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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: keerthi90

So tanya became maan's friend only coz of a bet...and unknowingly this bet is going to work even for maan...geet will definitely come to him after seeing him come into uni with tanya and then him not eating the breakfast she made...

Update soon...Waiting for the last part...



yup...tanya didn't wanna make samar think that he is the only man in demand...
and this bet is gonna work hugely for man...in coming updates
hmm...i doubt now that i will be a last part...as i need to show his charms na😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet

Poor maan...hamesha darta tha k pyaar ko paane ki chahat me kahin dosti na kho baithe...aur wahi hua..
The girl whom he wanted to share his whole life...is not even talking to him now!
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Tanya was a good nd much needed distraction for him..., and he found a genuine friend in her...but the heart still feel that pain.
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It was good that he spent sum time away from geet...it gave her space n made her think more clearly about wat happen between them...
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Maan is longing to be with her but stoping him self...unsure of her reaction.
And geet witnessd his pain n longing...sumwhere realising depth of his feelings for her!
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Maan is a perfect guy, every girl dreamd of!
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Will geet be jealous to see maan with sum other girl???(haan haan...pakka)



thanku so much shona for detail review...
yup...his fears turn out o be true...Geet totally sunderstanding his intentions...
tanya is a nyc girl who was feeling the same as he was...n knew how to tackle it as she is much stronger emotionally than maan is...n now she will help him
Geet jealousy part has to come out now as maan is not her puppet and she need to learn that first😳

thanku dear...luv you😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika

Hey are u updating today?



nope nope dear...
may b tomorrow...😳
right now gonna post my next OS😉😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting ss
while reading every update i thought of something but different things happened
i thought that maan wud make her jealous but that twist of tanya was nice
waiting for last part
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK

Part 5

The whole day, Geet ignored Maan like hell after he get back home. She stayed in her room most of the time and only came out to get her food and was again locked inside.



Maan was not feeling like sitting inside so came out and stand their, leaning against the car, not knowing that Geet has seen him entering the university with Tanya.

PM's later on...

Do LIKE & COMMENT...

Next will be a last chap...so stay tuned

simply brilliant..loved it😉😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
please update !!! Eagerly waiting for geet's reaction now
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 6

Geet eyes were looking deep at him from far away. As if on a feeling, his eyes too turn to look at her and on feeling her angry gaze, he felt a shiver run inside himself. Her eyes were looking killing and a storm was running inside them. Her body felt goosebumps from the heat produced by her body.

He was dying for her one look. This past week, he realized how much even her one glance mean to him. His body felt alive once again and his heart was beating in his throat.

For how long, they kept on gazing eachother, they had no idea but surly, this moment had to be disturbed when Tanya came back with Samar and his group-mates.

"Maan..." Tanya called his name with a bright smile and her hand went around his waist to pull him in a side hug. It was purely a friendly gesture but for Geet, that was the limit.

"Guys, this is Maan...my friend and Maan, this is my group" Tanya said gaining his attention as she introduced him to her and Samar's group mates which include four boys and three girls. Maan shake hands with them placing a smile on his face. He felt irritated with the interruption but couldn't do anything. He could feel Geet's digging eyes on himself but didn't dare look around.

One of Tanya's group-mate was having a crush on Maan from a long time but seeing him with Geet always, like other girls, she too backed off. But today seeing him alone she tried her chance and when Maan put forward his hand to shake hers, she ignored that and moving forward placed a kiss on his cheek, making him shock out from his guts. The other group-mates were too shocked seeing Niharika, the girl behaving like this.

"What the hell?" Maan shouted backing off making Niharika and all others shiver. Anger was clearly visible in his eyes. Niharika knew she went out of character but today she put all her inhabitants behind as she want to feel his glorious skin against her lips that was too much to bare.

"What was this Niharika?" Tanya asked.

"What?? a simple kiss...not a big issue" she replied carelessly and giving Maan a crooked smile, left. The other group mates and Maan were looking at her retreating back with a shock look.

As on impulse, Maan turn to look at the way Geet was standing before, and didnt find her there anymore. He looked around and found her marching angrily towards the main gate of the university and Sam was running after her trying to catch her.

"Damn" Maan cursed under his breath hitting his head with his palm in aggression. His heart was beating too furiously in his throat. What if Geet took it wrongly?? Many thoughts were running inside his mind and he turned to go out from the university when Tanya rushed behind him.

