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RECAP:
rey:(repeated) dehradun... par wahan...😕 (he was brought back into sense with Kriya mom's sobbing) aunty don't cry i will do something kuch nahi hoga humari kriya ko... " with this he took his car keys and some clothes, blankets and left for searching kriya...
rey sat in his car starting the ignition...*self talk* rey tu wapas ussi jagah jaa raha hai jahan par... par dude kriya needs me, i can't let anything happen to her...but woh lagti kya hai teri jo tu uske liye wapas ussi jagah jaa raha hai?? ❓now rey got highly confused den he remembered kirya's mom words from morning...
zindagi ke kisi bhi mod par apko pyaar mil sakata hai, bas u need to identify it... see if the person whom u loved is gone from ur life den let him go but if destiny brings d very same person back den only he was yours otherwise woh tumhara kabhi tha hi nahi...and rey got his answer that he will write his love story again in that place only where last time his love couldn't be completed may be this was god's indication and with a determined look and confidence of his love, he went in search of his baatcutter, yes his love, his life now, ab woh apne iss pyar ko adhura nahi rehne de sakta...❤️
PART-4
REY reached near dehradun hardly it would have taken 1 and a half hour to reach from dhanaulti to dehradun but due to heavy rain and landslide he reached in 3 hours, on his way he was also searching for his baatcutter... by inquiring from every third person showing them her pic which he has taken on that party night secretly on his I-phone...
rey was really tensed for kriya...😔*self talk* what if something happened to her??? no nothing will happen.. this time god can't take away my love from me... he has to keep her safe... plzz kriya be safe till reach you... plzz...(tears brimmed up in his eyes which he swiftly wiped away) no i can't be weak mujhe strong hona hoga baatcutter ke liye... (he also tried her mobile but it was showing out of coverage area)Damn plzz kriya be safe... (after trying for god knows how many times her mobile did ranged up, a hope risen in him) baatcutter phone uthao plzz, pickup the phone...
and at last someone answered it...
"Hee..eelloo..."(in a meek voice kriya answered the call)
rey:(smiled and thanked god) Thank god kriya u picked up... are u fine??? where are you???? i'm on my way searching for?? plzz mujhe batao tum kahan ho main abhi aata hun tummhe lene... (he said in a breathe)❓
kriya:AAHHH!!!! woh... woh rey mujhe nahi pata main kahan par hun bas last mujhe yaad hai dehradun puhachane mein 1 KM tha aur fir ek truck samne se aaya aur it was raining heavily fir i lost control of my car... mujhe kuch nahi dikh raha yahan par bas car ki windshield crash hogayi hai aur i'm stuck here i can't come out plzz reyaansh help me... i'm scared...😕
rey:(panicked) kriya tumhe chot lagi hai kya??
kriya: (murmured) Ha..aan... shaayaad...
rey:(got the situation) listen to me carefully kriya, plzz keep talking to me... mujhse baat karti raho plzz don't close your eyes kriyaaa...
but it was to late kriya had already fainted she was weak and continuously getting drenched in rain made it really difficult for her to stay awake...
rey got it that she must have fainted...
rey:(frustrated) OHHH... god... plzz help me out,😒 (he drove as fast as he could but the storm and worse climatic conditions played a hindrance to him, while driving he got into his flashback mode how he started falling for the great KRIYA GHAI his BAATCUTTER)
FLASHBACK
it was that very party night when rey got to first encounter his true feelings for kriya...
(okay one thing i clear in beginning is dat rey and shivam are talking in the corner where no one is hearing them except one more person... who is he? u will get to know...)
when shivam said that the girl rey have make his is none other than kriya he was highly shocked... 😲 he thought...
*self talk* "no i can't do this... dat to with kriya no its not possible, the girls with whom earlier i have spend nights, themselves didn't have any good character, they themselves were with him for just having a pleasurable time... but kriya she is far from that world... although they both didn't get on right path from very beginning, one thing he knew is that she is not the type of girl whom he would consider for flirting and for his random make outs... he knew she is kind of naive and high moral valued girl not like other sl**s🤬 who would do anything for money and fame...
no i can't ruin kriya's life just bcoz of one silly bet and also i have to show this shivam his right place otherwise he may bother kriya in future, i have seen the lust and dirtiness in his eyes..."😡
he was still thinking when shivam opened his ugly mouth again only to speak some non sense...
