Mr.Mars & Ms.Venus THREAD 5 Epilogue pg 19 THE END

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Posted: 12 years ago

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me ka net got a li'l well but the monkey emoticon site refuses to open…

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Originally posted by: ruchs
me ka net got a li'l well but the monkey emoticon site refuses to open'

Grrr' will fix it then comment to you tomorrow hopefully with monkeys'

Otherwise without monkeys!!!

Awww Its alright sweety ! You just read my new OS and tell how's it?? Upto the mark?????? I was very nervous for it he he😆

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EPILOGUE

Within no time King Maan picked up the Queen of His Heart, Queen Geet walking up to his Surfboard. Geet lovingly wound up her arms around his neck seeing his oozing love and concern for her.
They climbed upon his surfboard while Geet was still in his arms. The whole audience started oohing and aahing at the heavenly royal couple. Geet simply blushed hearing the huge uproar as they flew towards their room.
In the background they could hear Annie teasing , "Happy After Party Your Highness!"
Geet was simply turning redder and redder in embarrassment.
"Geet..." Maan nudged her neck with his nose, "Don't you..." He kissed over her collarbone. Geet gasped with his slow torture on her neck.
"Don't you think you are turning too much red today???" He asked teasing her.
"Ohhh!" She was irritated with the gap.
"Because its the job of Marsians to turn RED not Venusians " He winked at her laying her on the bed.
Geet pouted turning her back to him as he sat beside her.
"Okay Okay Am Sorry...!" He held his ears and sat infront of her.
"Well Her Highness has decided to not forgive His Highness! You need to earn it King Maan..." Geet spoke raising her head with grace and elegance.
She stood to walk around when she found she couldn't move further.
Maan had created a fire wall around her which didnt harm her but her ice couldn't stop the fire. She was curious.
Maan went behind her hugging her by her waist.
"My Dear Queen..." He kissed the soft spot behind her ear. Geet was liking to be close to him but couldn't show it to him. She wanted to hold on to her fake anger drama a bit longer.
He kissed her collarbone, "Wondering? Why your ice isn't able to cool my fire???" He moved her hair to the other side lacing his hand with hers.
"Because..." He whispered huskily in her right ear, "The hotness and craving inside you to be close to me is much stronger than this fire..." He bit her ear as Geet hissed in pleasure.
He moved his head to the other side and dipped his head in her hair.
"Mmm Am I forgiven Your Highness??" He whispered while Geet started breathing heavily and started moaning.
"Hmmm..." She moaned.
He kissed her over her hair. She couldn't handle his slow torture anymore and immediately turned hugging him and wrapping her hands around his waist.
"Maan...!" She hugged him with such a force that both of them fell on the bed.
Maan rolled over her such that now Geet was beneath him writhing in pleasure while he enjoyed his torture on her.
He kissed her and inched towards lips. Geet closed her eyes in anticipation. Maan naughtily smirked moving up and pecking her nose. Geet opened her eyes in surprise making an 'O' shaped mouth.
She pushed Maan sitting up when Maan suddenly came upon her kissing her lips forcefully and carnally while she refused to open.
Maan started kissing her passionately as his hands roamed around her body. She finally gave in. Their lips moved in sync with each other transferring them to their dreamland.
Finally the Contentment and the satisfaction of being together settled in them.
No barriers Nothing Could Separate them Now.
No sooner had this thought escaped from his mind when Maan got flashes of the previous time they were together.
'KV had said She would lose her powers if we were close... What if she did now also?' He started panicking and moved away immediately as Geet went breathless with his sudden movement.
She could immediately sense her turmoil. She got up squeezing his shoulder, "What happened Maan? Why did you...?"
Maan turned and hugged her to hide his inner turmoil.
He gulped to subside his hiccups.
"Geet!..." He hugged her tightly, "What if I lose you if we come close?" He spoke in a broken voice, "I can't afford to lose you again..." He cried as tears rolled down his cheeks with a fear and panic settling in him.
"Maan..." She cupped his face kissing his forehead, "Look at me..." She said firmly, "Listen to me... We are not going to lose anything... Do you get me?? WE are NOT going to be separated this time...! That was because Dev was there...AND NOW HE IS NO MORE...Just US " Saying so she kissed him on his lips sucking out every bit of pain and soothing him with her love. A kiss of assurance, love, togetherness,belief.
Maan finally calmed down as finally both lowered themselves on the bed.
"Geet... Thank you... Thank you... For being there for me Everytime..." He kissed her forehead again.
Seeing Geet all sentimental and emotional, he tried to lighten the atmosphere by being naughty.
"And here begins our AfterParty..." He winked at her as he lowered his head biting her collarbone when they heard...
"King MMV... Are you enjoying your AfterParty...?" Annie spoke in a chirpy teasing voice.
Geet blushed not meeting his eyes as they were entangled in a very intimate compromising position.
Maan immediately got up cursing Annie under his breath.
"What happened Annie?" He growled peeping out of the door.
"I just came to check whether Our Queen is alright or not..." Annie winked at him.
"I AM NOT GOING TO HURT HER..." Maan gritted his teeth stressing on each word.
"Well Well King, After Party is all about hurting... and..." Annie giggled when Maan closed the door straight on her face.
Annie made an annoying sound and stomped her feet walking away.
Maan calmed his mood and walked towards Geet.
She was silently giggling at his irritation.
He sat beside her carressing her waist. He kissed her navel showering butterfly kisses while Geet gasped and breathed heavily making Maan mad with want to have her.
He moved up to remove her zip when he heard another knock on the door and Geet burst into another laugh.
He shot an angry glare towards Geet and she immediately shut up.
"WHO THE HELL IS IT?" He murmured.

