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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Wow. . . . .
Awsome update. . . .
Kriya kitni jaldi maan gayi. . . .
I thought ki bhahut atitute degi. . But no. . .
Haiyee truth n dare game was fun. . . .
Flashback was awsome. . . . . . . . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna. . .
Egarly waitng 4 it. . .
Pm me wen u update d nxt part. . .
Update really soon. . . .



Thnk u..n ll update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
awesome update
do pm me next time onwards
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
hey guyzz i'm bck wid d update..i'm sry 4 late

update bcoz of my exams...so here i go wid d

update!!!!!!!!!!!!yupss!!!




PART 4:


RECAP:

kriyaansh talking abt der last pre-valentine's

day...😊

Rey n Kriya both came bak to d earth,kriya

started blushing like hell,Rey is smiling.
re:Kriya I can never forget our first

valentines day

kr:mein bhi

dey were disturbed by a call frm sharon

kr:hello

sh: kaha ho Tum ,ghar kyu nai ayi abhi tak u

knw wat time is 11 o clock

kr:wt!!! ( hyp mde) šŸ˜•Sharon Tum mom ko

samhalo

mein arrahi ho ok

sh:ok cme fast

re:Kriya kya hua Itna hyper kyu ho rahi ho

kr:Rey chelo 11 bajgaye Hume ghar jaldi

pahuchna hai

re:kr relax,hum pahuch jayenge k let's go

kr :ok

dey both get in to d car n rey starts driving.

re:kria dun wrry v ll reach hme soon

kriya smiles,n soon dey reach hme..

kr:ok byee Rey

and she was abt to open d door den he pulls

her wrist by his hand n

re:hey listen..

kr:wt?

re:aaj Tum mujhe bina gud n8 Bole hi jharahi ho

kr:ohh Gus ni8 Rey

re: aise gudn8 bolte hai kya

kr:phir kaise kehni chahiye

re:I ll tel u n he slowly leaned forward n kissed

her on d cheek tightly wkd she shivered at his

touch.. realize tat she was already late n tries

to escape,n moves back

kr:Rey byee mujhe jaana hai

re: ok byee

Kriya leaves n Rey went to his house



nxt day mrng..,Kriya was getting ready to go to

coll,she gets a msg frm re gud morng

baatcutter ā¤ļø

kr: gmrng... Rey

Soon Krisha reach coll,all wer in reh Hal

sh:hey guys

all:hey

kriyaansh llhh starts..n was broken by d gang

so guys let's practice (guys In dis ff nw

onwards for any comp dazz n weak perform as

one group )all started practicing very sincerely

bt bt reyam wer always lost in der own

dreamlands 😳after d rehearsals all bid byes n

go bak to der respective homes.



At night in kriya's room she is watching mirror

movie wid sharon den she gets a cal

frm non other den Rey..so she excuses frm

Sharon n went to balcony.

kr:haan Rey..

re:hey baatcutter kya karrahi ho mere bareme

soch rahi ho

kr:nahi mein aur

shar mirror movie dekh rahe te

re:oh tho dono Sisters ko darr nai lagta.tumhe

to andere se bhi darr lagta hai.

kr:Rey wt do u mean tat mein horror movie nai

dekh

sakthi,aur app u r laughing at me(shouts) 😔

Rey bid his Lower lip

Re: no baby it's not like tat I mean Tum dekh

sakthi ho

n kriya cut in i knw mein dekh sakthi

hu par pehle apne hi kaha

re:baatcutter i was jus kidding n by d way y d

hell v r fighting frsuch silly thing

kr: Rey mein hi thoda jaldi hyper hojati hu m

reli sry..

