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h4112528

@chowna

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

Dear CVs

Here is the story suggestion you can use this idea as you please if u like if not its ok just an idea

Before i do the idea of sheetal and this current track was not bad at all could have come a bit a t a later stage not just after 3 weeks of re marriage but that done and dusted . the track is not bad its the execution of the track in the sense of Khushi and Arnav character butchering if that was prevent then all would have liked the track . no sane or even as having Khushi characteristics take things in a comedy way of the probability of having a kid and a other woman in your life .if it was handled a bit maturely form Khushi point of view and not comedy it would have worked Ok all done dusted cant rewind but can improve so here is the suggestion

here is the story idea

i have by passed the Karwa chauth path as i dont know what u have planned so taking it form the point where even on karwa chauth khuhsi has failed to find the fathers name that way oin my head and mind karwachath khuhsi fast was broken by arnav and no one knows anything about sheetal husband or arav dad and who broke her fast moving forward

Khushi still can't find out who the father is . the DNA report had come again as she had requested she is sitting with her thoughts of to see or not . she regrets hurting arnav and knows he hasn't forgiven her completely. on the other hand Arnav realises that Khushi is disturbed and he tries to find the reason Akash is with Arnav and they have a general work conversation then Akash hesitates and then tell Arnav that i should not interfere but is Khushiji alright she looks lots lately as if something is disturbing her .jokingly he say that arav and his comparisons are made like how they eat toast and their certain habit that family has notices he goes on saying payal also say how arav is somewhat similar in habits like you bahi . Arnav then suddenly realises even nani has made the similar comments and that's what had triggered Khushi to do dna . He realises how she would have felt during the basket ball and all the bonding that he has done with Arav no doubt she was thinking about dna. he wanted this sorted out wanted to know what's going on in her head. he also remembers her questions about his relationship with sheetal her attempt to hypnotise . then the time he though it was just jealousy. as he was thinking this he realise why her trust is wavering in him is not the trust in him arnav khushis arnav but in the person who he was Arnav Singh Raizada who he was before he meet her and his life started changing. He had to get back home he had to sort this unwanted unhappiness in her life created by his mistake of not understanding .

Before he left he called aman and asked him to organises an apartment for Sheetala nd Arava they need to be out of RM and he needed to speak to sheetal as well .

On the other hand nani and anjali notice that khushi is lost and is thinking something and is disturbing her a lot lately and too many jalebies are being made not that they mind but they wanted to help her but not look like interfering . Nani decides to talk to Khushi and she tell her she considers as her as her nani and has seen her disturbed can she not share what's disturbing her . As Anjali is about to enter she hears Arnav come and as he is about to call for khushi she pulls him aside . Khushi at this point is at the breaking point she doesn't know what to think or do the idea of loosing arnav is horrifying and leaving him for a kid is as of she is dead this one step she wont be able to take. Khushi cries he heart out and finally she speaks to nani she tells her all that she did how she felt suspect how she tried to ask arnav about it and failed she tried to tell nani how difficult it was for her to formulate a question to ask her husband about his past life if he had sex with sheetal or not and she failed. At the same time Anjali n Arnav heard all the conversation between nani and Khushi. Khushi also told nani how she felt she didn't belong to arnavs world since sheetal has come she realises her difference in being brought up her english is not up to mark her understand of relationship like that is not she is aware of she is a simple girl from lucknow simplicity is what pleases her and likes all the fancy things dont there is a wide gulf between she and me . Nani tries to reason with Khushi pointing out that it s this simplicity that arnav loves. Nani also reminds khuhsi it was her belief in Arnav and trust that the whole family didn't have but she had that he would come for the marriage and marry her. nani question why is her trust wavering now today Khusih explains it not the arnav her arnav where her trust is wavering its the ASR that he was before he became her arnav that is bothering her. she points out she never knew he played basketball and all theses thing made her realise she never know her husband . Nani tells her she needs to talk to arnav they both need to communicate with each other to tell each other even if its difficult to put words sometimes its a necessity.

Anjali and Arnav heard the whole conversation it hurts arnav to realise what she has been though alone without him even looking at what was happening in his marriage . How she felt as a outsider in her own home how is non ability to understand her has hurt her. Anjali tell arnav they need to sort this out. Arnav goes to his room in his thoughts and thinking about his failure to see the pain in his Khushis eyes he remembers how he said her one tear always hurt a 100 times more and here she was filling up the whole bucket. he realises that what has landed them in this situation is their non communication and her insecurity to loose him. He realises that as he cant looses her and live even she feels the same and thats what had driven her to find answers.

he also realises that he has judged and punished her without even an explanations during the shyam fiasco and even when she had tried to clear her stance he has refused to accept her truth at the time today at least she tried to find answers with him she didn't judge him like he had done she attempted to find answers .

he decides to first clarify hi stand with arav not being his son in front of the whole family and then dispatch sheetal and arav form RM and then deal with the rest with Khushi behind the closed doors in the house.

