'A Damsel In Distress' (MG)~~ Part 24 (pg 100) - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Amazing update..Dadi ko pote ke dil ka haal pata hain..😉


oh yaar i just loved ur profile pic... 😃

and thanc for reading the ff...
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Posted: 12 years ago

thank u didi... luv u 😆
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😃 THANK U EVERYONE FOR UR COMMENTS AND LIKES..
Edited by Harshitabedi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

KIss zamane mein comment krogey??😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
ok ok ok I am here to comment
I knw I am late
itna saaara late
but today was the first day of office after loong holidays of Eid and I was hell tried so went to sleep and now I am here fresh and beautiful
to give u comment
ok now Me back to comment
aha She is thinking abt Her mission and Maan at the same time 😲
yes Geet u shld maintain some distance but question is can she do it???
aha and here Maan is thinking how sweet and charming she is
but MSK u don't knw the real GEET 😆 😆 😆
aaha aaha Yes MSK she will drive u crazy
no man u r wrong
she already done this
OMG OMG OMG what happened to daadi
oh nooo
and she doesn't Maan to knw abt it
Something fish fishy hy na daadi?????
and and he is back
No Geet sweet its not a dream
he is a real MSK
and he is feeling gud after seeing her
aaha Both are feeling kuch kuch
Daadi is trapping Maan
aaha Maan is acting like Heer
I mean Nodding on everything what daadi is saying
and he said yes to marriage
Daadi is challu one
luv u daadi
and Geet is like [:O]
Poor Maan
he said yes hahahahaha
and precape 😳
what dhammaka??????
update soon
aa rahi hy na update hain na



Edited by PariNain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago



PART 9

After few days,

Geet was humming swaying left to right with her headphones in her ears and listening the song ' Heartbeat by Enrique Iglesias and Nicole Scherzinger.

Heartbeat,
Heartbeat, heart heartbeat
Heartbeat, heartbeat
Heartbeat, heart heartbeat

She didn't saw Maan coming from the other side and bumped into him and was going to fall on the floor hard when a pair of strong arms caught her just inches above the ground.

She opened her eyes and saw the alluring pair of eyes watching her so carefully.

She was going to ask him to make her stand but before she could do something he unplugged her headphones from her ipod and her ears. Now the music was playing loud and he started singing the lines.

i saw u talking on the phone

I know that you are not alone But you steal my heart away

Yeah you steal my heart away


Making her stand on her legs again and putting his hand forward like asking for a dance. She nodded and started singing the lines.

You're acting like you're on your own
But I saw you standing with a girl
Stop tryn' to steal my heart away,
Stop tryn' to steal my heart away

Like asking him not to do steal her heart. And then they both swayed with the tune and the lyrics, singing along.

I don't know where we're going
I don't know who we are

I can feel your heartbeat
I can feel your heartbeat
He said to me
I can feel your heartbeat
Running through me
Feel your heartbeat
She said
I can feel your heartbeat
She said to me
I can feel your heartbeat

She said to me
I can feel your heartbeat
She said to me
I can feel your heartbeat
Running through me
Heartbeat
Feel your heartbeat

Like they both were talking to each other in the song. This song was expressing their inner turmoil.

Naturally they both were getting closer and closer during the dance. Singing along and having real pleasure dancing in each other's arms.

Maybe it's the way you move
You got me dreaming like a fool
That I could steal your heart away
I could steal your heart away

He turned her around, now her back as against his chest and like saying that I can really steal your heart my love.

No matter what it is you think
I'm not the kind of girl to blink
And give my heart away
Stop tryin' steal my heart away

And like she is saying do whatever you can I will not let you do what you want. My heart is precious to me.

I don't know where we're going
I don't know who we are

I can feel your heartbeat
He said to me
I can feel your heartbeat
He said to me
I can feel your heartbeat
Running through me
Heartbeat
Feel your heartbeat
She said
I can feel your heartbeat
She said to me
I can feel your heartbeat
She said to me
I can feel your heartbeat
Running through me

Stop stealing my heart away
Stop stealing my heart away
Stop stealing my heart away
You're stealing my heart away

They both were really enjoying all this, their dance, their proximity, their conversation between the song and the Moon who was the witness of their beautiful dance. They both were dancing gracefully.

I don't know where we're going
I don't know who we are
Feels like we are floating
High above the stars, the stars, the stars, the stars

Heartbeat, heart heartbeat
Heartbeat, heart heartbeat
But I can feel it
I can feel it
I can feel it I can

I can feel your heartbeat
He said to me
I can feel your heartbeat
He said to me
I can feel your heartbeat
Running through me
I can feel your heartbeat
She said
I can feel your heartbeat
She said to me
I can feel your heartbeat
She said to me
I can feel your heartbeat
Running through me
Heartbeat
Feel your heartbeat

Stop stealing my heart away
Tell it to me girl
Stop stealing my heart away
Give it to me boy
Stop stealing my heart away
Say it to me girl
You're stealing my heart away

Stop stealing my heart away
Stop stealing my heart away
Stop stealing my heart away
Your heartbeat.

The song ended but hey both were still smiling and looking into each other's eyes like reading their souls. They wanted to break the eye contact but just cant, like it's the last time they are seeing each other and indeed it was the LAST TIME.

Suddenly Geet shuddered in his arms and got out of his grip slowly and went towards her room.

Maan stood their perplexed, don't know for how long he stood like a statue their looking towards her room.


They both were in their rooms.