shivam: Hey rey what happened??? what are u thinking see if u don't wanna have this chance for urself then dude accept it that ur a loser and let me have the pleasure to spend some memorable moments with ur assistant ohh... lord look at her😈 (eying to kriya who was standing with swaron near buffet area) she is so inviting, i must tell u, i have never ever seen such a beautiful women, gr8 body and her those slender long legs WOW man... her soft skin... You know what when i touched her hand sometime back they were so soft... her creamy skin...😎
rey was fuming😡 hearing all those pathetic words from his mouth, his eyes were blood shot red... he was feeling like punching him till his death, his hands turned into fists and before he could move them towards shivam's face he saw a hand slapping across shivam's face hard both rey and shivam were shocked 😲to see whom that hand belonged to...
the person was non other than Mr.Singh; shivam's father... he always liked rey as his business associate and was fond of kriyaansh team work and always praised rey's work in front of shivam which made him jealous even more...
Mr.SIngh:(barked) 😡Just shut up Shivam... one more word and i will forget that ur my son... Is this how u respect women??? I am ashamed of my self..(he said disappointingly)
shivam: but dad listen to me once...(he tried to explain)
Mr.Singh: i said no explanation... just apologies to Mr.singhania and for ur kind information i have heard all ur conversation with Miss. kriya also.. so i don't need any of ur lame excuses just do as i say or else...(he throws a dagger look to him)
shivam:(feeling insulted and angry) I'm sorry (he gritted his teeth and left from there and stood behind pillar)
Mr.Singh: I'm sorry Mr. singhania...
rey:arrey nahi sir plzz aap aise matt kijiye u are elder to me...(he said feeling embarrassed)
Mr.Singh: nahi its all my fault i didn't raised my son with good values...but one thing i'm sure is dat may be whatever ur image is i don't bother about that... You are not what u show to others..(to this rey raise his 😕eyebrows in confusion and Mr. singh smiled😊) samjh nahi aaya (rey noddded) koi baat nahi aajyega bas thoda time do apne aap ko... bas zara itna sochna ki jo reyaansh pehle flirt karta tha woh aaj kisi ladki ke liye itna protective kaise hogaya think about Miss. kriya... reyaansh you will get ur answers...
rey:(tried to speak in defense) Aap galat samjh rahe hai sir waisa kuch nahi...(but Mr.singh didn't let him complete)
Mr.singh: aisa kuch nahi hai tumhare aur Kriya ke beech yahi kehna chahte ho na... as an elder i would say this beta inn aankhon ne buhat duniya dekhi hai aur tum dono ke saath pechle jitne din hi kaam kiya hai mujhe woh dikha jo shayad abhi takk tumhe pata bhi nahi chala par jald hi tumhe ehsaas hone lagega...(he smiled 😊patted on his back and left from there)
rey stood confused going through Mr.Singh's word and he also started to move but shivam appeared and again taunted him...
Shivam:(with a smirk on his face😈) so reyaansh dad ki baaton se toh lagta hai ki tum kriya ko pasand karte ho par aisa kaise??? I mean tumhare liye toh ladkiyan ek easy prey hoti hai... Ohhh... now i understand u... kirya thodi difficult hai na toh pehle this pyaar vyaar and all that then you will get what you want and usse chod doge na...
chalo koi baat nahi jab dil tutne ke baad kriya ko kisi shoulder ki zarurt hogi na to cry upon just send her to me...You know main buhat pyaar se handle karunga, I'm very good with girls... pehle usse hug karunga aur fir...
😡that's it rey punched him hard on his face due which he stumbled back on ground and rey again punched in his stomach...🤢 turned to his heels but stopped on hearing shivam's voice...
shivam:(yelled) why are you being so possessive about her... aisa kya keh diya maine??? we can share... but fir bhi tum... secne kya hai boss????❓
rey:( sighed and without turning back) Mere aur kriya ke beech mein kya scene hai shivam tumhe zarur batata par tumhare jaisa cheap aadmi kabhi yeh samjh nahi payega ...
and he kicked hard on his knee left a wailing in pain shivam behind...🤢
and den he joined kriya and swaron after that what happens you know... hw he shouted at kriya for her dress and all...
