OS- Forever Yours - A Karwa Chauth special.

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Hi guys ! This is my First OS on IPK and this is based on the current track and takes place on the day of Karva Chauth 😊

Special thanks to Tashu for suggesting the title 🤗❤️

I dedicate this OS to Tashu,Shreya,Rima,Faiza,Zana,Fari and all the other Crazy Arhiholics ! Thank you so much for being there with me 🤗

My heartfelt thanks to all of you especially my friends Laila,Archu,Fuzzy,Anu,Deepti,Frances,Zehra,Bids,Swetha,Chitu,Sam,Tia,Srijaa,
tvpal007 and everyone else who have always cheered me up and been with me throughout !❤️ I have completed a year in this wonderful forum ! 😃😳






It was the day of Karva Chauth,a day where the married women of the house kept a fast for their husbands, praying for a long life and a happy marriage.

Khushi woke up after a restless sleep when she kept pondering about Sheetal's words the other day regarding how if the truth came out regarding Aarav's father, then it would all be too painful to bear. She shook out of her reverie when she heard Arnav's voice saying that he was getting ready to leave for office. She looked at him with sadness written on her face when she realised that he hadn't even acknowledged that it was Karva Chauth today, and waved goodbye to him. She noticed how he affectionately tousled Aarav's head and her heart grew heavy.

Khushi lost in her own thoughts didn't realise that Nani had just come to her room asking her if she was ready for the Puja which was to be held in the House that day. Khushi then made up her mind that she would not sit morose anymore and that she would leave all her doubts aside temporarily and would rejoice in celebrating her first Karva Chauth after marriage today.

She went to her cupboard and took out a beautiful Red Anarkali with golden threads weaved over it and adorned with silver beads on the sleeves, which was given by Nani to wear on this Auspicious occasion. She recalled the Diwali last year as she looked at the red attire, as another memory flitted in her mind, when she had a worn a Red Saree that day and with reddening cheeks remembered how he had almost kissed her.

After getting ready, she went down and sat next to the Mandir and started doing the Puja along with Nani and Anjali.

Sheetal had told Nani that she wanted to take Aarav out for a day to cheer him up and hence was not there that day.

Khushi prayed to Devi Maiyya asking for a long life to Arnav and also that their marriage last for Saath Janam.

After the Puja got over,Khushi went to the kitchen intending to prepare something special and she started going over recipes, trying to make a little of everyone's favourite sweets, all the time reminiscing all the sweet moments she had spent with her Laad Governor, the first time they met in his office, the warehouse incident where he carried her for the very first time, the Teej time when he broke her fast, the day he first confessed his love to her, over the phone, the way she hugged him when she first found him after the kidnapping, her first Date with him, the night which she had spent with him which always brought a twinkle in her eyes and a delicate reddening of her cheeks, her marriage with him when he defended her in front of Dadi, everything.

She wished that he would be there with her now, being safely encircled within his arms always gave her a sense of comfort and made her feel so loved.

It was late evening by the time she finished and it was time for her to go to the terrace to look at the Moon and visualising her husband's face, she would be able to break the fast.

Anjali gave her a Thaal which had water filled in it because it was customary for a fasting woman with her husband nearby, to view its reflection in a vessel filled with water, through a sieve, or through the cloth of a dupatta.

Khushi slowly made her way to the terrace wishing with all her heart that somehow Arnav would be back and would be waiting for her.

She entered the terrace and it was all dark. She was about to get a candle from downstairs when suddenly she was bathed in the golden glow of fairy lights being strung all over the place and crepe papers decorating the terrace walls and amidst all the decorations, she saw him standing there dressed in a Black and Golden Sherwani looking at her with so much love and passion emanating from his eyes.

Arnav could not take his eyes off his wife, who looked so beautiful in the Red Anarkali, moonlight falling on her soft face enhancing her beauty and the shy smile made his heart flutter.