Geet was thinking, 'bus Geet kal kal ki baat h uske baad tu bhi azaad aur Maan bhi. You don't even have to lie anymore. You will be going from here forever and will never turn your back. Vaise bhi mein Dadi aur Maan ko muh dikhane layak nhi rahungi meri iss Harkat ke baad.'

She sighed and thought about the moments they both shared, 'I have to leave them. I have to leave Maan. I don't want to hurt him. I know he have some feelings for me.'She rested her head against the bed rest and suddenly a drop of water rolled down her cheeks.

She touched the drop and looked at it surprised. She last cried when her mom and dad died in the plane hijack from the hands of terrorists. She looked at it amused. Then sighed and closed her eyes and again drop of fresh tears rolled down.

Maan was in his room thinking about the dance and how Geet left him their. But wait did he saw pain in her eyes. But why? The thought was haunting him for the rest of the night.

She pulled out a picture from the side drawer and put it in her bag. It was her with Maan when they both went to zoo.

She remembered how much she troubled Maan when he refused to take her to the zoo and said, "You want to see an elephant. Then no need to go to a zoo. Here." He make her stand in front of the mirror, "here you go miss Hathni."

She dropped her jaw and turned back to him and then pushed him forward towards the mirror and said, " MR. Bandar".

Then they both had a cat dog fight, with Maan running after Geet and Geet running around Dadi.

Dadi scolded both of them and then asked Maan to take her to the zoo.

She smiled and laughed a little thinking about the scenario that took place in the zoo. She shook her head and looked at the picture with Maan giving angry glare to Geet and Geet laughing and a Bandar at their back.

She sighed saying, "Its time to go home Geet."

And collected her things but didn't took anything that was provided by Maan or Dadima, not even the clothes she was just taking the picture with her nothing else. She has her own identity, her own world and once she is out she have her own family to take care of.


Morning

Everyone was having their breakfast quietly just guessing what is playing in each other's mind. Dadi was thinking Maan and Geet had a fight that is why they are not talking to each other and shook her head murmuring, "roz ka kaam h yeh toh."

Maan thought Geet is upset because of yesterday's event, 'I shouldn't have done this with her and Maan what has got into you. Why do you behave like a despo in front of her. I am telling you one day she will definitely slap you.'

He shook too his head. But Geet, her condition was miserable today she was thinking, 'just few hours left to go girl, last breakfast with Maan and Dadima.'She smiled but a sad one.

After the breakfast,

Geet in her bedroom wrote something on a paper and then tiptoed to see if Maan was in his room. Luckily, he was downstairs sitting with Dadi discussing something. She went inside his room kept the paper on his study table and left.

"Dadi Maan, see the most wonderful thing has happened. Look I dug this out of a dark crevice of my bag." She ran to them with great excitement shouting between her breaths.

He took the slip from her hand and read:

Mr N.G. Das

G.K.2, New Delhi

"I don't quite see'"

"oh don't you?" she said it quickly,

"This Mr Das must be known to me; he may be a relation of mine, probably a very near one. Maybe it is with just the intention of getting out of a fix like this- probably a common phenomenon with me ' that I carried this address so carefully on me. In any case, this is almost sure to be a bridge between my past and my present."

He felt rather uncomfortable under her eager look, for he became conscious, at the moment, of a shadow that fate had thrown suddenly between them both.

But he put a brave face and said, "it is great. In your bag, did you say? Well well, I thought that women's bag and especially of a modern girl only consist of nothing more than a bag full of vanity and stupid stuff; I never suspected they could carry such useful bits too."

With a calm fixed smile, she said, "there are a lot more things in the so-called modern girl that you still don't suspect. But I am sure you will find out little by little. Now don't waste time and go." She made him stand and start to drag him out but he asked her give sometime to change at least. "Okay but fast."

Precap~~ DHAMAKA!!! AGAIN... 😆 😃


Plz plz leave ur long long cute cute comments... 😉😊


PART 10

Edited by Harshitabedi - 12 years ago
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ooho now I know How Late I am
see here I commented on last part and the very next moment I got the next one
and I am the first again
having a wide grin on my face
yeppie I am the first I am first again
2nd time wohooo
I am the first I am the first I am the first
oops sowie kaya karoon control nai hota 😉
ok ok back to comment
ooho she is enjoying song
woooha Again a very cute song must say u have a very gud choice of songs
I think it gonna b one of my favorite song
ooye dance ballay ballay
loved the dance
hey buddies its not only u 2 who are enjoying we are equally enjoying
oops they both are in trance
Trance broke but question is did they really????
Oh my God what she is planning to do
no Geet how can u betray Maan
no Geet u can't do this
look u are crying see girl u are in love with Maan
admit it girl
so she stole first thing that too his pic
oh no He called her a Hathni 🤣 🤣
u are hilarious Maan
poor Geet
but Geet is not less than Maan
she called her Monkey
gud one Geet 🤣 🤣
she is remembering Her moments with Maan
so Geet decided to leave
no Gal u cant do this
never
so she decided to leave
now who the hell is this MR. Das
yes Maan U dont knw the modren gal of this age
hope will get it soon
Dhamka again???
What is left now????
Awesome update
continue Soon
Edited by PariNain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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EDITED
enjoyed maaneet's dance a lot yar,very beautifully written.
wat geet is upto?
eagerly waiting for next part.
Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow loved their couple dance...so precap sounds great...do cont soon dear...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome geet decided to leave maan

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