ff:forever & always Part 64 pg 123 (19/06/2017) - Page 43

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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww woowww andd woooww!!!!!!! uday proosal wass sooo lovelly!!!!! boys vs grls,hmmm lets see whoo winss!!!!!!!! manyata or uday!!!!! uday and manyata ka wo rmnticcc momentsss,i was jst droolingg oveer itt!!!!!!!!! bt no pecap hayyeee ye kya ho gaya!!!!!!!!!! jaldi se next udpate dena,wait nehi hota!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsomeee...blowsome...full to romentic update...
awww...uday toh kuch kuch hota hai ka SRK ban gaya fill the music...hayeee...love their dance...uday proposed manyata...love it...but vijay bahia aurJ ne sare romence ki band baja di
...manveer last kissiong scene was super...update soon and thanx for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏👏thanks...well done...👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow wow wow wow what an awesome update
Loved it to the core
It was one of my favorites
I really seem to like uday's friend(frgot his name)
J and vijay are so sweet
Awww uday proposed manyata, I was waiting for ths since ages bt it was unexpected
Uday is such a sweetheart
Loved da whole manveer scene
Overall ur update was mind-blowing
I have no words to praise ur work
Da threat still stands so update fast or else... U no na I'm an evil kid so..
And give a precap as I'm losing my patience
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Posted: 12 years ago
do p.m. me didi + awesome and superb update!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks to those who liked the previous part

vgkantu, maaneet786, andy.a, piya77, hans1998, pmpm1, arna753, Fantasyangel, ...navina..., shruti-love, livvy, Chamakchallo30, lilybabes, puggyy, roshni101, swetsurati, adorable_rana, abika, udaymanyata07, pia.raha, MsLuscious, Vasishtha,

thanks to those who commented ur comments really meant a lot for me

@Vasishtha: haha sonam yh u r the first one to comment by reserving the post u naughty girl😆… thank u so much for the wonderful words you used to describe this part😃… haha well yh I do try to keep updates full of manveer sometimes it does have less manveer scenes but cant help it 😳lol haha there is no mistakes coz sometimes I do spell check my work othersie u would see so many mistakes😉😆… aww im glad u liked j and vijay bhai scene and manveer scene… hehe i never knew I would write a kiss scene so well😛. aww thank u so much for liking this ff im happy that ur enjoying it😊… ur welcome sonam…haha will update soon haha even I don't know wts going to happen in the boys vs girls competition 😆😃

@Chamakchallo30: thanks vibha im glad u liked the update😊… ur welcome for the pm… yep dw I wont listen to the basher… I wont stop writing just coz of that one person… awww thanks u so much even though I don't think im one of the good writers but still thanks 😃

@MsLuscious: thanks u Sarah im glad u like it… haha I guess that is called a writers spirit im not going to stop writing just coz of one person😃…. Hehe wow but I wonder wt I don't to her that she is jealous of me and my ff… well the bashers cant write beautifully but the other members in the forum can do…. Yes boss will continue the ff no mater how many haters I get lol 😆😃

@abika: thanks happy that u liked it and ur welcome for the pm 😃

@snowdream: thanks snowy im glad u liked it will update soon 😃

@pwincess_sumi: thanks im glad u liked it and ur welcome for the pm 😃

@adorable_rana: thanks rubaa im glad u liked it… haha yep uv never leaves any chance he is becoming romantic day by day😳😆… lol even im waiting for the competiton as I don't know wt will happen😆… ur welcome for the pm and will update soon 😃

@arna753:thanks Nimrit im glad u liked the previous part and manveer scene will update soon 😃

@pia.raha: thanks pia…. Glad u liked udays proposal😳… lol yep boys vs girls lol even I don't know who is going to win😆… hehe glad u liked manveer romantic moments😳… haha yep no Precap haha dw next update jaldi milein ga 😃

@swetsurati: thanks sweta thanks im glad u liked the update😃…. Haha yep uday has become kuch kuch hota hai ka SRK😆… wow Im glad u liked the dance even though I tried my best in it😊… happy that u liked udays proposing part…. Haha vijay and j r like that and both dragged poor manveer into the competition😆… glad u liked manveer kissing scene😳 will update soon and ur welcome for the pm 😃

@udaymanyata07:thanks im glad u liked this part 😃

@roshni101: thanks roshu glad u liked this part aww im happy u liked it so much😃…hehe udays friends name is rithvi (played by rithvik dhanjani)… lol glad u liked j and vijay sweet… yep udays proposed to manyata hehe even I tried my best with that scene and I also didn't expect it to happen soon😳 haha uday will always be a sweetheart to us😳… glad u liked the manveer scene aww thanks…. Lol the threat will always stand I guess lol ok rosh will update soon otherwise I know u will haunt me down😆 lol yep I know u r a very evil and naughty kid😆😛… haha since im giving a update soon im sure u can wait for it instead of me giving a precap 😉😆

@hans1998: will pm u dear and thanks im glad u liked this part 😃

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Update soon 😊
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Manyata: I don't know how I lose myself to u she said looking at him

Uday: I told u before nobody can escape from yuvraj udayveer singhs charm not even you see u downstairs princess he said leaving a quick peck on her lips once reaching towards the door he turned around and gave a wink to her before leaving once he had gone manyata went towards the mirror and saw her face all red

Manyata: what r u doing to me uday she said slightly touching her lips..