Khushi could not believe her eyes and she glided, literally ran, into the eyes of her awaiting husband. Both their eyes conveyed their immense love for each other and they looked at each other for almost an eternity *Rabba Vey playing in the Bg*when Arnav suddenly realised that Khushi hadn't eaten the whole day and gently reminded her of breaking her fast.

Khushi took the Thaal filled with water and with Arnav standing right before her, looked at the reflection of the Moon through the water and bent down to touch Arnav's feet to take his blessings. Then Arnav took another plate which had some sweets and fed her a piece and ate the rest. He then informed Khushi that he had also fasted just for her and was actually out the whole day planning the surprise for her. Khushi was overwhelmed with emotion as she hugged him and told him that she loved him with all her heart and Arnav confessed that she was the most important person for him and that he would do anything to make sure that her beautiful smile always remains on her face.

Khushi descended down the stairs with him, with her hand firmly clasped within Arnav's ,safe and secure within his arms,both of them, in their own world of "Happily Ever After".

Guys,I know this is pretty cliched but This is my first ever OS, actually my first ever story 😊

Sorry for any typos !😳

If you like it, please do like and comment 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I guess it's just destiny that wanted me to be first in your OS, right Rima? 🤣🤣 First time failed, second time succeeded!! Thank you Nayu for having made such a beautiful mistake when posting the OS 🤣🤣 I got a second chance!!😛 *happy wala dance, ie, my Kukkad-U-Ku dance*😆
Nayu, congratulations for having completed one whole year in this forum...I have only done five months 😆 Such a long journey, na? And another round of congratulations for writing your first piece of fiction ever!! I am so proud of you 🤗
Coming to the OS, it does not look like it is your first attempt!! You lied to me!!😛 I won't believe this!!And may I ask you why you have taken so much time to write one? 😈 Now no way am I gonna let you in peace 🤣🤣
Such a beautiful One Shot it was!! Totally heart-soothing and feel-good types!! In the beginning, I felt so bad for Khushi who was kind of craving for her husband's care and affection. How her life changed with the arrival of that woman and her child!! You penned Khushi's inner emotions so well that I could actually picturise the whole scene in front of me!! How her eyes would convey that pining sensation and her pain!!
One of the parts I liked the most was when Khushi actually reminisced the Diwali times! The significance of red in her life and the almost kiss, this was so adorably sweet!! And also all the beautiful memories spent with Arnav that she cherishes were so vividly pointed out!! Beautiful journey down the memory lane!!😳
And then wow, the surprise!! It was so unexpected that Arnav had planned a surprise for her! Aww, that was so sweet!! He even fasted for Khushi!! This is what I call the perfect hubby!! You created such a magical setting with the Rabba Ve also playing in the background 😉 What more to enjoy than a simple ArHi moment!! Arnav wanting her to smile forever and them walking down the stairs hand in hand is just a PICTURE PERFECT moment!!
Happily Ever After it is!!😳 How I wish all of this could happen in the show! But the less said about it, the better it is! All I want to say is that this OS made me actually see what I think would be the best Karwa Chauth in ArHi's life!! ❤️
Concerning what you think as being cliche, as long as a scene is beautifully written or executed, I am a happy person!! So don't you dare complain about that!!😆
You write beautifully Nayu...all the words are so beautifully intertwined and the flow is smooth to read!! It was a thoroughly enjoyable and entertaining read!! Keep them coming, you know else what will happen!! 🤣🤣
PS: *beepwa* for the dedication 🤗 Love you!! ❤️
Edited by tash10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fan_ipkknd1

OMGGG OMGGG OMMGGG NAYUUU WROTEEE AN OS!!! FINNNAALLYYY!!!! XD


WHYYY IN THE WORLD DIDNT YOU TELL ME YOU'L WRITE IT TODAY? 😈

BUT ANYWAYS,

CONGRATULATIONNNSSS NAYYYUUU!!! ❤️ 🤗



THE OS WAS AMAAZING!!!