Mean while Anjali comes into the room and she tell khushi she heard all that she spoke she tells her if she want to learn how to gel into arnavs world without losing her simplicity and characteristics she will help her gel in arnavs world while maintaining her moral values as well nani supports that as well . She along with nani guides khushi to talk to arnav without hesitation of her feelings they will help throught this stag

Khushi thanks them both anjali informs khushi that arnav is back early for work in his room.

as khushi is about to go to her room she hears Arnav call all family to the living area. He tells thm whats happend in the house and he tells sheetal to clarify that arnav is not his son and also that they never had any physical relationship . He tell them to open the dna also and confirm arav is not his son
But things dont work out the way ASR wants . The DNS proves positive and Sheetal tell him Arav is his son and she demand that he marry he divorcing khushi . It leaves Khushi heartbroken her worst nightmare comes true. The whole family including Arnav is shocked but arnav maintains he speaking the truth and he will prove it to all. he only concern at this time is khushi he saw he pale and knew she was holding on and on the verge of loosing it all. he wanted to go to her but something made him stop .

nani intervenes and tells Arnav to sort this matter its not a joke and she wants answers . The whole family is lost nani takes shocked khushi to her room and makes her rest while anjali guides arnav and tells him he will looses khushi and he has to clear this . Arnav is angry and asks sheetal what game is she playing at wont work.

sheetal is happy her plan has worked. mean time shyam has been released as the evidence wa snot enough to prove him the killer to his unborn child aman informs arnav he is lost as to what to do how to prove that arav is not his kid and shyam matter also.

he tells akash about shyam being released. he tell akash to organise restraining order against shyam form entering rm and also meeting anjalia or khushi

in the mean time khuhsi is lost and crying herself in nanis lap anajlia comes there to give her some juice that when khuhsi tells them she read in sheetals diary about eye n movies and stuff .that when anjali realises that something doesn't match up she tells khushi that the eye she is talking about is in london and not in usa then how come chotey would have spent time with sheetal . They realise that sheetal is playing a game to break Khushi and arnavs marriage. They tell arnav and they formulate a plan where Khushi and arnav pretend to hate in front of family n sheetal while sheetal continue to drive vege into their marriage nani payal and nk try to get khushi and arnav together not knowing about anjalia khushi and arnavs plan
Thats we we get some romantic moments between them

Will contiunue with the other idea

about shaym re entry into the raizada mansion and at the same time for a past 2 months the guptas have gone back to lucknow and shashi has become partial portable but not yet recovered the ability to talk but can scribble a bit and he has told buaji and garima about how shyam tried to kill him. They decide to hid from the raizadas thats as they dont want their daughters to go through this agony and they are happy

While Akash with help for security agency is very worried about shyam gets a new servant in the RM to stay and look out for them when Arnav and he are at work . Akash tells arnav about the security to arnav who he approves only they know the new servant in the house who is also a drive and kitchen help is a security agent.

Thats where Anjali and this agent track can start off. While Arnav and Khushi and Anjali try and sort out the sheetal fiasco. where they find that druv and sheetals sister were dating and its their son and sheetal has come to get arav his right ful place but she changed her plan when she realised thats Arnav and druv are cousin brothers and she had loved arnav and wanted to get married to him . she didnt know about him being married hence she plotted this plan

Anjali and Khushi and arnav put plan into action about getting Druv back in the house and make him admit to having a kid Arnav leaves for USA for some business

Mean time Anjali get to know that shyam was not convicted and was release without jail time and is shattered. She starts with the divorce process but Shyam doesn't sign divorce papers in fact he makes plan to enter RM and throw all out on road Anjali doesnt let Arnav know about this as he is already worried about the sheetal business and Akash is swapped with work and their opening new AR branch in mumbai.

Khushi notices Anjali is lost and worried about somethign . Anjali doesnt want Khushi to know about it
. Mean time Arnav get hold of Druv and gets all the facts they get the DNA does to show Arav is druvs son and they make a plan of action against Sheetal

Shyam on the other hand has started keeping tabs on RM house activities and notices a pattern of Khushi goes to mandir every thursday

anjlia realsies that the new servant is not like a servant and finds something fishy and she starts keeping tabs n him. Mean while Sheetal thinks that Arnav and khushi dont even talk with each other anymore and she indirect tells khushi she should leave RM for the best of a child

Nani Nk and payal are lost for what they can do to get arnav and khhushi in same room atleast on talking terms