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:rey got back to his home he had a look of rahul who was sleeping peacefully and den sat near his window thinking about what happened a while ago...
he thought...😕
what does Mr.Singh wanted to tell me? Am really falling for kriya?? if not then why does she effect me so much? uski har baat, from the day one i'm feeling some connection with her... from last 10 years i have never ever felt like dat with any other girl...it is like some kind of strings are attached...❓
i have been in relationships but they haven't lasted more than 2 days... i used to find my angel in every other girl but couldn't and after dat when mom separated from dad just coz dad's company suffered losses and his financial condition was worse i got to know that women only love money they do not understand true meaning of love..dad also got married to someone else just to save his sinking business empire, 😭
me and sharon left him and stayed with our grandma we both started our company with swayam and reached on top and then came tanya in my life from the starting of our relation i knew somewhere inside that she was not right for me but still i carried on with it i don't know why may be just for the sake of being with some one or what else, but one day that also got cleared up she was with me coz i can provide her with all the facilities and she could get fame by being with me...💔
but still there was a hope of ray left in me about love when i watched sharon and swayam, although their relationship is going throught tough time i know they will get over it...
par kriya ke saath main jab bhi hota hun toh main yeh sab kyun bhul jata hun..everything seems nothing to me... the most important thing at that time becomes is to annoy her, irritate her... to get her attention... what attention??? rey tu fir se yeh kya soch raha tujhe kab se attention grab karne ki zarurt padh gayi... par dude from day one you keep troubling her just to get one reaction of her's... just to hear those verbal curses from her beautiful mouth...Isn't it true???
haan..haan...par main apni angel ko kaise bhul sakta hun...main usse pyar karta hun aur karta rahunga... main kriya se pyaar... no no pyaar nahi main kriya se pyaar nahi karsakta...
par kyun nahi rey agar tujhe second time love mila hai den why not seek for it?? why are you backing out dude?? you can start a new beautiful life with ur baatcutter...don't you want to lead a life like heaven in future...don't you feel jealous whenever you see swaron together...
but what about angel??? may be she have also moved on... par kya kriya mujh jaise Casanova par believe karegi kya woh mujhe apni life mein jagah degi????❓😕
(all these questions were still in his mind when swayam came, rey was in his thoughts that's why rey got late to open the door)
when he left for dhanaulti he thought to put all those questions aside and start a fresh with kriya being her all time favorite enemy LINECUTTER...🤪
par when today morning he talked to kriya's mom he purposely asked about giving chance to his second love...and he got to know that its never to late for love and if love is knocking at his doors den he shouldn't hide away, he should accept it with open arms...
thats why he accepted his feelings for kriya...but now the most important task is to break the hard nut Miss.kriya ghai and let her acknowledge about first her own feelings den his...(yes somewhere he can understand her feelings and also know that she has still not admitted it to herself)❤️
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PRESENT
rey was in his thoughts when he passed a red maruti 800(hill stations par aisi hi cars hoti hai) he remembered this was the same one in which kriya left in the morning... he stoped his car with a screach sound and came out of it immediately... the car was in bad state, front portion was banged in tree and some of the bushes covered it plus windscreen has also broken...😲
rey moved some bushes away only to find kriya stuck in inside car... between staring wheel and her seat some of the glass pieces have scratched her arms and due to continues rain she fainted and now have high fever... he took her out of it...placed in his car covered with the blankets he bought along he even tried to wake kriya, she didn't opened here eyes but she was continously mumbling..." Rrr eeyyy pzzz jalldi aaayi thand lag rahi hai..." (she was trembling with cold, and shivers were running down in her body) 😔
rey started heater and called up kriya's mom,who was delighted on hearing that her daughter is safe... she also informed him that all the routes of coming back have been closed as a storm of high intensity is going to come so its better they stay in a hotel for time being...
rey also thought it as a good option coz kriya was not in a state of tavelling so he manged to find a decent hotel and asked for a doctor...
doctor:Mr.singhania... she is having high fever and i guess if it stays like this den she may get pneumonia...it is better you change her wet clothes and keep her warm,i'm giving you some medicines plzz give dem to her...
after doctor left rey stared at kriya in horror state, 😕now how is he going to change her, he asked doctor to send a nurse but their was no nurse here all of them couldn't come coz of wheather and even hotel staff doesn't have any female employee right know...
he took a deep breathe in, moved towards kriya nd wake her up... kriya was in her semi-concious state...rey asked with lot of difficulty and nervousness,
rey:(scared) woh...woh kriya...
kriya:Huu...aahh..kya hua rey???(confused and irritated as her whole body was aching)❓
rey: kriya woh mujhe tumhare clothes chamge karne padenge...(he gulped down hard)
kriya's eyes flung open...😲
kriya: rey aaap kya keh rahe ho?? main karlungiii aaap mujhe washroom takk chod do... i will manage....(she said will getting up but tripped back due to numbness in her body)
rey: kriya kaise jaogi tum yahan khadi toh ho nahi sakti so how are you gonna change???😒
kriya: toh fir theek main aise hi wet clothes mein rahungi...