Super duper OS!! And you said you couldnt write...modest huh? 😉

NAYU IT WAS FAB!!

Lovedd how you went on the detail of the occasion amd explained it so beautifully that i could imagine the whole thing in my head!

You've really got a way with words, my friend!! You HAVE to write more! I DEMAND moree! 😈

loveddd arnav's surpriseee! He was fasting for her too, awww! 😳 and khushi thought he forgot! *giigglee*!!

loved the whole surprise he planned for her!

Nayuuu this was amaazinggg!!!

CONGRATULATIONS ONCE AGAIN!!! DO WRITE MOREEE, LOVEEE YOUUU!! 🤗 ❤️

P.S OMG YOU RES-ED A SPOT FOR MEEE??? HOW SWEEET OF YOUUU!!! 🤗 ❤️

Edited by -sweetgal19- - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aaliyahassan

Abhi Thanks for the dedication .. It doesn't seem this is your first Os .. You brought the exact emotions out of every character ..
It was absolutely delightful to read such a wonderful Os .. You write so beautifully

Khushi's selflessness to forget her insecurities and enjoy her day for her husband and family .. Arnav's l;ove for his wife .. everything was so beautifully weaved into one Arnav wearing Black and golden sherwani ?? *ME FAINTWA*

He fasted and planned a surprise also for her .. Haaye I wish every husband does the same
The best part was there was no sheetal here
Once again it was Fantastic .. We want more and more Love you lots and lots


Edited by tash10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nayuuu 🤗

Long time, no see 😉 You can blame my studies for my misbehavior of disappearing off without a notice 😛

Anyway, Congrats on completing an year of IF 🤗 I didn't even realize I completed mine in September 🤣

Coming to the OS, It was such a pleasant surprise coming to IF after a long time and seeing a PM from you. Actually I'm quite shocked that this one's your first attempt ever! I had assumed that you were a writer and I just hadn't come across any of your works 😳 And this one DID NOT seem like a first attempt 😲 It was sooo nice! 😳 I loved how at the start I felt sad reading about Khushi's feeling but by the end, I was grinning like an idiot 😛 It was such a cute OS! Sooo beautifully written! Loved how Arnav fasted for Khushi as well. It was so touching 👍🏼 Do write more soon! 😳

Ohhh and hugs for the dedication 🤗 🤗 🤗 Thank you sooo much sweetie ❤️
Edited by Riima_Azraa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Zana-


I am back. YAY ME!

WOW! One year has passed in this forum? AMAZING!

Who cares even if it's cliched. It's mindblowing. You are such a good writer. DAMN! So much better than me. I am seriously very very mad for hiding your awesome writing skills. Awh ]🤗

The descriptions are so beautiful and vivid. This is one of the best descriptive works I have ever read. And, trust me, I read a LOT! So, this is really really amazing.

You are a winner Nayu. Look at those amazing comments and the likes. Your time to bask in glory has just begun babe 🤗



Cheers to you and us! Awesome times shared, relations made, sisters found. 😊

Edited by tash10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's awesome buddy
We all would love to c such a lovely magical moment of arshi again
Iam just waiting for today's ME
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Originally posted by: misscrazyfan

It's awesome buddy
We all would love to c such a lovely magical moment of arshi again
Iam just waiting for today's ME


Awwee thank you so much sweetie ! 🤗Same here hun ! Me too,waiting to see some Rabba Vey Scenes today ! 😃😳
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Originally posted by: Ipkknd_ArHi

That was perfect! 👏


Awwee thank you so much hun !😳🤗
Edited by -sweetgal19- - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tash10

Edited on Page 1😳😳😳


Tashu ! I was just about to scrap you ! OMG ! I think your comment is even longer than my OS !! 😆Wow ! I'm just honoured sweetheart 🤗 Will reply to it in detail asap ! Love you sooo much 🤗🤗❤️
Edited by -sweetgal19- - 12 years ago

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