MG.. First Sight (SS) Part 9.. 5th Apr updated - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...loved maan...sooo cute...wowww maaneet kissed...how will geet react...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cute update😊
Maan so despo to be with Geet😉
waiting for the next part
if ur going out no updates then😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So sweet...
Their 1st dance...
Maan is so cute...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finally maan cm to kno abt his feelings...
Loved deir tutor opps maans droolin sessions...hehe
N uff ye maan ne kya kar dia...
Cont soon
Plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 3

maan getting excited

loved it

update soon

thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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as per my promise.. here is the 4th update.. wont be update for a month or may be longer 😆 .. love y'all .. and THANKYOU for liking and commenting.. :)))

Part 4

"I can't believe that you kissed her Maan". I had told Meera and Dev what had happened and this was Meera's reaction. I was baffled at myself. My self-control would be at the verge of breaking only by seeing her and today it did break. I was ashamed at what I did. I wanted the first kiss to be magical for her. I know every girl dreams of a perfect first kiss and here I was, ruining her dreams. I am not saying that the kiss was a mistake but I was ashamed of doing so without Geet's permission. Dev knew my feelings and the things which were going through my mind and Meera was thinking of her friend.

That night I couldn't even sleep properly. All I could think of was Geet and the tears which were in her eyes. Next day I went to university as always just to attend Geet's class. But to my surprise, she didn't come and that made me more guilty.

At night when I returned home I went straight to my room. I wanted to call out to Geet and hold her. I felt so helpless for the first time after my parents' death. I stood at my window, leaning against the panel. I wanted to see her. My day had always started by seeing her and ended the same way. As Mrs. Adams' house was just across the road, I could see it through the window of my room too. Geet room was clearly visible from my room and that's where I used to see her. Every night she used to sit down by the window for the reason I don't know. But her sight used to be a treat for me feast. Today as I looked her, she seemed a bit tired and instead of feeling light by seeing her, the weight of guiltiness burdened my heart even more and I went to lie down on my bed. I saw my mobile and there was a text message from Meera saying that Geet says that she won't be tutoring him because she was too burdened by the university work. But off course that was a lie. She and Meera were friends but not that close and she didn't want to share the details with her.

Meera told me that Geet won't be coming to university because she's sick. And yes why won't she be sick? I disgusted her and I'm just a sick person. As much I wanted to go see her, I couldn't just thinking that she would be hating me because I was just a student for her and nothing else. I wanted to stay away from her just for her easiness but I was concerned for her. I couldn't go and see on her BUT Daadi maa could. Next day I sent Daadi maa to Geet's. Daadi maa was my only family so I had told her everything about my feelings for Geet from the beginning and she supported me.

It was quite late and Daadi maa had been for almost seven hours. I wanted Daadi maa to stay with her but my other half wanted Daadi maa to come back and tell me how's Geet. When Daadi maa came back she told me that Geet had fever and vomiting and there was no one to nurse her. Hearing Geet's condition from my Daadi maa, I just wanted to run to Geet and sit by her just to let her know that she had someone who cared for her. That night was also a sleepless night for me. I couldn't sleep a bit. I stood up and decided to see Geet.

I walked towards Geet's house and stood outside the door. I tried my luck by turning the door knob and it was open. I walked inside and could sense Geet's fragrance from everywhere. I went upstairs ascending the steps as quietly as I could and saw two doors. I knew which room was Mrs. Adams' leaving the other one so I knew that the other door would be of Geet's room. I quietly opened the door to see his Geet sleeping. I moved towards her and looked at her features which were enlightened by the moonlight. Geet had beads of sweat on her forehead and her forehead was wrinkled and she was whimpering. I kept my hand on her forehead, she had high fever. I looked around and saw a bowl and a cloth. I filled the bowl with water and started to put wet stripes on her forehead. After sometime, Geet's whimpering subsided. Touching her forehead I felt her temperature was down. Sitting beside her, I kept on looking at her and noticed that she was all pale and had dark circles under her eyes. After, what felt like ages to me, I came out of to the real world when Geet stirred a bit. It was then that I noticed that the sun was coming out and it would probably be five in the morning. I got up and left before Geet could know that I or anyone came inside her house and her room.

Geet had started going to the university as per Meera's information. For Geet's sake, I had stopped going there.

My company had organized a party for the success of another big deal. As much as I wanted to avoid going there, I had to go. The theme was black and white and a mask. I had the mask from the previous party so I decided to wear that and also because it reminded of their first dance.

Being the host, I had to be there before time. I didn't really like gatherings so in parties I'd be alone I some corner or outside in the open air and would talk to people only when needed. In this party as well, I went outside in the lawn of the hotel. I love to stroll on my own with nothing and no one to worry about. It gives me time and chance to think over my life. And today I was thinking of Geet. She had become a part of my life since the day I saw her. She was different. She had something inside her, something that she was trying to hide. I always saw her bold and confident but that day when I kissed her, I saw something different, as if she was scared and terrified.

As I was going inside, I froze at my spot. Was I hallucinating or was it really GEET..!

Next Part 5

Edited by NoorFatima - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Edited... longg time ehh?? but u know How lazy Im... 🥱;)

awww.. Maanu now regretting y he kissed geetu..Maan pareshan na ho.. ;) 🤗 🤣
again awww.. Maanu nursingg geetu.. another masquerade partayy...
Haila, ye kya... Geet coming with somebun else??? Whoz dat person????? 😡 Maanu and geetu ka aik daanch tou bnta hai ab.. ;)
Super liked the part...
Love,
Ur Wiphu <3
Edited by ..Adeena.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤔 i was shocked that how i logged out wen i didn't log out by myself.. 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Adeena..

🤔 i was shocked that how i logged out wen i didn't log out by myself.. 🤣

and i was 😲 wen i saw u in b2b 🤣 .. double updates hay 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: NoorFatima

and i was 😲 wen i saw u in b2b 🤣 .. double updates hay 😉

Mai nahi prhnay wali qk next updates nahi mlengi jaldi.. 😔 ;)) ;D

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