Rey cut in. Kriya tum sry kyu bolri ho m

sry...

kr: Rey kaha na m sry mein hi hamesha apse

jagadhti hu

re: Kriya m

voice :m sry..kriyaansh

kriyaanshstartled by d voice n say in unison

Sharon.

sh:m sry to disturb u guys

kr:cuts off d cal n went 2wards her n stood

before her

kr:sharon,tum yaha,movie katham hogayi hai

kya,

sh:cut tat y u both sayin sry to eachother

kr:Kuch nahi bass aise hi small fight soo...

sh:aww soo cute kriya fight or sort out bhi u

guys r reli meant to be together,Kriya blush bt

dat was caught by Sharon n teasing..both Sis

hug.went to der respective rooms n sleep.



nxt day in clg Krisha entered d clg Sharon

excused herself n went to locker room.

kr:isse kya hua

while walkin she banged into Rey

kr:ouch...

re:Kriya tume lagi to nai.

kr:no Rey

re: Kriya remember last ni8 humne kaisa fight

kiya

kr: laughing yeah

re: bh d way kal raat ko shar thi na ,kya kaha

uss ne

kr: (smiling) 😊 ussne hamari baat sun li aur

mein ne fight ke bare mein kaha

by den dey gets a c frm gang cum to d rh , in d

rehearsal Hal

sw: kaha reh Gaye ye dono rehearsals karna

hai

just den kriyaansh enter right here..

sh: agaye

Tum dono,so lets start practice guys

rehearsals starts n after a long rehearsal all

went to locker rooms .

sh:msges all of dem to meet in

d canteen,except Kriya .Sharon tells to Kriya

to go hme as she vry tired n she said ok.

she went to parking area den forgot to tell Rey

tat she is leaving,here in d canteen gang r

curious to knw tat y Sharon has called

every1

sh:guys..tomoro is kriya's b'day

re:damn I completely forgot

all:woow

sh:guys it's her b'day wid family wid me,wid

us..let's organize a party

nil:ya..nice idea

sh:guys mein Kriya ke b'day bahut special

banana chahti hu Humne childhood se ek baar

bhi bdays occasion celebrate kya wish bhi nai

kiya ne nw she had tears in her eyes,Rey went

up to her n hugged
her,meanwhile Kriya called Rey,re:oh breaking

d hug tummari pyaari sis ka cal hai

sh:wiping her tears uthalo varna voh gussa

ho jayega.

Rey lifts d call

kr:Rey ap kaha ho

re:actually wo Kriya mein canteen mein hoon.

kr: Rey mein ghar ja rahi hu so mein ne socha

tumhe bata du

re:ok byee Kriya

kr:only byee,gud n8 kiss nai ,kisine mujhe kaha

tat while biding we hav to give gud night kiss

rey was dumbstruck ,n was mad at her tat she

said n tat too infront of d gang

re:no i mean gud n8 ,Kriya gets angry n

says,

Kr:k bye rey i think u r nt in a mood to talk wid

me so byee den suddenly he xcused frm der n

went to other side

Re: kriya m sry mei gang ke sath tha baby so

aur ye lo tumhare g8 kiss,saying dis he gave

kiss on phone, kriya blushed.

kr:bye rey lov u muuaahh

re: luv u too baby n thanks for d kiss(smiles

widely) 😃Kriya blushes n cuts d cal rey

went to d gang who wer controlling der laugh

by seein him

sim:hmm private talk n all haan.

Rey smiled wide.

Vic:tu ladkiyon ki tarah blush kyu karahahe

re:dude mein blush nai smile kiya

Vic:achaa,woh teek hai tu achanak kaha

Gaya

sh:guys nw stop teasing my juju ok

re: thanq u shar...na saaa...?

ne: saali saheba...

re: saali...wht?saali mujhe samaj mein aaye par

yeh saheba kya hai.

all: oohhoo

Sh: guys Sab ko apni duties yaad hai na ok

guys make sure tat Kriya ko plan ke bareme

Kuch bi bata nai chalna chahiye especially Rey

re:trust me guys I won't tel her abt plan.

sh:we trust u Rey

re: tq shar n guys mein Kriya ko kal

12oclock wish karna chahta hu.

sw: kool rey

sh: ok guys so arrengements start

all:yes..