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He irritatingly opened the door to find Sordo making the most innocent face in the universe.
"What is it Sordo???? " Maan barked on him.
"Master... I mean King I wanted to meet someone..." He blushed while Maan was getting irritated seeing him talking so slowly.
"Hmmm...!"Maan nodded. Sordo pulled someone from his back.
"Here is my... " He blushed, "Sardi... My Fiancee.." He blushed more.
"I thought you loved beauties of Earth..." Maan asked curiously raising one of his eyebrows..
"Not Any more..." He said shying.
"I want Queen to meet her too !!! Where is she...?" He said pushing inside the room pushing Maan away.
Maan panicked. He couldn't allow anyone to see Geet in such a state.
"Sordo... Sordo ... Wait...!~" He called but Sordo was nowhere to listen.
"QUEEN... " He said seeing Geet sitting on the bed in half sleeping position covered by a blanket.
"Here is my Fiancee Sardi..." Sordo said while Sardi bent in respect.
"Awww so sweet... " Before Geet could say anymore Maan interrupted.
"Queen ... You need to rest...Sordo Can you please excuse us?" He said as politely as he could without blasting on poor Sardi.
"But...!"
"I said Leave SORDO..." He gritted his teeth.
"But..."
"Its your King's Order...!" Maan said and Sordo and Sardi left immediately without enraging him more.
Maan immediately closed the door jumping on Geet as she was taken by surprise.
"Today I won't leave you Queen... You are all mine..." Maan laughed dipping himself in her beauty and relishing their beautiful relation of Love, Their extraordinary love.

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Geet woke up. Maan wasn't there beside her. The previous night was the most beautiful night of her life. She felt complete as a Queen and Wife. Just she was about to get up when she heard a stern voice.
"You are not going anywhere Aleast today...!" Maan said sternly holding something behind his back.
"But King My Duties and Responsibilities as a Queen..." She tried to protest.
"They are off for today..." He spoke lovingly sitting beside her.
Geet pouted and turned her face as he inched towards her cheek to kiss her.
"I love you Geet...!"He whispered huskily placing a plate in her lap.
"CHOCOLATES...!" She jumped.
"I know it must have been painful for you..." Maan was guilty, "But here's something that can ease your pain a bit..." Maan winked at her. Geet blushed.
From age old saying Venusians could heal any pain with chocolates... A special quality of all Venusians.
As Geet ate the chocolates, in excitement she messed them all up around her body and Maan couldn't help himself as his inner desires woke up again.
"And Neither Am I going to leave you today My Queen Geet...!" He said diving into the duvet as Geet squealed, "Maan...!!!!!"