At the dining table

Vijay: hey I just noticed something

J: and wt is that

Vijay: that on the girls side there will be three people which is unnati, m bhai and j bhai

J: so I guess u should have noticed that before vijay bhai

Vijay: yh but on the boys side its only me and uday…. U know wt uday I think we should add someone to our team

Uday: but who

Vijay: hmmm brij uncle he said looking at Brijraj but then dropped the idea…. Actually no we need someone like us…. I know jagat yes jagat…

Uday: r u sure vijay bhai we can think about it again… manyata was trying to control her laugh she knew y uday said that and to tease him a little she interrupted

Manyata: u r right vijay bhai that's not a bad idea to have jagat… she was constantly talking to j and avoiding uday who was sitting on the opposite side staring at her and she exactly knew he was jealous

Vijay: k so decided can anyone give me jagat number

j: I will… oh wait I forgot my phone is in my room wait I will go and get it.. she was about to leave when manyata stopped her

manyata: j I got jagats number ill give it vijay bhai now… j nodded and sat down… she was giving vijay bhai the number and once she said the last digit she saw uday staring at her but she looked down and started to eat her food.

Everyone had their breakfast and the youngsters were sitting in the hall except unnati

Vijay: guys we all r here but where is unnati

Manyata: vijay bhai she has gone to the hospital as she joined today

Vijay: im sorry m bhai he said guiltily while manyata looked at him confusingly

Manyata: for what?

Vijay: for asking about unnati coz then u will remember about the hospital and… but got interrupted by manyata… she got up from the couch and went to sit next him

Manyata: vijay bhai u don't need to say sorry and I made my decision so plz don't think I will be upset if anyone mentions about hospital in fact I will be happy that at least my friend will be there so don't feeling guilty k she said hugging him… they soon broke the hug… manyata was about to get up that she realised her duppata was stuck she slightly turned around and realised that uday (who was sitting next to her on the other side) had got hold of it… so she stayed between vijay bhai and uday …but was trying to release her duppata

J: ill just be back need to get my phone.

Vijay: k well im just going to my room so see u later… both soon left

Uday: so princess wt was that about on the table… he said coming closer to her

Manyata: I don't know wt u r talking about now can u let go of my duppata

Uday: uh-hu I want a proper answer and until u don't give me one I wont let u go manyata turned around but was shocked and uday saw her expression

Manyata: ds u here… erm did u want anything… uday let go of her duppata and turned around but when he did he didn't find anyone there

Uday: princess where is… but he stopped as he turned around and saw manyata had gone… lets see how long u can avoid me princess… he called her and she answered.

Manyata: yes yuvraj sa how can I help you she said giggling

Uday: princess where r u.

Manyata: in my room y?

Uday: u know I am not going to leave u easily

Manyata: well that's if u get me

Uday: I know u have locked ur room and it wont take me a second to break it.

Manyata: tumhein hamri kasam (under my oath) u wont do anything liked that and if ds finds out that the son-in-law tried to break her granddaughter door then im sure she wouldn't be happy

Uday: k princess u gave me oath so I wont but lets see how long u stay in ur room..

Manyata: uday I hope u know the mahal is so big.

Uday: princess try to hide as much as u want but u will have to answer my question. And soon cut the phone… manyata cut the phone and slightly giggled and soon called unnati

Unnati: hey manyata I got another duty soon so ill leave a bit late.

Manyata: k… so how was it

Unnati: it was good bit nervous but I know I will get use to it… right now im on my break..

Manyata: that's nice how r the colleagues over there.

Unnati: they r nice really friendly and same age as us

Manyata: wow that's nice

Unnati: forget about me wt r ur plans for today

Manyata: unnati to be honest I don't know coz right now im in my room hiding from ur dada

Unnati: y r u hiding from dada

Manyata: because when we were on the breakfast table and….. she told about the convo they had on the breakfast table and even the phone convo between her and uday

Unnati: wow manyata by ur talks anyone easily can tell that dada is jealous but he is also possessive

Manyata: I know unnati but u know he always loves to irritate me so i thought let me irritate him… and guess wt

Unnati: wt

Manyata: last night uday proposed to me

Unnati: wow that's awesome but u both r fiancs then how comes

Manyata: well u know we decided that even though our rokha had happened when we were young we want to start everything from the fresh as in from the engagement

Unnati: awww that is so sweet so did u tell anyone about it.