"Maan...stop...wait...stop stop..." she said running behind him and Maan stopped when she came and hold his hand.

"Dont take any step in aggression Maan...calm down...i will drop you home" Tanya said and dragged him to her car before he could argue. He helplessly sat in the car. Tears started to form in his eyes...Geet was already not letting him get close to herself and here, more problems were coming his way.

Tanya gave him a last glance and turn to start the car.

On the other hand, Sam got hold of Geet and pulled her behind the main door. Geet fidgeted in his arms but he didn't bother to let her go. When she stopped, Sam pulled his hands away and crossed them against his chest. A tear roll down Geet cheek as she sniff making Sam sigh.

"Why are you crying now?" he said with a caring voice

"Havent u seen? that girl kissed Maan. ...how dare she do that...i will cut her into pieces" She said in a teary tone

Sam wanted to laugh at her question but stopped and raised his brows seeing her possessive side.

"And why cant that girl do that...Maan is a handsome man after all...and all the girls are practically drooling after him...its another thing that he don't seem interested" Sam wanted to clear a few things with her. He had seen Maan suffering and was sure that this guy love Geet crazily. And now all he wish is happiness to him. For that Geet need to realize his importance.

"But he never let anyone touch him before?" she gave a foolish reason.

"Cause everyone assumed that you two were together..." Sam said reasoning out

Geet head snap up with that statement.

"Do we really behaved that way and seemed like that?" She asked with a frown and at that time, Sam chuckled

"Are you really that immune and unobservant...or you think of me as a fool?" Sam asked with an dont-you-believe-that. and her look made him know that he really need to explain it.

"He treats you like a princess Geet. All girls so envy you that he gives you his undivided attention...he never let any girl got close to himself... What do you think that mean haan??" his voice get stern now.

"The man who never give anyone as much importance as he gave to you...what you did to him...treat him like a tissue that is used and thrown...he cried alone feeling extremely hurt by your ignorance...and now, when he is finally looking a little happy, you are questioning him...by the way, what rights you have to question him...its his life...he can spend it as he like...you don't own him"

And as realization dawn upon her, the tears spilled down in a flow, tracing her cheeks. All her anger seemed to be leaving her body and now all left with her was a bleeding heart. Her heart was sinking now, just with the thought that she took him for granted. That she is about to loose him. She didnt cherished his friendship as much as it deserved and above that insulted his love. but he was wrong. he played with her.

Sam saw the tears and move forward to hold her from her shoulders.

"Geet, i cant say that i am with you in this matter...Maan have my vote...for being a true lover. He never bring his love between his friendship but all you did was complete opposite...Don't loose him Geet...Or i bet...you will regret it" Sam said truly being concerned about these two and left, leaving her alone in a whirlpool of thoughts.

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Tanya was driving carefully on the road while Maan was panicking.

"Tanya, please drive fast...I don't want Geet to get to a wrong conclusion...I need to explain her as quickly as possible" He urged her to drive fast while she looked at him with a HUH expression.

She was getting angry now, and so instead of speeding up as per his saying, slowed the car and parked it on a corner, switching on the back lights.

"Why you stopped here?" Maan asked with a confused expression.

"Are you kidding me Maan?" She asked after taking a deep breath

"What??" Maan expression clearly stating that he didn't get anything she was saying so she turned her body to look at him.

"I meant you are kidding right that you are going and gonna explain that happening to her..."

"No, I am serious...See i dont want any kind of misunderstandings between us...there are hell many problems already...i dont wanna add another one to that list" He said being honest. A deep feeling was haunting his heart just with the thought what she must be thinking right now.

"Are you always gonna behave like a toy??? Whom she can play however she want...When she feels like ignoring it...she can do that happily, and when she need it...she can have it?" Tanya asked with a disbelieve expression.

"But I am not a toy..." Maan argued.

"But she treats you like one...accept it" Tanya said strongly that made Maan head snapped.

For sure...Geet was using him like a toy...In this relationship, if he just turn around and see, he was the one who made sacrifices, he was the one who bear all that pain, ignorance, hurt.

"Maan" Tanya called his name while holding one of his hand. "You love her but that can't gives her right to hurt you...I know how bad it feels as i myself faced it earlier...You love her and she should respect that..." Tanya was concerned about him geniunily as unknowingly, he became the reason of her happiness.

"How can I do that Tanya...She now a days turns her face with just my sight...How can i make her realize that my love is not a play?" Maan asked in a broken tone. He was feeling so helpless right now and Tanya's heart went out for him. This boy deserves happiness.

