fan fic ..bhoomica khana and kripa goenka

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi guyz ............

iam not new here but iam trying to write mine fiction...guyz ager koi mistrek ho jay to plz maaf ker dena......b/c main abhi choty ho na😕😕😕

here i introduced 2 famlies

1:- khana family:-Mr khana (i dont know angad's father name),naina khana,bhoomica khana and angad khana.(bhoomi angad ki younger sis hay)

2:-goenka family:-Sidhart goeka,shakuntla goenka,arjun gonka and kripa goinka (kripa arjun ki younger sis hay)

First scene:-kripa says

k-plz plz big b meray piaray big b ajj angad ka concert hay plz mujhay lay chalooo plzzzzzzzzz

A-krips plz mujhay tang mat karo mujhay yeh important files dekhni hay plz jao yahan say.

k-nahin app ko mujhay lay ker jana hi ho ga werna main papa ko batadon gi kay kul app kahan thay aur kiss kay sath tha😛

A- krips tum nahin sudhroo gi na

K- kubhi bhi nahin ...batao mujhay lay ker ja ahay ho ya jaon papa kay pass...

A- ok black maller lurki ja rahan ho jao tum tiar ho jao

K-thak u big b

in the car

k- pata hay big b ajj angad aik new girl kay sath perform ker raha hay aur sunay main aaya hay kay uss lurki ki awaz bohut achi hay

A- to yeh tum mujhay kyun bata rahi ho mujhay pata hay tum wahan specialy angad kay liy ja rahi ho

k -hmm app say to bat kerna hi fazool hay

IN concert hall

mr rock star angad khana ki entery

n the new face is one n only bhomica khana...thy both r perform on chuska (kiya kool hay hum)kripa to angad ko enjoy ker hi rahi hoty hay per bhomi ka performance dekh ker arjun😛😛😛

A- main nay aysii beauty kahin nahin dekhi(guyz main app logo ko yeh batana hi bhool gai kay in my fiction arjun is also lil bit flerty)

in end the show angad introduce his lil sis bhoomika khana

hope guyz appp logo ko pasand aay .......ager responce mila to continue karon gi werna nahin

pinky shah (a bigest fan of kyph and saarrthi)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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yah nice work pls. continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
#3
very nice ff ,plz update da next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#4
good job........plzzzzzzzzzz cont 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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IT IS AWSOME PLZ KEEP ON POASTINGIT IS DAM FABULOUS PLZ KEEP ON POASTING
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its really nice.post next part .........soooonnnnn......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Pl Continue this in the fan fic section and Pm tina or hetal the link
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