Manyata: not yet but after the competition ends I will tell everyone soon but I need to tell j as u know wt she is like ill tell sia jiji when we tell the elders

Unnati: that's nice well im going to go now break is about to end ill see u soon bye

Manyata: k bye see u soon….

It had been two hours and manyata still didn't come out of her room but wt she didn't know was that uday was not in the mahal as he had to go to the hotel for an urgent meeting

Knock knock!.. manyata turned towards the door

Manyata: who is it…

J: jiji its me

Manyata: j is there anyone else with u.

J: no jiji its only me… manyata moved forward and went to open the door… j came in and sat down on her bed.

Manyata: wt happened

J: nothing I was bored so I thought ill come to u.. I hope im not disturbing u

Manyata: j u can come any time u want u will never disturb me … by the way have u seen uday

J: yh he got some urgent call from the hotel so he had to rush and said he will back asap… manyata took a long breath

Manyata: j since we have nothing to do lets watch a movie

J: not a bad idea

Manyata: is vijay bhai over here or has he gone out

J: oh forgot to tell u vijay bhai went with uday jiju

Manyata: ok come lets choose a movie… both decided to watch a movie and made the room dark by closing the curtain and door and had popcorn and drink… they both had enjoyed the movie which was 3 hours long both were talking about the movie when j got a call on her mobile

J: jiji ill just be back and she moved out the room to answer the phone… manyata opened up the curtains and left the window open and took the dvd out and went towards her desk to tidy up the piles of dvd after few minutes she heard the door close.

Manyata: so j wt do u want to do now... when she didn't get a answer she turned around and was shocked to see uday… the dvd that were in her hand dropped.

Uday: hey princess so finally u can answer my question

Manyata: erm uday j might come in so I think u we should… but got interrupted

Uday: don't worry princess j wont coz I locked the door and she saw me come in before he said leaning forward while manyata leaned backwards.

Manyata: erm uday can we just forgot about this

Uday: y scared that I will hurt ur jagat.

Manyata: k uday im sorry but I was jst trying to make u jealous by mentioning about jagat and u need to know that jagat is only my friend

Uday: and u need to know that I cant see anyone else putting their hands around ur waist or hugging u closely coz only I have the right…

Manyata: uday even vijay bhai hugs me closely then y don't u like it when he does that

Uday: because he is ur brother and jagat is ur friend but manyata u need to know that I cant tolerate anyone close to u

Manyata: uday one day u wont feel insecure about jagat being near me coz u will like him as a friend and that's a promise now can we forget about this please otherwise it may get worse…

Uday: ill try my best but don't get angry if I cant stop my self its just that I get very protective about my close one he said cupping her face manyata nodded with a smile

Manyata: uday tell me more about urself

Uday: wt do u want to know.

Manyata: everything ..

uday nodded and told her things about him and even she done the same… they both were still talking and while talking manyata hair was coming on her face because of the wind and uday had the temptation to move it away and after few minutes he did… when manyata felt his fingers tucking her hair behind her ears and slightly touch her face she stopped speaking and closed her eyes… uday noticed her reaction and smirked and continued to rub her face with his fingers

uday: wt happened princess y did u stop speaking…

manyata: wo… erm… noth…nothing

uday: if its nothing then r u stammering and y r ur eyes closed…

manyata: coz ur having a weird effect on me…. Uday smirked at her answer and manyata shot her eyes open as she realised wt she said

uday: so wt type of effect princess… manyata looked at him embarrassingly

manyata: nothing erm I think someone is calling me… before uday could get her she opened the door and ran our of the room

Precap: competition begins

Hey guys well I was not planning to update today but rosh (roshini101) actually threatened me that she will hunt me down if I don't so I had no choice other than to update so this part has been updated coz of her otherwise she will hunt me down with loads of pm so hope u like it and do leave ur comments and don't forget to press the like button sorry for any spelling or grammar mistake and yes lol i know this part is kind of short and thanks for ur comments for the previous part it meant a lot to me and thanks to those who also pressed the like button i have replied to ur comments on page 61.

Ps: if anyone needs pm do write it in ur comment or send me a pm and I will add u

If ur not interested then please let me so so that I can stop sending u pm and it will save both of our times thanks

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum loved it ... thnxx fr the pm continue soon .. :):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
soo cute you should put more of jagat and manyata its soo funny when uday is jealouse :) !!!!!!!!!

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