all went to der homes


Nxt day in coll,Kriya is vry happy tat 2mro is

her b'day

kr(se):kya Rey ko mera b'day yaad

Hoga Sharon n gang ko yaad Hoga ya bool Gaye

Sab,sharon taps her by shoulders,kya

hua,Kriya came bak frm d train of thoughts


kr:Kuch nai,I think hame rehearsal Hal Jana hai

sh:(smile)😊yeah..let's go,gang in d rehearsal hal

discussing abt d party den Kriya enter

kr: hey guys

vi:hey Kriya n Sharon r here

kr: guys Tum sab kya discuss kareh

ho

sw:Kuch nai... Kriya hum tho bas aise hi baat

karethe

re:yeah sw is ri8,den Kriya raises her

eyebrows,by tat Rey gives a fake

smile

re:self,m sure baatcutter ko shakh hogaya tat

m hiding something.

meanwhile he gets a msg frm Kriya,Rey meet

him in d Fire Exit right now...

n he text her bck tht

re:no baby abhi tho rehearsals karna hai

na

kr: ok after rehearsals,as rey can't deny her

so he tells yes.

all start rehearsing n after sometime all took

a break

In Fire Exit,

Kr:Rey ap mujhse kuch chupa rahe ho kya

re:no baatcutter mein tumse kya

chupaunga

kr:(exicited) šŸ˜†ok leave it.Rey app ko yaad hai kal

kya hai

re:(in mind)kya bolu ki yaad nahi arhh.. mein

aisa bola tho definitely she'll get angry,or bola

tho gang will kill me,he came frm d thoughts by

her cal,nahi Kriya yaad nai hai ki kal kya hai

kr: huh.. yaad nai hai

re: kyu kal Kuch imp hai kya(chuckles) šŸ˜†

kr:annoyed,Rey I hav smwork byee,n she was

abt to leave wen he pulled her by wrist itni

jaldi jarrahi ho,haa kyu ki mujhe

jaana hai

re:ruko na thodhi der aur.

kr:plzx Rey mujhe Kuch kam yaad aya so let me

go

re:ok,Kriya went off frm der,Rey in d Fire Exit

Kriya m sry I knw mein ne tume hurt kiya bt I

promise tat ye b'day tumhari es birthday spl

b'day Hoga ,n went to d canteen wer d whole

gang was present including Kriya


re:hey guys.

sh:hi rey

kr: sharon mein ghar jarahi hu m nt feeling

wel

Rey n sh: kya hua r u fine

kr:m fine bt I Wana go hme Tum arri ho

sh:haa chelo mein bhi chelti hu.

Krisha: byee guys...

all :bye,Rey knew y she want to go hme,n

felt sad,n thought tat she would be happy Wen

i will surprise her at 12o clock,his train of

thoughts wer cut by swayam

sw: Rey kya tumhara surprise ready

hai

re:ya dude almost hogaya

Vic:tats gr8 dude

re:ok bye guy s hv 2 go n he leaves n all

left.




PRECAP: wht is rey's suprise at 12'0 clock? n

kriya's birthday blast




so guyzz kaisa laga...sry i was little bit late..

hope u'll liked it.do leave ur lovely comments

i'm waiting 2 read every1's response bcozz i

did'nt get gud response frm u'll in d previous

chappy...n okk thn byee!!!!!!!!!😊


-deepsha ā¤ļø




Edited by deepshakriya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
sweet update...waiting 4 kriya's birthday party...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Nice part 😃...
Kriyansh jitni jaldi larte hain utni jaldi sulha bhi kar lete hain šŸ˜†...
Rey keliye kitna mushkil ho raha hoga Kria se sab kuch chupana...
Waiting for Kria's B'day celebration...
Continue soon 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
My lik tab isnt workin so I cudnt lik d update...
Sry!!

Haye.. Sharon plannin a surprise fr kriya.. Awww.. Sissy's love 😊
Kriyaansh ko pta e nai chla tht kb raat k 11 bj gye.. Pyar mei doobe hue th.. Haha 😃
Ufff oo.. Kriya.. Tm b na bot jldi nraz ho jati ho..
Poor Rey.. šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
Wht wud b Rey's surprise.. ???????????

Update soon n tnx fr d pm !
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
awesome update

loved it so very much šŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
great update

loved it so very muchšŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Happy Diwali guyzz hv a safe n happy Diwali

- deepsha <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
all parts r amazing
i loved it...
nxt part soon
do pm

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