rey:(meakly) par its not good for your fever, abhi toh tum khadi nahi hoo paa rahi ho fir toh kal bed se bhi nahi uthogi...
kriya: toh aap kisi hotel female staff ko bula lijiye...AA...AA...AAACHOOO!!!!!!
rey: what do you think i haven't thought about this but unfortunately they don't have any female staff right now...i have an idea i will close lights and my eyes also then i will change your clothes only if you trust me...
kriya:(closed her eyes and said in a whisper but enough for rey to hear it) I..I trust you...😳
rey was shocked😲 by her this statement and it took him a minute to come back when kriya said something...
rey:AH HHUUU...have you said something???😕
kriya: haan now will u start your work or you are waiting till i die coz den you will be the most happiest one...
rey:(frustatedly) SHUTUP kriya... 😡 i won't even think in my dreams like that about you..(he whispered slowly) because you are special to me...
he switched off the lights and closed his eyes, one by one very carefully by not making contact with her skin he did his work and made her wear a long shirt of hers which rey brought along with him, but once or twice his hands did felt the soft silky touch of her skin and at those moments he would stop for a second and controlled himself by clutching his hands in fist and fastened with his work...
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after some time he was sitting near kriya placing wet napkins on her forehead so that her temperature gets down but it was not coming down at any cost and his clothes were drying near fire place he was in his 3/4th shorts...
suddenly kriya started shivering he rubbed her feets and hands but of no use... her teeths started gritting and she was constantly shaking when all the attempts of making her ormal seems futile...
he called upon doctor who was stuck in his clinic and couldn't reach hotel at that moment he suggested him for technique of body heat...and before rey could ask anything else phone lines got dead...
now rey was really nervous and here kriya's condition started deteriorating... his mind had stopped working he couldn't see kriya like this sinking minute by minute he has to do something and dat to early...😒
he thought for some time and finally gathered some courage and moved towards bed where kriya was shivering...
he was never so much panicked before, he prayed to god and sat beside kriya..🤔
den he shifted close to her and settled himself beside her in the piles of blanket in which she was packed and embraced her in his arms; cocooned her just like protecting her from all the evils and she in her unconscios state hugged him from his waist,🤗 he placed his head on the bed rest and her head on his chest and rubbed her back to calm her give warmth...
he closed his eyes... and thought about her reaction when she while gain her consciousness... if she yelled upon him, if she thought that he wanted to take her advantage, if he told her truth about his feelings will she gonna accept him or like others she will also misunderstand him, does he deserve her considering he has an awful past and image which she is fully aware off... what will future of this new love... or this time also he will be bitten in love not soothed and loved back...
with all these thoughts sleep enveloped him 🥱and two persons who love each other... one who still has not accepted and one who has accepted but doesn't have courage to express it slept in each others arms under the moonlight and rhythm of their slow breaths playing as background soft music...
with the early morning orange-yellow sunlight which peeped through curtains of their hotel room rey wake up and on opening his eyes he met with beauiful sight...
kriya sleeping like child comfortably on his bare chest and tightly hugging his waist as if he is her teddy bear...her hairs which came on her eyes irritated her due to which she frowned in her sleep and snuggle more in his chest..rey smiled😃 at her innocence and brushed her hairs behind ears, now she was contended, 😊
but rey while trying to getting up disturbed her beauty sleep.. irritatedly she opened her one eye and everything was blurred to her.. she was having a throbbing headache she immediately shut her eyes close and den again opened them and got the shock 😲of her life she watching the postion in which she was sleeping... when she lifted her head up her drowsy eyes met with rey's nervous face who was giving her a very scared smile and softly murmerd..."HII..goo..goood morning..."😕
and she instantly sprang up avoiding his tensed look and looking elsewhere...she calmed herself grasping the situation...
rey:(hesitantly) woh...woh kriya..maine kuch galat nahi kiya,you was shivering at night and doctor also suggested for it... and if i haven't done that then may be you could have been...
she completed..."DEAD..." (rey's eyes flung opened and flinch of pain raised in his heart hearing that)🤢
kriya: rey aap dariye matt maine pehle bhi bola tha aur fir kehti hun I trust you rey... acha main zara freshen up ho kar aati hun, (she tried to get up but it was difficult for her due to body ache which was still there...)
rey stopped her by holding her hand.. she turned and looked at him with questioning eyes...❓
rey: kriya main kuch kehna chahta hun...