And There Continued Another After Party Session of our
Alien King Maan Mars and Queen Geet Venus.
A tryst with the Destiny...
Fighting against all Odds...
Finally Maan and Geet were together...
Destined to be together
Forever.

NOTE:

Firstly,
Okay Guys... Finally our Alien Journey came to an end... I am so so glad that finally I was able to complete a story...I tried my best to bring in this new flavour of MaanEet as Alien Lovers. I don't know how much successful I was in this attempt. I hope you guys enjoyed as much as did I. So So I would really be happy if you guys share your feelings about my dear Aliens😉 and your journey with them😛. I would be very much glad if all of you spare a few minutes for commenting about what you liked or disliked about this story as a whole. I am eagerly waiting for your views about this.

Secondly,
I would really be happy if you guys want that there should be a second season of Mr.Mars and Ms.Venus with a new flavour but same background of Aliens.So if you are really interested for a second season Just hit the like button in my post just below to that of reachsky2011... I would really be very much happy if my baby FF comes back with a second season And I will only be starting a second season if I get a good number of likes and response as well. So What are you waiting for? Immediately scroll down and hit the like button.

Lastly,
Okay and the last very important note... You guys might be wondering why I continued updating Mr.Mars and Ms.Venus only and not my other stories. Well well My Class 12 Board exams are just three months away and I had clearly in my mind what the story would be like. So it was easier for me to type. While My other stories needed a bit of more thinking and time as well which I am not able to give. Yes Because I am getting inactive for few months precisely 4 months to concentrate on my board exams. I am really sorry guys for hanging you in the mid and not even starting any of my story... Simply because I am going to get inactive so even if I had started my other stories they would be still hanging. So so Me taking My Final Leave atleast for these three months . I will be getting Off IF in a day or two. Still If anyone wants to be in contact with me can catch me on Fb. Here's the link My Facebook. I will be occassionaly coming on Fb so you can leave your messages there.
He he😆😆😆 Initially the OS "Panauti" was supposed to be a surprise for you guys for the end of Mr.Mars & Ms.Venus but I couldn't resist myself for posting it😛. So So Do check it out Those who haven't done yet😉😉😉
MG OS Panauti

I simply love you guys for supporting me till here regularly commenting and hitting the like button. Thank you a lot Guys.
So for the last time on this thread I am requesting Please press the like button and do comment.
Love
Marsi/Ananya😳

Edited by Miss.Mars - 12 years ago

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lazy-sleeper

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Please Hit the Like button below If you want a Second Season of Mr.Mars and Ms.Venus with a different flavour but same Alien Background. I will be coming back to IF and continue it after March i.e. after my exams and entrance exams are over.
Love you
Marsi/Ananya😳
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Edited by Miss.Mars - 12 years ago

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lazy-sleeper

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii
love it

Thank you dear 😳

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TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

lovely
this comment is for the epilogue
the earlier comment was for the part before :D

Edited by lil.mizz.smexii - 12 years ago

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seemamary

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Superb dear. I would love if u u sart the 2nd season of Mr Mars and Mrs VEnus.

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

part 16
last part
very nice...

Edited by spvd - 12 years ago

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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Anu, yeh part chota tha aur juniors bhi nahi they. I want to see detail version of alien love making *blush* *wink*. Aur bechare sordo ki love story toh shuru hui hi thi. Overall, abhi toh bahut kuch baaki hai.
Meri taraf se season2 ka hukum hai.