"Maan, I want you to get all that happiness you want...She is the main part of that happiness that you should have her...But not like this..." Tanya shook her head asking him Dont You Dare Cry...

"But how?" He asked once again.

Tanya took a deep breath and look straight into his eyes. "You will do what I will ask you to do?" She want his confirmation before putting her idea infront. Like him, she too dont want to loose this friendship as Maan is a kind of person you can proudly say, Friend Of Friends.

"Anything..." He replied like a desperate lover. Surly he was one, as he can't imagine his life without her.

"Then Ignore her..." Maan looked at her with wide-eyed but she didn't stop

"Ignore her, dont talk to her...Dont you dare explain her anything about your actions...Hangout with other girls...make her jealous...and all you will get is her attention..." Tanya explained. It was as simple as that.

Maan looked away not knowing what to reply when tanya hold his shoulder softly.

"Maan, till now, she was the one who was your center of attention...seeing someone loosing interest from you do make people curious and thats the only way, she will realize what she is missing at...This worked for me and the rest you know how after a longing of two years, finally i get my love...All i wish is the same for you"

Seeing him lost in thoughts, Tanya knew that he is considering her idea and with a small smile and a silent wish for her friend, she turned the ignition On and drive towards his home

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Geet entered the home with a thoughtful look. Aimlessly, she closed the door with the tip of her heel and took slow steps towards her room when she stopped in the kitchen door and decided to take a glass of water before going in.

She opened the fridge and after opening the bottle, gulped down half of the bottle. Feeling good, she closed the refrigerator door still holding it.

"I will say sorry to Maan for my behavior...Sam was right...I behaved so nasty with Maan...He didn't deserve that..." She thought as a smile placed on her lips and she turned to only get the soft look of her eyes, turned into a angry one.

She quickly moved towards the micro and take away the yellow paper, she sticked with it for Maan.

"It is still placed here, so it means Maan hadn't take the breakfast" And the next second, she opened the micro to find the egg and bread slices still placed on there places.

Anger shoot her body.

Here she was thinking to say sorry to Maan. She made breakfast for him even when she herself was getting late for the university, but all what he did was ignoring it...How dare he...

She took out the plate from the micro, shutting it with a loud thud and move towards the bin to through the omelet and bread in trash. A loud band followed which ensured that the plate just saved itself from crushing in the sink.

She looked up to find Maan standing beside the door, looking at her in plain confusion.

"Whats happening here?" He asked casually as Tanya before leaving, strictly ask him to remove all these pity sad emotions from his face and act naturally like he used to be before his and Geet fight.

"Don't you know whats going on here?" Geet barked at him which give him goosebumps.

"No Maan...Dont be scared now buddy" He mumbled to himself, providing himself some strength...and raise his shoulders as saying I-Dont-Know that made her more angry.

"Cool...and here i was thinking that today, i will say sorry to you...Made breakfast for you even when i was getting so late for my lecture" she pointed towards the bin where that egg was showing on its face. "Left this damn note for you to take that..." she showed him the note and tore it into mini pieces infront of him.

Maan was feeling happy seeing that finally she cared. His heart was asking him to stop that facade he was putting up and moving forward brace his friend but his mind stopped him to take that step.

"She is no longer just your friend...she is a girl you love...and If you want her to stay in your life, just do what you are doing" and that was the first time, Maan decided to give preference to his mind over his heart and put a stern expression on his face

"What can I say...I myself was taking care of my food from last few days so the idea that you might have left something for me, didn't crossed my mind...and thats..." he pointed towards the bin with his index finger. "Not my mistake" He said, giving her a frown expression and turned his back to her as he knew, one more moment, and his game will be over.

Geet's face was left opened with a shock seeing him talking to her like this as she took ambled steps towards him only to see him closing the room door with a loud thud that must have done a little damage to the door railing.

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EIDI WALAY LONG COMMENTS...OK...😈 Warna last update k liye 1 and a half month wait karna hoga as I am going on vacations to pak next friday...


Edited by cool_SK - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow sam ...you need a hug man
Good job


Ohkk ...tanya giving lessons to Maan ...lol


Aww ... Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
aweeesom...maan for the first time listened to his mind...and now it's time for Geet to value Maan and his love...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me loving geet's jealous avatar,she shud realise wat is maan's place in her lie.loved d turn of events.

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