroorat ho toh mujhe bata dijiyega.

Ji thik hai.
PRECAP- A little retreat... Puja n party😳😊
Jaldi jaldi hit like n comment so that I can update fast😃



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Posted: 12 years ago
Yipee me first me first

awesome update dear...

finally Maan came to knew abt the truth it was Jia they bot all those stuffs..

Maan its better u learn wat happened before taking any decision
Edited by --aarthi-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update maneet distance jia cuteness and her birthday



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Posted: 12 years ago
Still the mystery continues...

Though there is not much improvement, there was restlessness between the two... and MSK is in action to find out about Geet...
And still Jia mystery is making us quite anxious and now the birthday party and pooja... i cant wait for the next update to know wat happens and more anxious to know the result of MSK inquiry...

Lovely update... but chotu sa update tha... so next update jaldi karo
Edited by shrutheAjay - 12 years ago

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