kriya looked at him as reading his eyes to some extend she understood what he was going to say as she to was having those feelings bottled up in her heart,she didn't have courage to let them out coz she was scared what if this time also she would get betrayal in love...
but still she has to listen to him not for his sake but for herself although she was scared,still somewhere she wanted give herself a new chance...chance to believe in love, chance to be loved by someone... so she said...
kriya: haan rey boliye...
rey: woh...woh kriya I LOVE YOU!!! yes I LOVE YOU KRIYA, aur mujhe pata bhi nahi kabse...shayad jis din se tumhe dekha hai tabse ya fir jab se tumse ladna shuru kiya tab se par i'm sure I love you more than anything else in this love...
kriya was shocked 😲to hear that though she had a slight idea about it but didn't knew that he was serious which showed in his eyes...
rey continued..." you must be thing thinking that i'm playing some prank on you or like my other stupid flings you must another add-on but that's not true kriya... meri har saans mein har dhadkan mein tum bas gayi ho kriya... aisa lagta hai ki shayad main tumhare liye hi bana hun aur agar tum apne dil se pucho toh shayad woh bhi yahi kahega ki main sach bol raha hun, par meri image ko dekhte hue inn sab bato par beielve karna mushkil hoga... par aaj main tumse apne dil ki ek baat karna chahta hun isko sunne ke baad shayad tumhe meri baaton par trust ho"...
then he told her about his parents and tanya and he continued...
"kriya ek aur baat meri zindagi mein ek baar pehle bhi pyaar aya tha par destiny ki wajah se woh mujhe mil hi nahi saka...mujhe toh yeh bhi pata nahi chala ki meri galti kya thi... bas woh chali gayi mujhe akela chod kar...aur aaj jab i got second chance to love i don't want to lose it...main janta hun tumhari life mein bhi koi tha shayad aunty ne bataya mujhe aur main promise toh nahi karta par koshish zarur karunga ki tumhare dil mein main apni ek nayi jagah bana sakun jo sirf meri aur tumhari ho..."❤️
kriya was rooted to her place she didn't reacted for few minutes and rey thought he has lost his opportunity to being loved...he started moving but stopped on hearing kriya's soft vioce...
kriya:(whispered) Rey... (he looked at her❓ & she cupped his face with her hands) i said na i trust you fir aapko aisa kyun laga ki mujhe yakeen nahi hoga, mera dil janta hai ki aapne abhi abhi jo bola uska ek ek word sach tha..(rey was confused)😊 aisa kya dekh rahe ho... jis din aapne uss choti ladki ko apna coat pehnaya tha so dat she could cover herself properly that time only i got to know that you couldn't take advantage of anyone, and at Mr.singh's party if going by your image of so called cassanova then you shouldn't have rescued me from that creep shivam...
and after that also we were alone for atleast 10-15 days here still you didn't put one wrong step towards me and yesterday night i was uncounsious you could have done anything but you were more worried about my sickness and health rather dan satisfying yourself... i know i do have a past and you also have one par kya hum ek dusare ko ek muka nahi de sakte...kya hum pyar ko ek chance nahi de sakte kya hume life mein aage badne ki opportunity nahi mil sakti..."
now she brokedown in tears...😭"plzz rey i'm tired of being alone, i also wanted to be pampered and loved by someone special...mujhe naye pyar ke pall sajane hai... kya aap help karoge meri????" (she asked with hopes in her eyes and tears trickled down her cheeks)
rey:(smiled😊 through his tears) i promise kriya we will create our new heaven for love...(and with this she hugged him and they both cried trying to forget their pasts and in prospect of developing their new found love with each other)❤️
they both stayed like dat for few minutes when kriya shouted..."ahhh..eeekkkss... these mosquitoes they will suck out my whole blood one day" and shivered slightly..."Ufff!! yeh thandi mummy..."
rey: toh tumhe kisne kaha hai itne chote kapde pehen ne ko...
kriya:(retorted back) 😡for your kind information yeh aapne hi pehnaye hai...☺️(she bit her toungue on realising what she said and blushed to the core)
rey grinned😈 at her...then both burst in fits of laughter...🤣
this way with a new morning they begin a bright journey of their love...
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but...but...but will this love be like this or it will get bitten again to know this wait for last part...
this was part-4...kaisa tha pakao??ya fir okay okay types...some of the questions still left to be answered which if god wished den may get disclosed next or last part...
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Edited by pallavi.14 - 12 years ago
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